Date: 08/10/07 12:56 pm Title: huit.
D:> noooo bill :(
it was so unfair...
on tuesday... i wasnt allowed on. and wanting to read this update was killing me.
finally i did.
OMG pleaaaase update sooooon. D:>
Date: 08/10/07 03:35 am Title: huit.
So far so gooda281;Keep goinga292;girla281;
wella292;I guesses that Bill had been sexually abuseda292;and chapter8 approved my conjecture==a288;God I’m a bad girla289;
Excellent plot and smooth languagez90;And I like this AU settlinga292;a silent Bill and it just f**king makes him more charisamtica281;
I‘m just thinking of translating it into chinese and post it in our forumz90;yes here got lots of good fanficsa292;but most of them are too hota288;my nose bleedinga289;a292;the administrator might kill me for posting sthz90; like thata306;a289;
Date: 08/09/07 05:48 am Title: huit.
That was definitely not bad! ...Especially at the end. I get panic attacks once in a blue moon and that whole shower scene felt really really familiar. >.<
The only grammatical thing you do that bothers me a tiny bit is when you list a proper noun and then refer to it with a pronoun right away. (ex: "Bill, he") ...Not to be rude! ...just saying. :)
Anyway! MOAR NOWWWWW PLSSS! -I mean! I really enjoy this fic and can't wait to see where you go from here! Thanks!
Author's Response: rofl it's a habit, sorry. I mostly wrote fan fiction about FBR bands and for some reason, everyone wrote them like that, and I just picked it up :]
Date: 08/09/07 02:30 am Title: un.
OMG!!!!! i love this story... tom is so sweet :P... poor bill though... pls continue
Date: 08/08/07 03:15 pm Title: un.
Ahhh now I understand u.u I just didn't get how Tom knew it and ran into the bathroom right in that moment..
Anyway, as I always said.. can't wait for more *-*
Author's Response: Wellll Tom was gonna go check on him anyway since he ran away and stuff.
Date: 08/08/07 10:44 am Title: huit.
... i din't understand the scene in the bathroom.. at all é.è can you explain it to me please??
Anyway I didn't find it that bad! Only a little short =) but finally we know what's in that damn drawer! xD
*waiting for the explanation*
Author's Response: ... what's not to understand O_o Bill was having something like a panic attack and Tom was trying to calm him down
Date: 08/08/07 10:21 am Title: huit.
It's not bad. I love this story :)
Date: 08/08/07 01:50 am Title: huit.
no way... this is so not bad... its amazing... pls continue
Date: 08/07/07 10:54 pm Title: un.
this chapter was so worth the wait.
i have no idea what to think. this is mind blowing.
Date: 08/07/07 10:53 pm Title: huit.
ohh,poor Billy...
Date: 08/07/07 10:08 pm Title: huit.
I just found this lovely story today, so when I came back to find some more to read I was so happy when I saw that you had updated sooo quickly! Thank you and update soon. I really like this!!!!
Date: 08/07/07 09:01 pm Title: huit.
O.O
OH ..My ..GOD!!!
..more.. more moooore!!
Date: 08/07/07 06:55 pm Title: huit.
oh my god.
this is really good! get rid of that end note. it is amazing!!
Date: 08/07/07 06:52 pm Title: huit.
It's not bad.
HUSH!
It's amazing.
I lub you, Voli - Chan.
Date: 08/07/07 06:41 pm Title: huit.
I as you can tell NO one thinks its bad!
its really good!
its a little short and I would have like if it there was a little more but its a really good fic.
keep going and I know a lot of people (and me) can't wait for more.
Date: 08/07/07 05:14 pm Title: huit.
psssh, bad? it's not bad! it's REALLY great!
right now i'm just wondering what rewriting it would've done. it's already kick-ass!
Date: 08/07/07 03:42 pm Title: huit.
i dont think its was Bad. i think its was great. so sad tho. and i still cant for more... :D i really love this story.