Date: 11/14/09 05:25 am Title: Chapter 5
That bit about Bill's mom was so sad! The kiss was beautiful and hot. And the magic Bill did was awesome! Not too out there. It makes sense that if sex gives Bill energy, the magic he'd be able to do would be energy-related;like powering a stereo.
Date: 11/13/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, I'm glad to see that the two are getting closer and have found something in common. And I'm also glad we finally got to see some of Bill's magic.
Date: 11/13/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Flipping fantastic!! Ugh, this is just so different, new and exciting. I LOVE seeing that little "NEW" lit up beside the title, lol. Can't wait for more!
Date: 11/13/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
I've been avoiding reading this fic for the longest time, because I knew that I didn't want to read it until there were at least 5 chapters; I had a feeling that if there was only one or two chapters, I'd be absolutely miserable waiting for more lol.
And OMG, I was right! I LOVE this so much, and read it all the way through, and as soon as I realized that there's no next button, I litterally whined out loud. XD You have such a beautiful, unique way of writing and it just draws you straight in. I absolutely love it, and I can't say that enough.
Enjoy your holidaay. I'll be waiting [as] patiently [as I can manage] for the next update! lol
Date: 11/13/09 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
that week is gonna kill me! gah! this story is super fantastic.
Date: 11/13/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awwww!!!! I love Bill in this story!!!!
Date: 11/13/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is totally amazing.
Date: 11/13/09 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
holy whoa bill is awesome
Date: 11/13/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to review again, because I think this chapter was probably the best one so far in this great apocalyptic, poetic and still cruely realistic story. Previous chapters were kind of showing the erotic side of danachi, but here you managed to create a really deep, wonderful personality for Bill. I think the structure here works very well.
A danachi is a very fascinating creature and I wonder where you've got the idea of it. Bill is a PERFECT model for a danachi. He just IS one. The sensitivity here, shared experiences with Tom, beauty of this all, necklace... This chapter was both very touching and important for the plotline.
I can't tell, what is so fascinating in this story, but I like this universe a lot. It reminds me of The Stand by S.King, Resident Evil and several other products of fiction, but yet it's still original becase of the danachi. It's depressing world, but still somehow emotional. Bittersweet I guess.
Very sweet, touching and magical chapter (and fic). Wonderful AU. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
Date: 11/13/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, you have got me completely hooked on this fic:)
Date: 11/13/09 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw :D This chapter is my fav so far :D
Date: 11/13/09 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Honestly I was really hoping for a sex scene. But no you had to go and give us more plot. You and your need to further the story. ppphh! I really like learning about danachi. I like that Bill and Tom's lives parrell each others. I know that Bill is staying with Tom for a reason I just can't figure it out yet. There is something a solid reason why, I just need a few more pieces to put it together. Lovely update, thank you!
Date: 11/13/09 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was a cute chapter it's sad knowing the story of the guys moms this story kinda reminds me of I am legend
Date: 11/13/09 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw, for some reason the image of Bill laughing on the floor is the sweetest thing. And I'm so glad there was finally physical contact!
Date: 11/13/09 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lol...the last bit was so cool. XD
Date: 11/13/09 11:19 am Title: Chapter 5
I love it! The part with their mothers was quite sad... having loved ones taken away like that. :/
On the other hand, they had their first kiss. Aww.
Date: 11/13/09 11:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Haha I love the opening line :p
and finally, a kiss! Though I wish Tom would just have his way with him already, I like that you're taking it slow. It makes it more realistic and makes us want it more, of course :p Though I can't wait to see what else Bill can do!
Date: 11/13/09 11:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Magic, he says! And I agree! <333
Date: 11/13/09 10:59 am Title: Chapter 5
That's been my new catch phrase!
Everywhere I go, I wiggle my fingers, put on a smirk and say, "MAGIC!"
Date: 11/13/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 5
*SQQQUUUUEEEEEE* I'm just so happy they kissed XDD