Date: 12/09/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Out of all fan-fictions, I have always found Tokio Hotel somewhat hard to read. There are roughly three authors I read in this fandom and I've come to really admire your stories and your wild imagination. Many stories can become monotonous and drag on with the same plot, yet this story proves that someone can take a completely wild, wacky, and original idea and make it into something great.
The characterization is well thought out, the description is beyond amazing, and the plot itself is well written and I have yet to find a boring spot. And I liked how you didn't just have the twins go at it. There was that drawn out tension between them that allowed for growth and yes, the ultimate wonderous sex that seems to make everyone happy x3 including myself. Reading this story has been an absolute joy, one of my favorites, as is your manipulations for it. I cannot wait to see where this leads to =)
-MichUndDich
Date: 12/09/09 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
That...was...AMAZING! Why did you have to stop there! OMG, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! AMAZING STORY!
Date: 12/09/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my God! This fic is... absolutely amazing. I've been reading on and off for a few weeks (all because of school :[) and I've finally caught up, this is just.. pure amazing.
Also, I love fierce!Bill and even seductive!Bill. I love the element of science fiction in this, but it's just enough to be so, but not so much to turn me away (usually I don't like scifi.)
I cannot wait for more
Date: 12/08/09 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love the fact that EVERY ONE of Tom's thoughts here was something that I was wondering. You gave enough facts to help us relate with the main character. I loved how I was figuring out Bill as Tom was, and that during the fight I felt just as offensive as Tom seemed to feel. And I loved finding out everything Bill was thinking as well, all of his motives and fears.
Love this chapter.
Date: 12/08/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/08/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story, so much. It's like a mini-play in my head, and I'm enjoying every bit of it.
Date: 12/08/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
i hope you tell us very soon how this 'infection' began... really. (:
Date: 12/08/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
Omg Please write more soon!
Date: 12/08/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awwwwww. Poor Tom and Bill!
I love this so, so, so much. I really do. The plotline is absolutely brilliant...and let's be honest, Bill could SO pass for a creature designed for sex if he wanted to ;)
I can't wait for this to be finished! Good luck!
Date: 12/08/09 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I obviously can't get enough from those words of yours. I absolutely love this story, to make it clear ^^
Seems like Bill and Tom couldn't live indefinitely in their perfect little world. This is taking an interesting turn!
Date: 12/08/09 05:04 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh no, trouble in paradise! I'm glad they're finally going to deal with the obvious issues here, though. Great job!
Date: 12/08/09 02:46 am Title: Chapter 9
Awesomeness you updated. I love the art. I like how you picted the room that tom stays in.
Date: 12/08/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 10
I sense trouble on the very near horizon.
Date: 12/08/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh! Wild ride! but oh no! Bill ran away! I hate that they can't see what is right in front of them. Makes me want to shake both of them and yell a bit. Thank you for writing this and please update soon. You've made my week the last few days!
Date: 12/07/09 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh no stupid tommy,hurting the danachis feelings,,,,, can you please make it better and maybe if the danachi gets pregnant the new race maybe can be the cure for the virus or something =) please can you update like tomorrow pleaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
thank you so much sleeping today will be hard because i want to know what happens next,the danachi needs sex to survive i need this story xD
Date: 12/07/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg poooooorrrr bill..or tom...or both
Date: 12/07/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
WOAH...is all i could think whe i finished the chapter then a "damn"...
Date: 12/07/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh noes! Tom, Tom, Tom...You idiot. :D
Date: 12/07/09 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
As silly as it might sound, I'm really conflicted right now. I understand Tom feeling used, but I don't like how mean he was to Bill...
This chapter was very sexy but in an angsty sort of way ._. I need to know what happens!
Date: 12/07/09 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
well dang.