Date: 08/24/10 09:30 am Title: Once Apon An Alcoholic Time
Ohh. So maybe Bill has some hidden feelings for Tom that he can't remember right now. Or, maybe Bill is just a horny drunk. ;D
Still, now that I know Tom had feelings for Bill in the first place, I think that might make Bill freak out even more later on... :/
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews (:
Date: 08/24/10 09:26 am Title: Touches & Trust
The last three sentences give me the hope that Bill will try to tell Tom what he did. =)
Date: 08/24/10 09:11 am Title: Confrontation & Panic
The title of this chapter made me think that maybe Tom would find out about the rape. Since he didn't, I'm just glad that he knows about how he punched Bill, even if he doesn't yet know why...
Date: 08/24/10 09:02 am Title: Black Hair Girl
I think Bill's going to have a very difficult time of keeping his rape a secret. I mean, one of the first things he did was scream when he saw Tom naked, and he's acting a bit paranoid. I just wonder how everything's going to pan out and what will happen if Tom does find out. *Is concerned for Bill*
Date: 08/24/10 08:52 am Title: Alcohol & The Unimaginable.
On the contrary!! I think that your writing was very well done! I really enjoy how you add the last line of suspense, "I didn't know which was worse: him remembering what happened or him forgetting." It's sad and a bit creepy, and it really drawls the reader into the story. :)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you! Your review was so nice!
Date: 08/24/10 06:43 am Title: A Fucked Up Situation Indeed.
I hope next update will come sooner. :)
Author's Response: Haha me too :)
Date: 08/24/10 04:26 am Title: A Fucked Up Situation Indeed.
Glad you know where you are taking this again. thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Ha yes me too! Thanks :]
Date: 08/22/10 01:29 am Title: Alcohol & The Unimaginable.
I know the picture! I have it! lol, this is awesome, please continue!
Author's Response: Ah the picture. Yes. that was really something eh? *shudders*
Date: 05/26/10 01:22 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
This is really good! : D
I really want to read more.
I love the story. : D It's really interesting.
When you're gonna add more? : )
I'm so waiting!!!
Author's Response: Haha sorry! The next chapter will be in a day or so. For reasons why please see the previous review :P
Date: 04/26/10 01:12 am Title: Comfort & Apologies
chapter 9, please?
pretty, pretty pleaseeeeeeeeee? ^^
Author's Response: Sorry! I put this on hiatus because I couldn't figure a way to finish it but I've got it and I'm back to writing! And since I'll be back in school I'll have a lot of time in class to ignore the teacher and write XD
Date: 01/21/10 06:06 am Title: Comfort & Apologies
thumbs UP! :) bill was so sweet~
Author's Response: Aw thanks.
Date: 01/18/10 10:52 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
I like this chapter. It is filler but it's interesting and important filler. I'm itching for an update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/03/10 09:58 am Title: Comfort & Apologies
I think that goerg didn't take is very seriously.... :S
Author's Response: Aw why's that?
Date: 12/29/09 08:39 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
Not bad at all. I think its sweet in a way. I do really want to know how tom is handling this from his pov now. I'm glad you have been writing from both. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Awww that you!
Date: 12/29/09 08:36 pm Title: Confessions & Tears
i don't think switch pov was bad, your right, it was kind of necessary. (Disgusted, not discusted)
Author's Response: Ha thanks! And I meant to say 'thank' not 'that' on the review above this one
Date: 12/25/09 07:04 pm Title: Alcohol & The Unimaginable.
...now that I think about it maybe the things do not happen too quickly afterall :--DD it's just that the chapters are short. And I'm happy Tom got to know. But GEORG WTF and Gustav D:: stuuupiiid Bill how do you think you can ever live this down now that there is someone always remainding of the shitty event?! >___>
Author's Response: Oh okay! Lol and sorry if you don't like that they know now! D:
Date: 12/25/09 07:00 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
Well~ the story totally hooked me but 1)the chapters are WAY too short 2)everything happens so quickly
3)there is some spelling errors.
But mainly I like it! And I hope to get that undrunken twincest soon ;)
Author's Response: Lol thanks! And 1-Yeah I Know :( But I'll Explain Why They're So Short Later... 2-Sorry! I Didn't Think About That! & 3-Yeah I Suuuuuck At Spelling. Lol But Thanks!
Date: 12/24/09 09:57 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
I LOVE IT! MORE!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/23/09 05:22 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
i loved it thats what i was waiting for so i loved it all
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you weren't disappointed!
Date: 12/23/09 04:07 pm Title: Comfort & Apologies
love
Author's Response: Thank you!