Date: 12/28/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
As Gustav was telling them that he needed to be 'put out of his misery' I was tearing up. But when he closed his eyes, the dam broke. I'm so upset...Poor Gusti...I just...I get this feeling like Tom's going to end up getting the virus...like he and bill will go further north and he'll end up getting it and then he's like on the verge of death and bill saves him some how. I dunno..I'm getting that vibe. But one thing I want you to know is how fucking awesome this is! And I can totally see this being made into a movie. It seems like...that one with will smith but only better. Damn....and I wonder how long it will take before Bill and Tom realize they love each other :P
Author's Response: thanks for your comment :) <3
Date: 12/28/09 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the warning, but with Bill's nature and the critical situation I was expecting it. At least, Bill have the power to protect himself.
Author's Response: Thanks very much <3
Date: 12/28/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was harsh, but also completely in line because of the hysteria the vyrus has created among the soldiers. Specially after Gustavīs death. :(
I really hope Bill and Tom would be able to head North, now there's nothing holding them back.
Great work so far and keep writing, please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll be updating soon :)
Date: 12/28/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 15
is that the end? or is there more? ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
you can;t leave it at that!!!!!
i WILL find you and will withhold food until you write the next chapter!
and be snappy about it missy!
lol. jk. but please do write more and soon. otherwise ill go insane
Author's Response: I'll be updating in a few days! :)
Date: 12/28/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
I liked this chapter - i thought it was an amazing example of creative writing and i beliee you proved yourself to be a brilliant author. :)
Im glad you updated! im worried for billa D:i hope hes not dead/dying/ toohurt ^^
x
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 12/28/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
It keeps being interesting. My nerves are on edge, I hope Tom and Bill don't get separated by anything horrible. I liked the scenes between them, very sweet and romantic. The only thing that could have been described a bit more is how Tom is feeling now that so suddenly he has someone to be intimate with after all that time of no close relationships. After all, he has no family left and doesn't seem to be too close to any of his men.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting <3
Date: 12/28/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
I really loved this chapter, even though it might have been disturbing. I think the way this whole story was written makes it very clear that Bill wasn't just being raped and liking it, but his entire genetic makeup causes him to take some kind of pleasure in all kinds of sex, rape being one of the many kinds available.
Author's Response: Thanks so much- that was what I was trying to portray :)
Date: 12/28/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh my god!!! This chapter made my toes curl and my eyes read faster than ever!! Noooo this chapter ended way too fucking fast!! Nooooo, you didn't kill Bill right?? You couldn't have, right? Bill and Tom love each other and their love makes sure everything works out just fine! Their love wins all the obsticles!!!! Thanks for the amazing chapter. :) I really love this fic and this chapter's intensity level made it so captivating! Thanks!^^
xoxo, abz
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/28/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 15
;-; Oh its so heart breaking! But this chapter is, in a strange way, beautiful at the same time, because Tom and Bill love each other, and it shows just how much Tom is willing to do to protect Bill. I love the end. How Bill pushes all of them away with his "magic". I can't wait for the next chapter. Your story to me, is as needed as sex to Bill. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Date: 12/28/09 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
this is upsetting, but very well written as well. this story is so wonderful, everything felt and expressed so deeply. this chapter and the last were exquisite, I cannot wait for more and to see what happens after this!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 12/28/09 09:38 am Title: Chapter 15
Does Bill die??
NO!!
PLEASE make him come alive!!!!
Author's Response: >.< I'll be updating soon!
Date: 12/28/09 09:31 am Title: Chapter 15
Poor Bill. God some people can be so stupid. Thank you for updating. You should watch Avatar if you have not yet. I mean that movie just made my imaganation go into heaven.
Author's Response: I haven't seen Avatar and don't know much about it but I keep seeing posters everywhere for it so I might check it out. :)
Date: 12/28/09 06:14 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow, intense chapter! I have to say that I loved it though. Tom finally said he loves Bill! And Bill said it back! Even though it was under the worst of circumstances, at least it happened. =P I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Date: 12/28/09 04:17 am Title: Chapter 15
And I forgot to add, that I hate Georg. It's the second story that makes me hate him, and I hope I won't start feeling this in real :D. What a bastard.
Author's Response: hahah poor Georg! I hope people don't really start to hate him, that's not fair. LOL! <3
Date: 12/28/09 04:12 am Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the new chapter :). Well, it's sad that they shared those words while Bill was being raped, and it was not Tom making love to him, but I like creativity nevertheless. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Date: 12/28/09 02:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Would you mind putting a non-con warning in the warnings? I really wasn't expecting the scene to be so brutal and it freaked me out, a lot.
ty~
Author's Response: Hi- I apologise for the lack of non-con warning on the fic, I actually thought I had selected that warning so I hope it wasn't too upsetting.
Date: 12/28/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 15
AHH BILL!!! Please be okay. Ahhh! Tom loves him! this chapter was sad D:
Author's Response: <3
Date: 12/28/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 15
Poor Bill!
I hope everything ends up ok though...
Author's Response: thanks for commenting :)
Date: 12/28/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG I can't wait to read another chapter and find out what happened.. wow I loved it.
Wish you a great holiday season too :)
xxx
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 12/27/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ok, now. Bill CANNOT be permanently broken. (-_-)
Author's Response: <3