Date: 11/25/09 09:48 am Title: Chapter 7
I loved it :D I hope you continue soon!! :D
xx Chi ^^
Date: 11/25/09 09:43 am Title: Chapter 7
aww i love to see them together...i'm a little worried that someone from the base might hurt bill...hm georg is jealous..thanks for the update
Date: 11/25/09 09:14 am Title: Chapter 7
Ugh their sex scenes are always so hot and sexy
Date: 11/25/09 09:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Wait not only it is the magic of the danachi gut the energy that he takes from tom right? I do not know were your story is going I hope to see them together and in love, and because of being in love make bill pregnant pretty please...love your story its so sexy and magicall =)
Date: 11/25/09 08:49 am Title: Chapter 7
That was amazing! Bill really does have magik. That's so cool.
There's something more going on between Bill adn Tom than just sex and magik. I'm not totally sure what it is, from either of them, but I know I'd like to know for sure what it is.
Date: 11/25/09 08:38 am Title: Chapter 7
Jealous and protective Tom is go great! And I reallylikehow their relationship is progressing. Bill's line about not wanting their attraction to be because of magic but because they want each other is very telling and an interesting turn. Can't wait for more!
Date: 11/25/09 08:15 am Title: Chapter 7
This just gets better and better. I love how things are developing between them - not just the sex ( though that's pretty awesome, lol ) but their relationship in general.
The car scene was *___* I can actually picture it spluttering to life under Bill, lol. I don't know, I'm rubbish with words and can't seem to say what I mean. But, to sum up - this fic is AMAZING!
Date: 11/25/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 7
As much as I enjoy the sexy bits (and I definitely do), it's nice to see them interacting with clothes on. You're doing a nice job building the intimacy between them.
Date: 11/25/09 06:22 am Title: Chapter 7
omg, I loved this chapter! It's so cute and hot at the same time!
And the car, omg the car! xD
I'm curious about how their relationship is going to evolve... Tom being so jealous and possessive... sounds like he's falling in love. :)
Great job... and please update soon. -danachi eyes-
Date: 11/25/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Each chapter is better and better! I love how Bill's magic can 'bring things to life'. Its such an original idea.
Date: 11/24/09 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
YAY! Finally! I'm so excited they got together. Wonderful job. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 11/24/09 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love it ^^ so really good story i love it i whant more ^^
Date: 11/24/09 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Its about time Tom gave in. I don't know if I could resist a Bill danachi for as long as he did.
Date: 11/24/09 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this. I really don't know how to explain it lol. It's just....so amazingly written and perfect. I love the whole nympho Bill thing. I want a danachi now. It would be well "fed" and taken care of....especially a Bill danachi. I'm dying to know more about the danachi species and what Tomi is gonna do when Bill is ready to go to that colony with his own kind. Or perhaps he will change his mind? I can't wait to read more of this. And the sex was perfect.
*hugs & kisses*
Fragile.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you're liking it :)
Date: 11/23/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
The last line made me laugh but really good chapter
Author's Response: haah thanks
Date: 11/23/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this!!! :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: there will be an update in a couple of days :)
Date: 11/23/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha. Poor Tom. I just love that last line, it's fantastic. In fact, I just love the whole thing :D
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 11/23/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
the waiting felt longer than it really was O.O
but im so glad you're back :)
i love this fic. i just love it.
Author's Response: thank you! <3
Date: 11/23/09 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
There were a few typos but the hot sex made up for it of course.
Author's Response: oops... anything major?
Date: 11/23/09 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
This was awesome. *_*
Author's Response: thanks :)