Date: 12/03/09 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loved the chapter. The detail you are adding in to the story about the infection is wonderful in my opinion. I feel very much like Gustav in the fact that right now I'd like to know more, though if given the opportunity to figure it out first hand like Gustav I think I'd decline. Well looking forward to the next chapter and some more Bill/Tom time :) Good luck and great job
Date: 12/03/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Read the chapter again and only found two typos that stood out.
"...it went straight to his head, making him dizzy and strait to his crotch, making him groan." ----strait should be straight.
"The danachi moaned in his ear, telling Tom how good it felt and with each thrust his voice got stronger and the trembling in his limbs lessoned." ----lessoned should be lessened.
By the way, I'm really enjoying the development of the story. It has a Zombie Apocalypse feel.
Date: 12/03/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really love this story, can't wait to read what will happen!!
Date: 12/03/09 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I haven't left any review here yet, so this is my first, since I couldn't hold back anymore =P
This story is so awesome I had to leave a little comment. That chapter particularly was nerve wrecking. All along, I felt like I was watching, or even better, living the movie "Resident Evil". I don't exactly know why, but your story, especially the atmosphere you describe so well in it, always reminds me of that movie. (Now that I'm thinking about it, of "Ghosts of Mars" too!)
Anyway, I think I made it pretty clear that I loved this fic. Update soon?
Date: 12/03/09 08:05 am Title: Chapter 9
I haven't reviewed lately, but I've been definitely reading. This story is so fascinating! I'm totally hooked! It's interesting to read from this chapter and the previous one how you've been taking this story more towards the adventure, apocalyptic surtviving game instead of just focusing on Bill and Tom. It was nice to start by concentrating on them and now move on. And still reader can feel their affection here, connection somehow. Love, maybe? I'm wondering how long this story will be, but I hope it'll have a long way to go, because I love to read this... even if I don't usually read this kind of stories :)
Date: 12/03/09 07:32 am Title: Chapter 9
So delicious. I realize this isn't a zombie fic per say, but I'm a total fan of the end-of-days, apocalyptic, zombie realm. It totally fits the set of Automatic, too. Perfect.
Date: 12/03/09 02:17 am Title: Chapter 9
I love, love, love, love, this story. I love Bill as a danachi seducing Tom, I love in charge Tom with a gun (or a type of one), I love curious Gustav who wants to study the infected more than he's afraid of them, I love how Georg's second in command and has Tom's back, and I absolutely adore the entire universe you have created here, its a story with back story and plot *squeeeeeee*
Date: 12/03/09 01:18 am Title: Chapter 9
This is awesome, Em. I was going to wait until it was finished to read it, but I caved, and I'm glad I did!
Date: 12/03/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter 9
wow. i can't wait for more, this is really good. it would make a great plot for a movie. bill wants to be an actor, right? =)
Date: 12/02/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my goodness, bills reaction to his own magic, and to tom's reaction is so cute! i love it!
Date: 12/02/09 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'll admit, this story had me hooked when I first read the first chapter, but the character death warded me away and I'm still hesitant to keep reading (though each chapter draws me in) despite warning, though I'm scared because I'll cry ;-; *flails* [/useless review]
Date: 12/02/09 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
O______o I can die happy now
Date: 12/02/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
ahhh it's getting super duper interesting now. glad to see this featured :)
Date: 12/02/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
i can't see the images :(
man... i thought someone was gonna die...
the infection makes me think of the 'i am legend' virus...where did it como from anyway? could you explain it to me please?
Date: 12/02/09 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really liked this chapter even though there was no sex. The whole chapter was tense because of the threat of infection. I was really nervous when that guy was outside the wall and when they found the convoy. Glad that all is well.
I liked the way you potrayed the effects of the illness. Blue-green slimy mucous veins. Yeah. And the bones rippling beneath the skin thing has me thinking maybe the dissease has mutated and now the infected are morphing into something else?
I'm glad to see a connection forming between Bill and Tom now. I thought Bill was going to get annoyed with Tom for cooping him up/ overprotecting him though.
I'm not sure I get what Georg was being all accusing to Bill about, besides the fact that Danachi don't contract the dissease as easily.
Hope nobody tries to rape Bill while Tom's gone.
Thanks for the great Manip! I really liked how you showed Bill's Danachi coloring on his face.
Date: 12/02/09 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love this chaper! Hate that I can't see the pics :(
Author's Response: The LJ server was down- the pictures should load now.
Date: 12/02/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh my holy crap. That was scary for a few minutes there. Like, actually frightening. But freaking amazing at the same time.
Unfortunatly, none of the images loaded for me...
Author's Response: The server they were loaded on went down but you should be able to see them now
Date: 12/02/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. The way I kind of visualized the infected human like things were like the zombies from either Left 4 Dead or the movie Dawn of the Dead. This chapter was great! I absolutely love this story =]
Date: 12/02/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! I anxiously await the next chapter. =P By the way, the links to the pictures aren't working...
Author's Response: The server was down but you should be able to see the pictures now
Author's Response: The server was down but you should be able to see the pictures now
Date: 12/02/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
O_O OH MAH GAWD...that shit was creeeeeeepy!
BUT I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! lol