Date: 12/02/09 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
im hook ! keep it comin!
Date: 12/02/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
uff...i can't shake this bad feeling about something bad happening to tom...i hope i'm wrong.
great chapter...update soon!
Date: 12/02/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
i love it more and more ^^
Date: 12/02/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Lol, just read the review before me and I had the same thought while reading--Bill's going to be kind of sex-deprived by the time Tom get's back, huh? >:D But I liked this chapter a lot--the way you describe the infection is so scary.
Date: 12/02/09 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm, I really don't like the way Georg is talking to Bill. It looks like he doesn't like Bill very much anymore. Bill was right. ;)
I hope Georg won't be of any trouble later. D:
The Tom/Bill scene was so sweet! :D
I loved it! Especially this part: "Tom leaned forward and pressed his forehead against the danachi’s for a moment, feeling Bill’s breath dust against his face. He lifted his hands to stroke Bill’s cheeks lightly then kissed him." So cute! :3
One day and a half? Hmmmmmmmm Bill's gonna need some sex, isn't he? (and some love too! emotionally speaking :3 )
And this story is really getting scarier and scarier too! D:
I love it! Keep up the good work! And please update soon... ;-;
I forgot: I hope nothing bad will happen to Bill, all alone in the base... Poor little thing ;-;
Date: 12/02/09 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so freaking amazing. It's like watching all of my favorite zombie apocalypse movies. I live for this kind of shit!
The details are amazing. I know about this disease through, flashbacks and Doctor Gustav’s information. I fear for all of the characters but mostly Tom. The pace of this chapter has my heart pounding. I’m so nervous and worried something is going to happen. I know killing this one lone infected is not the end, this is just the one that was left. There’s something else out there I’m sure.
Date: 12/02/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved it!!! (the pictures as well ^^) I hope you continue soon O.O
xx Chi!
Date: 12/02/09 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
*blink-blink* Wow...
I never thought I would ever get to this point with a story 'cause I always like to have something to say but... I'm literally speachless.. O-O This is simply breath-taking and I just really wanna keep reading and reading and then read some more, just to know what will happen next! =D I want to win a ticket inside your head and just see what happens next in the story! :)
When I read this I really feel as if I'm inside a thriller science-fiction movie! And I keep expecting that whenever I'll open my door and a desert will appear in front of me with disseased people and stuff.. x) That's how much you make us readers get inside the story! :)
xx
Date: 12/02/09 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is my first time going along for the ride on one of your stories, right from the beginning. It's fuckin' fun and I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'd love to know where you got your inspiration from for the danachi.
Date: 12/02/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love how you write the action scenes! Post-apocolyptic virus/zombie themes are a personal favorite so I love what's happening so far!
Date: 12/02/09 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
AWESOME -i was eating pizza while reading and when it got to the lil search party bit i had my mouth open and pizza slice hovering just reading and looking like a fish xD AWESOME chapter! so much action!!! so geil <3
Date: 12/02/09 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, just wow! This is easily my favorite ever ToHo fic.
Last chapter I kept imagining the thing in the desert as some kinda huge-ass monster. Now that I know what it actually WAS it's like ten times as horrifying to think about that scene.
Tom better not end up getting infected. >_> I will seriously cry. You don't want me to cry, do you?!
Date: 12/02/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
Mooooore?!? Bitteeee! :D
love it
Author's Response: lol I have just updated and you're already asking for more
Date: 12/02/09 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
I've read it all just now and OMG!! In the darkness of the finnish winter I'm very fucking scared!! I think I won't go out tonight just because of reading this!!
But I love it!! I hope you update soon!! I like this kind of stories!!
Date: 12/02/09 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
Okay, so there was no sex. Doesn't matter! That tender scene between them, before Tom had to go out and find those things, was so adorable it more than made up for it!
My god, this infection is pretty evil. I hope to fuck it never gets inside the base.
I also love the slow burn that's happening in this. There's obviously tension building between Georg and Bill. And I don't think Bill is safe on that base :( It's all so tense!
But then there are the most beautiful moments between Bill and Tom, and just for a while, you forget that they are holed up in the middle of that hellhole of a desert.
The way you write this, I can visualise every single scene. I'm totally convinced this should be on the big screen. It would make an awesome movie!
Anyway, perfect chapter as always. And the illustrations are so beautiful.. Can't wait for more :)
Date: 12/02/09 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is awesome. I loved the part with the first infected they had. You describe everything so well, if feels like I'm watching a movie instead of reading. I am really enjoying the action in this, I find myself with mouth wide opened and really into the story when they are coming across with the infected and taking action.
Hope they go back soon though because I don't like the idea of Bill being alone.
Date: 12/02/09 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
O.O Woooo! I'm not completely speechless right now but i'm pretty close cause that was an awesome chapter, even with the lack of sex ;)Loved the detail you put into the scence with the whole 'fighting'the infected,i'm just blown away right now to think straight. Gret job *Bows* lol
Date: 12/02/09 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh shit, that's NOT good and I don't know why the thought of Bill all alone there freaks me the fuck out. He seems to be the only one that can keep the thing from finding them, but he's not strong enough to protect a whole base. Shitshitshit, I don't like this at all. WTF is this virus?
And your illustrations just kill me, they are so perfect! <3
Date: 12/02/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 8
I just read all eight chapters, and I love this story so much I can't even type straight. I had no idea how much I loved post-apocalyptic settings until now. This is really inspiring for me and I'm glad it was featured or I never would have seen it.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment, I'm so glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 12/01/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story! Can't wait to read what comes next!