Date: 12/07/09 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
Keep it comin!
Date: 12/07/09 11:36 am Title: Chapter 10
oooh this was a really intense chapter. I can sympathize with both boys here and I just hope that Tom goes after Bill!
Date: 12/07/09 11:20 am Title: Chapter 10
Bill is one scary Mo-Fo! I'm not sure I trust him or his body reactions. Is he safe? How and why did he freak out after two days. Tom made him wait much longer then that before. Was it enough that Tom had dreams about him. Their relationship was/is tumultuous enough without somthing like this. It makes me sad that they might end on a note like this. I hope that if Bill really leaves he finds his people. They seemed happy together at least for a while, I don't think there's a lot of happiness left in this world.
Date: 12/07/09 11:06 am Title: Chapter 10
Oooh, I knew Bill would be needy when Tom got back, but I wasn't expecting that. Scorchingly hot (and disturbing at the same time) as always, and the end made me feel so bad for Bill. I can see both of their points here. Oh, and I'm so glad Bill kept Tom's back from getting ripped up. :)
Date: 12/07/09 10:51 am Title: Chapter 10
Ugh his chapter was so hot and so good. I hope things between them get better
Date: 12/07/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 10
BILL LEFT 8"""""O
okay now you need to update this QUICKLY or i'll die here
Date: 12/07/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 10
plz more=] nooooo tom and bill no fighting=[ make it better=[ plz
Date: 12/07/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 10
O.O I totally agree with Bill y'know xD I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 12/07/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 10
bill's got a point there...how could tom ask him tom to stop "breathing" he needs it to survive and its not like tom wasn't willing... ;)
Date: 12/07/09 09:15 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh, and one other thing, lol. That illustration of Bill is perfect. He has the look that many predators have - beautiful, but dangerous!
Date: 12/07/09 09:04 am Title: Chapter 10
Phew ... what a chapter. Brilliant, but devastating.
Tom feeling disgust for Bill was really sad, and hard to take.
But I feel as though this chapter needed to happen to remind us of who Bill really is. Their parting was so tender, and it would have been easy to have them run lovingly into each others arms on Tom's return. Except that it wouldn't .... because Bill is what he is, and essentially, he has needs.
Although they seem to be intensified somewhat!
I feel that Tom was still a bit harsh on him though. It's not like Bill can help it, or that he, Tom, really hated it or anything! And as Bill pointed out, he is, after all, keeping Bill locked up in a room, like a pet. Afraid to let him out, not really for Bill's own safety, but because he doesn't want to share him!
Bill could have just gone outside the room and fucked someone while Tom was away, right? But he didn't. He waited for Tom. That has to mean something. It has to.
Gosh. Waiting for the next chapter is going to kill me. Because I understand this chapter, but ... I need them to be ok with each other again, so so badly
Date: 12/07/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 10
Wooooot! loved it. im excited to read next chapter O___o
update soon
Date: 12/07/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 10
....I think Bill's right.
Tom partly right.
But mostly Bill's right.
;___;
Shit, why am I crying?
Date: 12/07/09 08:06 am Title: Chapter 10
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!! this chapter was brilliant! im loving this story more and more!!!
YAY to new updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xxxxxxx
Date: 12/07/09 07:56 am Title: Chapter 10
So angsty. ;-;
My little heart is broken. I feel so bad and sad for both of them. -sobs-
I hope it'll get better. ;-;
Date: 12/06/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hi!
I really, really like this story.
It's sort of frightening some times, but it gives me an incredible rush of adrenaline too!
I can totally picture Tom being a Capitan of a militar base in the middle of nowhere. He's absolutely up for the roll. And as for Bill, I love the whole magic thing. It's so interesting. I would love to learn more about danachi.
Keep writing, please!
And those manips, by the way, are just amazing!
Date: 12/05/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love the language that you use, it comes through in every chapter. "This whole place is live" stood out for me in this chapter, made the situation that Tom and then others were in so much scarier. Great stuff as usual.
Date: 12/04/09 12:45 am Title: Chapter 9
This is really captivating so far, I love it! Can’t wait to see what happens next.