Date: 12/01/09 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh hurry up and post the next chap please!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat here ^_^
Author's Response: Updated! :P
Date: 12/01/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow, this danachi is a freak. :D
Date: 12/01/09 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
buh buh buhhhhh
Author's Response: :)
Date: 12/01/09 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
OH My... Your story is fantastic!!!
want more...:-(
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/01/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
im hooked! keep it comin!
Author's Response: Don't worry, more is coming!
Date: 12/01/09 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
im hooked! keep it comin!
Date: 12/01/09 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful chapter, though I'll admit I'm not too excited about the cliff hanger because now I'll have to wait for the next update to find out what is going on. I really like the story though it's original and fascinating. I'll be looking forward to the next chater
Author's Response: Hopefully the wait isn't too long for you ;) thanks for your comment
Date: 12/01/09 11:34 am Title: Chapter 8
You have me addicted. I'm in love with this story, please dont stop writing!
Date: 12/01/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 8
Here comes the trouble, hahaha.
Awesome chapter, seriously - I couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen!! =}
Can't wait to find out what the problem is, and a little more about that creepy sounding creature...*chills*
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/01/09 02:52 am Title: Chapter 8
ohhh myyyyy goddd.... *shakes* YUMYUMYUMYUM!!! this is UNBELIEVABLY delicious!! I am incredibly happy that i saw it, because DAYUM, its an AMAZING story!!!! *big wide puppy eyes* more...PLEASE?? *blinks cravingly*
Author's Response: yes more :)
Date: 12/01/09 12:30 am Title: Chapter 8
Tom getting worried at the Communication stations is making me worried. I’m getting nervous for them. Why isn’t Bill worried? Does he not know to be worried? Or can he protect himself? Or is Tom worried enough for both of them.
I like that Tom didn’t want to ask Bill for help, that he was going to try and fix it without help. Tom’s a good guy.
First panicked thought…Bill has finally left.
Second panicked thought…what the fuck was that?
How do the leaves help? And why does he want to stop the cravings for sex?
“You don’t... you don’t want to go, do you?”
Bill shook his head. “No.” – hum? I’m just not sure about this. Why doesn’t Bill want to go? What about Tom is keeping him there?
A problem? Yeah a cliff hanger, that’s our problem, tttbbbppphh!
Author's Response: Bill wants to stop the craving for sex because he feels bad demanding that from Tom all the time.
Date: 11/30/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
this story is the BEST
EVER! ^_^
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 11/30/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
Where Bill said he wanted to go outside I was sure he wanted to escape.
Awe Tomi so cute trying to protect Bill.
Why is Bill so interested in the car? Is this what he’s going to use to escape? Could the car run on magic alone? How quickly would that drain Bill of his energy?
Date: 11/30/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh and interspecies sex was really cool. I loved how it was different and the same. I liked that Bill controlled the sex even when Tom was the one fucking Bill. I liked that Bill could hold off Tom’s orgasm so he could get what he needed from Tom. I wonder how that works. We well get a bio lesson later? Is this the only reason why Bill is still there? Does he need a feeding or two and then he’ll be fine and just go?
Date: 11/30/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
Firstly OMG so fucking hot! Secondly it was hot because of the details, the descriptions the word choices. There were some incredible lines. I really liked this one: “I can smell you, you want it so bad. I can taste it. It’s in your sweat. It’s dripping from your skin.” It was descriptive and succinct and had awesome word choice. Once again I'm impressed with your amazing writing skills.
Date: 11/30/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
D:
What kind of cliffhanger is that? D:
How could you leave us hanging like that? D:
What happened?
WHAT'S THE PROBLEM???? D;
Ugh Great Update. D;
Pleasepleaseplease more when you can. D:
Author's Response: eeek every story needs a cliffhanger or two!
Date: 11/30/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
This was so cute =] Especially when Bill told Tom why he needed the leaves. He's so sweet.
But...*bites fingernails* I hope the problem, whatever it is, isn't TOO bad.
;_;
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 11/30/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh, oh, cliff hanger, cliff hanger...
This story is so well written=)
Author's Response: we all need a cliffhanger now and then XD and thank you
Date: 11/30/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
AW. I love this chapter!
I wonder what's the problem o.o
Author's Response: thank you!