Date: 12/20/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I liked that chapter a lot. I started reading the story because of the picture and excerpt on morethantwins, which already sounded really enticing. I love Bill's role, it really fits and gives great potential for development. Tom and Georg's roles are good as well and I can find the real them in your description. This story is really different from the other TH FFs I've read and written so far, I usually stick to the ones that represent their real lives. It is a really nice change because I have read Twincest in so many varieties that it has gotten a bit boring. Eager to carry on with the story ; )
Date: 12/20/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 13
oh damm not gustav :-(
Date: 12/19/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
NO!!! GUSTAV! D:
My friend has been telling me I should read this story so I decided to do so, and it's pretty amazing.
Date: 12/19/09 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
Update fast, please!! Happy Holidays!!
Date: 12/19/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
First Andi, now Gustav. It's so sad. Bill really couldn't do anything about it??
Date: 12/19/09 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm sure that Bill and Tom in love could help.
Date: 12/19/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is not good at all. Maybe Tom will be immuned because of Bill. On the order hand, Bill's mother caught the virus, so.
Date: 12/19/09 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
It's easy to blame the danachi. In fact, it's all Tom's fault. He said to Bill to don't take the leaves that can stop the craving and to feed on him, that he will be able to give him everything he need.
Date: 12/19/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter 13
Oh noes!
This chapter was really good, but Gustav DIED!?
That's terrible. But I still love this story. Not everyone gets to live, I guess. :(
Date: 12/18/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
Danachies are really made for sex, I mean Bill is auto-lubrificating.
Date: 12/18/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yeah!! The first kiss!!
Date: 12/18/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tom is not so brght. He need eplanations. Danachi 101 for Tom:
1. They feed by sex
2. You have vivid wet dreams
3. Bill looks healthier.
Conclusion: Tom have been abuse during sleeping.
Date: 12/18/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
o___O I read like 9 chapters of this story in just one night :B I love it
Date: 12/18/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh, my god, I just caught up with this.
I already knew you were God and all, but WOW. This is so amazing I don't know what to do with myself! Oh, and this was terribly sad. I kind of do hate you *sniffles* But I really don't *-* I love you. And this. Sooo much.
My new favorite mythical creature is now danachi.
RIP Gustav and Andreas :( *tear*
Date: 12/18/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
Poor Gustav :'[!!!!!
But it was beautiful though.. you're such a good writer, &&I hope that you'll write a book somedays!!
Date: 12/18/09 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom is having a hard time here. Haha!! Hard!! If I understand well, danachi's food is sex, how convinient or not. I'm not sure that Tom's dream was really a dream. Naughty Bill!!
Date: 12/18/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love that kind of story, a little scifi, a little fantasy, timeless.
Date: 12/17/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg omg omg I cant wait to read more :D
Date: 12/17/09 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh, Gustav!!! (-_-,)
Date: 12/17/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh, oh, oh... This is so intense, so desperate. So damn good! I crave for yor updates, because I'm totally hooked. The whole world here, the end of this God forgotten world, is so sad, painful and hopeless. Suddenly it's not about danachi and Tom, it's survival game like I've said before. Something I never thought I would love so much, but I do. I hope you are offering us some comforting later on, because this desperation is killing me... So this is how it feels like when the world ends? Let Tom and Bill's love do miracles.. Magic, right? :)