Date: 12/07/09 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
it's pretty simple. I'm in love with this story, :)
Date: 12/07/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
Uh-oh, I hope Bill doesn't get in any trouble...I loved this chapter, it was so vicious and raw-like!
Date: 12/07/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aww poor Bill! Tom is such a dick in this!
More soon? :)
Date: 12/07/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh dang, the shit hit the fan! Gotta say I've decided to side with Bill on this one, Tom needs to man up :)
Date: 12/07/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aw. Even when he was starving and desperate for sex, Bill still protected Tom from getting hurt. That must have taken a lot of effort at that moment, so it shows that Bill really cares about Tom. Tom was a little too quick to judge here, I think.
Date: 12/07/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
ohhhhh i really feel sorry for Bill
i hope that Bill's not gone...i like him in here
he's so full of mystery
Date: 12/07/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh-my-god!
can't believe they got angry at each other!
but i can understand both sides...bill can't really control his urges can he?
and tom...well this is new to him.and he has so many things in his mind..i hope that in the future he can begin to understand bill's side...
i want them to make up :(...they belong with each other..
update soon...oh and those pictures are really awesome
Date: 12/07/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
more!? moooore!?!!?
Date: 12/07/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
Noo!! Bill left! And Tom just started cleaning! Crazy man, he should have went after him!
Oh I hope everything will be good with them in the next chapter. And I hope Bill doesn't get hurt while he's gone without Tom. Wouldn't be good.
Poor Tom though, feeling like Bill just used him. Maybe they just haven't come to an understanding yet? I don't know...your writing. lolz
I hope you can update again soon. I was so happy when I saw you had updated. XD
Hugs,
Date: 12/07/09 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
Woo hoo, Go Bill! Sorry couldn't resist. Beautifully written hunny! I'm soooo proud of you!
Date: 12/07/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
Long time reader first time reviewer. I looove this story, been following it since the beginning. I just wanted to say the last sentence made me go "B'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww" and such. Keep it up :)
Date: 12/07/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
You know what's awesome? I try not to let my eyes skim down the page when I'm reading this story, but when I get closer to the end of the chapter and I see "Chapter end notes" I panic because I don't want it to end, so I go right back up to the top to start reading the chapter again, without having actually finished it in the first place haha. This one was fantastic, I love scary, angry Bill with dark eyes. Poor Tom didn't stand a chance.
Date: 12/07/09 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh my gosh i can not explain how i love this. it is so creative and the Bill here is like beyond hot/sexy/amazing! so is the banner and those little clips of Bill's eyes. You can totally picture him being like that for real. which is kinda hot/creepy. lol. but love it!
Date: 12/07/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
0_0 Uh oh. Trouble in paradise...
Date: 12/07/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
ohmygooodddd. YESSSS. FUCK yes, at that. Holy shit. (I was really, really hoping it wasnt gonna be all sunshine and rainbows, so this is a fucking godsend)
That was possibly the most amazing thing ever, and i dont just mean the sex, i mean the whole argument and standpoint, fucking amazing. I especially loved the last sentence, because i knew Bill wouldnt let Tom be hurt by it, not like that. Ahhh, so awesome.
This just gets better and better! I'm super excited for the next chapter, and your manips rock so hard, as usual :D
Date: 12/07/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
i love this story i have look after new chapters every day ^^ i mean it this is my favorit story ever
Date: 12/07/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom you moron!
He better make it up to Bill.
Date: 12/07/09 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
More!! I just CAN'T get enough of this!! Please, please updaate soon or I'll die!!
Date: 12/07/09 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
God, I feel so sorry for Bill. I mean it's not like he chose to be this way and he doesn't seem to like what's happening.
And Tom's being an ass! God damn it. Just fuck the beautiful guy that's throwing himself at you and DEAL WITH YOUR ISSUES BY YOURSELF! And if you don't want to, then leave it to anyone else in that base. I'm sure they'd be more than happy to be in your position
Date: 12/07/09 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow... that was intense.
bill didn't leave right?
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right???? T___T