Date: 11/05/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I finished this awhile back but didn't have time to comment, sry. But I have to say this is just amazing! I absolutely love it!
Date: 11/03/10 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
i really should point that it was one of the most creative fics ive read!
i wont lie, at first when i read the whole 'bill needs sex and all of that' i thought here comes again, one of those stories full of sex and lack of plot but daaaamn i was wrong!
thanks for sharing it! i really REALLY enjoyed reading it n.n
Date: 10/19/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 16
I am swooning! That was beautiful
Date: 10/06/10 02:53 am Title: Chapter 16
This was an amazing story. I truly loved it. I cried When Billa almost died. And i let a sob escape my throat every ime Tomi got punched. I loved every second of it. It was great. :)
Date: 10/06/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 15
That was the most intense chapter i have ever read. I cried so fucking hard my guts hurt now. But i love it, no matter how many tears ive wasted. :)
Date: 10/06/10 02:04 am Title: Chapter 13
I cannot beleive that Gustav died. I admit, I cried as i read it. But I mean how could you not? It was so well written, I invisioned it clearly. The words alone brought tears to my eyes. And Georg... The way you wrote his charactor, It also made me cry. Very well written. You have done a beautiful job.
Date: 10/06/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow, Like I have said before, I truly love this story.
Date: 10/05/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is an amazing story, You have written it very well. I love it, it has so much suspense, But its placed through out the story perfectly. Sometimes, whiole reading more fiction, I wonder why most of these people aren't real Authors. And you are one of the few that I think SHOULD be an author. It is well written, like I said, I love it!
Date: 10/05/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 16
This was a awesome story!!! I loved every chapter and cried durning some parts it was amazing! :)
Date: 10/05/10 04:57 am Title: Chapter 4
This is very well written. I do love how suductive Bill is. Tom had better stop saying no. SAY NO TO DRUGS! SAY YES TO SEX WITH BILLA!
Date: 09/30/10 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, I can't stop reading it. This is one of my favorite's you're very good at writing.
Date: 09/27/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Finally they did it XD Loved it!
The sexual tension you built since the first was awesome :) And how it exploded :O Great job!
Date: 09/27/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love it, I love it! ^^ The connection between Tom and the danachi is great. Touching and sweet ^^
*hurries to the next chapter*
Date: 09/27/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 16
I might have reviewed this story before, I'm not sure. But this is such a novelty.
Such realistic portrayal of reaching a goal. I loved the soldiers' reactions at the end, showing how when pushed to a limit, the majority of human beings will act out of selfish interest. I love how you portrayed sex as so carnal, so animalistic yet with so much potential to be pure and loving. I love the isolation and the fear of being out in the desert, so vulnerable to disease. A virus so impossible to detect until it's too late, so impossible to prevent that there's nothing left but to pray to whatever deities there are that somehow you can escape it. I love how the relationship progresses, and how susceptible we are, in Gustav's case. I love how this story was so different in the average romantic story, with underlying intentions and plot. You are definitely a talented writer, and with the character names changed, this could totally be turned into a fantastic novella or movie.
Date: 09/20/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMGOODNESSS!!!!!! THIS STORY WAS AMAZING!!!! i loved every bit of it. The voice, the characters(even though Georg pissed me off at the end (; ) but still so wonderful!! i loved the relationship between bill and tom!! i loved everything!! great job!!
Date: 09/20/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow, this was an amazing fic. The realism of how the soldiers reacted at the end stole my breath and I was totally screaming at my computer screen to SAY IT TOM SAY IT DAMN IT!!! my dog gave me a funny look over it. I would love to see what happens next what IS on the other side of the wall. Was the wall really the containment unit from the rest of the world and they just didnt realize it? Do they ever find the Danashi settlement?....there are so many things that could go into a sequel. I mean you ended this one very well but you know? there could totes be more to this story.
Date: 09/12/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
I just have to say -
god. oh my god.
I'm so obsessed with this story !
it's like,
it gives me love, it makes me calm and it can make me happy, day or night.
Seriously,
you are so good.
I love the way you write,
I love the way you can put down feelings into words.
Thanks for brigthening up my days !
// peace and love, from Billie, Sweden.
Date: 09/09/10 06:19 am Title: Chapter 16
Okay, I decided to wait until I finished and am just commenting here because it's the last chapter. :). I used to be fairly confident in my writing abilities, but after reading this, I feel horribly inadequate. Haha. In all seriousness, I thought this was absolutely amazing. I love these sort of post-apocalyptic stories, especially virus-related ones. The way you created an entire world and wrote so richly is awe-inspiring. This is seriously a great story, and I'll definitely recommend it to any friends who aren't opposed to slash.
Date: 09/06/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 16
You know, this is the second time I've read this story and I just realised something.. This plot would make a great movie! Seriously! =)