Date: 08/15/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I see, I supose that does answer my question.
Once again, fantastic job.
Date: 07/08/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it a lot.
It leaves quite a bit to the imagination. just discripitive enough, yet vague enough to paint a picture.
One thing I do wish you had put in there was a definate yes or no suicide, he could have killed himself in that way.
Or the way that he had lived or something to that effect.
If he had killed himself then it can have a diffrent twist like, how he wondered how he couldnt see what a good person he had....
know what I mean? I could just be blowing air out my nose.
I did like the ending though, how he stayed because that was the least thing he could do.
A good little fic I think!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you liked it :) There's no suicide... I'm not really sure what you mean, but I'll try to explain myself, I think. I always imagined the story to go something like this: Bill has died, leaving a heartbroken Tom behind to live on, unknowing of the fact that his brother's ghost is watching over him and (tragically) also waiting for Tom to join him. Tom doesn't know it yet, but he is sick (no specific desease, could be anything from cancer to heartbreak, anything imaginable) and is going to die in a not too distant future. Probably. It's all open to interpretation, which is pretty much the idea, and the reason I didn't use names at all. I find it more interesting when the reader of the story has the freedom to create their own images and ideas. It could be Gustav and Georg, og Tom and Gustav and so on. It could be anyone in the world. The sky is the limit :)rnrnIf this doesn't answer your question, just write me again :)rnrnLove Chris
Date: 03/18/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh Gosh, there's a massive lump in my throat... heartbreaking ç_ç the most beautiful thing was that you couldn't understand which one was the ghost, so well written!! Compliments.
Author's Response: *smiles* I'm seriously glad to hear you say that about the story, since its one of the things I love about writing - you can really play with the way a story can be interpreted just by letting a few things be unsaid :) Thank you so much <3
Date: 02/12/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
No, you didn't upset me too much. I got more upset by a fic in which Bill said: "No tears, Tomi, no tears. I want to die seeing you smile"
I really cried because of that sentence and it's still in my head. But I kinda liked this one. They're both silent, you know, they don't really say things like "I want to die" or "I miss you too much" and those are the things I can't stand. And hey, I read this on my own risk, I don't blame you for anything. I could have stopped reading, but I didn't. Actually, I'm really happy you wrote this. It's so beautiful. It kinda makes me feel like I have such a 'soulmate' too, who looks after me and stuff. And that's... comforting.
Author's Response: Yeah, dialoque is not really much my thing, I always feel like it gets too sappy and emotional so quickly, but I'm happy to hear that it works out fine anyway ;) I was happy to write it, any time! <3
Date: 02/11/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
*cries*
I get really emotional by stories like this. But I like it. By reading stuff like this, I feel a bit better. I mean, this isn't happening to me, so I shouldn't be sad, right?
I'm really, really, really happy that this isn't happening for real. I bet the one who lives will die of sorrow. But still, it's so beautiful. I only wished I could help him, you know. Like feeling the other one, seeing him and have contact with him, so they both know the other is doing fine... I really wish I could.
Author's Response: That's true - luckily this is all just fiction :) I do think that I must be hard for identical twins when one dies and the other doesn't... I think the relationship between two siblings that are so close is hard for anyone to fully understand. You are so sweet, wanting to help him like that! The positive thing is that they will be together soon, but they will no longer be alive (which is bad). I hope I didn't upset you too much ;) Love Chris
Date: 02/07/08 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful and just breathtaking :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you :) It means a lot! <3 Chris
Date: 01/14/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will kill you, gal. I will.
Why do you do this to me?! T^T How I wish I didn't find this site.
No, no! *smacks self* Bad Kia! Bad Kia!
^^" If I hadn't foudn this site, I wouldn't have found your creations. (Which I truly do adore.)
You're stories are... Emotional. (Is there any other word to describe it? Other than the following few:) It's amazing, spectaculour(sp), will keep me awake tonight (:[), andsoamazingthatihaveranoutofwords! ^-^
I mean it, doll. I mean, wow. I mean, at first I thought that it was Tom that was a ghost and asleep and that Bill was able to see him and all, but then I read further and you get it. (Though it seems that it's always Bill that has to be dead in my mind. xD)
I love how your stories have me thinking. (And just when I was starting to think normally! >.
Author's Response: *hides so Kia won't kill me* I'm really glad you liked this story, and I'm beginning to wonder if you'll leave me great reviews like this one on all my stories :D I had a review from Froekie saying that she wrote a story like this (I know the title, but I don't see how they are similar other than the fact that there are ghosts involved) and I don't quite know what to read into it... I haven't really given much thought as to who of them is dead, they kind of work like a single unit in my mind, like one person with two halves :) But I suppose it could be 'fun' if it was Tom for a change, and not Bill... The funny thing, though, is to interpret the story into your own univers while reading, so feel free to think anything you like! At the rate I'm going, you'll never be thinking normally! *laughs* Anyway... You've earned a break, so I'll try not to write anything the next couple of days *laughs even more* I'll just write on some of the things that aren't about TH and can't be posted here... <3 Chris
Date: 01/13/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. It's very touching and sad, and...yeah. It made me tear up lol
Good job :)
Author's Response: I make people tear up, it's my thing *nods* Ask anyone, seriuosly! *laughs* But I'm glad you liked it, nice to know that someone out there appreciates my lively imagination! <3 Chris
Date: 01/13/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
It wasn't weird. This story is beautiful. I love it!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you *smoothes*