Date: 11/29/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
NOOOES CLIFFY DXXX
need more this is awsom
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 11/29/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahhh! I'm so excited for the next part now. I actually loved this cliffhanger, it was perfect :)
Author's Response: thanks! Someone who likes the cliffhanger! :D
Date: 11/29/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
i am amazed at your ability to write every single time i read one of your stories. you are incredible. good job.
Author's Response: aw, thank you :)
Date: 11/29/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh no. A problem? WHat is it? Is it bad? Has someone come back for Bill? Are those weird creature things there, or whatever they are? Gah, this is gonna haunt me for a bit.
I love the way Tom and Bill interact with each other. There's something almost otherworldly about it, and not just because Bill is a creature of magik.
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 11/29/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
OH MY GOD CLIFFHANGER MUCH?!xD
LOVE LOVE LOVE this! i was s n edge the whole time i was reading this chapter!
OHMYGOSH i SO wanna know what the prblemo is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEp!!!!1
I actually cannot friggin' wait for the next updaye!!! congrats on the feature if i ailed t mention it before!!! xxx
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 11/29/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm happy to see it featured too, I really love this story :) I wonder what the problem is, though D: I hope nothing bad happens to Bill :((
Author's Response: hope the cliffhanger wasn't too much, thank you :)
Date: 11/29/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
Intriguing, interesting, unusual. =)
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 11/29/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
"We've got a problem" has never been a good line.
>_<
But shit, I wasn't breathing when they were out on the sand either. WTF WAS THAT??? And awwwwwwwww, Bill was protecting them. <3333333333333333
Author's Response: eeeek but a good line for a cliffhanger! XD
Date: 11/29/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
You shouldn't be surprised to see this featured - it's one of the very best fics on the site, imo :)
I really love this chapter so much. Firstly, Tom and Bill's developing relationship, just gets cuter and cuter. There's a real bond forming between them, that goes beyond sex and sexual attraction ( not that the sex side isn't thoroughly enjoyable too, lol! ).
Secondly, this whole fic has such a 'real' feel to it. The characters and the environment you have created are completely believable, and the desert scene, where Bill hid them from that creature, was so tense, and scary.
And what a cliff hanger! I'm worried something has happened and they ( not Tom, but the others ) are gonna blame Bill :(
I always feel as though my reviews don't really do this fic justice, but I can't praise it enough. I love it, and as soon as I've finished reading a chapter, I want the next one, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment, I really appreciate it and I'm so happy you're liking it.
Date: 11/29/09 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg I was bouncing in my seat when I saw that you had updated. Lame I know. :P I check everyday to see if you've updated. I LOVE this story!
It was creepy though, the thing that was out there with them in this chapter, when Tom went for Bill. Kinda curious about what it was and if your going to bring more stuff like that in.
I'm glad Bill doesn't want to go. I like thier relationship, but who knows what your going to do right? :) Guess we have to see, though hopfully nothing bad.
Thanxs so much for updating!! Hope you can again soon...before I go nuts!! :D
Hugs,
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comment
Date: 11/29/09 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love how Bill was trying not to be a burden, getting the leaves and all (as if having copious amounts of Bill sex could ever be a burden). And he was embarassed about it too! So sweet. And I love how Tom's like, "don't worry Bill, I'll give you what you need." Yeah he will!
So why's the desert dangerous? Are there zombies? And what was that animal thing?
Can't wait to see what the problem is.
Author's Response: You should find out more why the desert is dangerous in the next chapter :)
Date: 11/29/09 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Okay, just finished reading what's here so far. . . love it :) Can't wait to see where you go from here. I really like how you're kinda slowly revealing with denachi can be/do, and how the relationship between Bill and Tom is growing--wondering what the problem is now *waits impatiently*
Author's Response: thanks so much :)
Date: 11/29/09 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved this chap!!! Goshy, what now O.O I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: updated! and thank you :)
Date: 11/29/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, this is really good. It deserves to be featured. I would've if it wasn't already.
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 11/29/09 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
oohhhh deary me.
b
very good. you broke the mold with this one.
i like it alot and keep up the great work!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 11/29/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
Very mysterious, intriguing chapter. I was so uncomfortable when they heard the weird noises in the first part. That was scaring. D:
What Bill did was so foolish but sweet at the same time, that made me smile. It's cute to see he has insecurities when it comes to Tom, it seems. I hope we'll know more about that.
And I think he's starting to realize that Tom likes him.
Anyway, they're really sweet together! :D
Now, I'm nervous about the 'problem' Georg mentioned. D:
Please update soon!!!!
This story is fantastic! I'm addicted :)
Author's Response: thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it :)
Date: 11/29/09 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
This chapter was amazing. I loved the whole thing, especially the scene where Bill hides Tom using his powers and then when Bill admits why he left. The whole premise behind this fic is such an interesting concept and only you could write it this brilliantly. I can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: thanks :) it means so much that you're liking it
Date: 11/29/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, that was so intense!
I really really loved it. Please go on. :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 11/29/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, the scene outside was really intense! And it seems that Tom is becoming more and more attached to Bill, it's so cute! :')
Thanks for this chapter :)
Author's Response: You're welcome! and thanks for your comment :)
Date: 11/29/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
aww they're so sweet!
uh oh what is the problem...update soon
Author's Response: :)