Date: 12/30/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
First off, I have to say, this was an absolutely amazing ending to an amazing story.
I'm sorry to say it, but, many authors end fabulous stories rather anticlimactically, but, as with ever other chapter, this one did the story wonderful justice and I'm very glad to have read this as a whole.
Usually, when I read your stories, I stick the twincest, but, this was really something I enjoyed a lot.
Wonderful, WONDERFUL job ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 12/30/09 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story just...wow. It was the first story I read on here, and I am sad to see it ending. I loved the entire thing, the emotions, relationships, everything! But I would have loved to know what the north was like, see if Tom met any other Danachi's. Am I greedy for asking such an amazing author for a sequel for this? Or maybe an Epilogue?
Author's Response: I won't be writing an epilogue for this because this is where this one ends. Not sure about a sequel.rnThanks for commenting!
Date: 12/30/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
This was such an awesome story! I remember being so excited at the beginning and following it from beginning to end. Every time you updated, I read immediately. And what makes this story so interesting is the setting and the magic - there have been stories about disease before, like "28 Days Later", but the combination of the dessert setting (which I can imagine being both a terrifying yet glorious landscape) and the concept of "danachi"s made this story totally unique. As an AU, this story rocks! You should try to publish :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm definitely going to have to watch 28 Days Later now!
Date: 12/30/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for sharing this amazing story! :D wooooooo
Author's Response: thank you! So glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/30/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad that you made it a happy ending! I don't think my heart would of been able to take it if it had been a sad ending!
Loved this story the whole way through, thanks for such a great one
Author's Response: Thanks very much :) and I had no intention of making the ending a sad one- I couldn't take it! XD
Date: 12/30/09 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story is the best i ever read. i realy mean it. I wahe read it so many times. Love how real it fels every time i read. I can se this desart and bases around me. like i was there.
Love your stories and i will thanks for a wonderful time in a fantastik world
love your work so mutch
hope you can understand my english iam not so good at it
Author's Response: Your English is great! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment- I'm glad you liked the story :)
Date: 12/30/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
that was an excelent story =D
and tbh im hopeing for a sequel, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not sure about a sequel or not at the moment.
Date: 12/30/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
I loooooooooooved this!
I'm kind of craving a sequel now... Just to see what happens with Bill and Tom in the future. Like what happens now that they've gone North and made it over the wall. But I'll live with it xD since that was just the perfect ending and all :)
This fic was so good that I might go through and read it 2 or 3 more times... xD
Author's Response: Thank you! Still not sure if there will be a sequel or not at the moment :)
Date: 12/30/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aw... fabulous. I love this.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 12/30/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
awww..it's so sad that it had to come to an end but the last 2 chapters were amazing!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! So glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/30/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm so greedy, I wish this story could have gone on longer. I enjoyed it so much. thanks so much for writing this, and as always your stories are wonderful. :)
Author's Response: Aw, I was tempted to make it longer but I don't like fics that are dragged out for no reason so when the plot wound itself up, I went with it :)
Date: 12/30/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG! This was it? It can't be ending? You must be kidding me??? *shocked* No, no, no... What???
I thank you so much for writing this. I know, I haven't reviewed that much, but I've been reading every single chapter as soon as it appeared on a site, with passion, excited and completely hooked. This was amazing, it really was! I remember when first time reviewing this (first chapter) and I said that I don't usually read stuff like this, but I felt like this is not going to disappoint me. It didn't. Not the least.
I wish I could have seen, what was it in the north. See the north. But it's okay. I guess this had to end like this and it's a good choise. I loved everything in this fic. It was so exciting, scary, touching, beautiful and you created a whole new universe. It would have been scary without Bill and Tom and their relationship. When reading this last chapter I was so excited, so confused, so hypnotised to just follow their journey. When they reached the wall, it was like something blocked in got free and released all the gathered emotions. It was beautiful, mysrterious, but beautiful nonetheless. Sad too, I don't know why. I can't even decide. For some odd reason I feel like wanting to cry.
You wrote a master piece. Be proud of it! Really amazing story and I feel priviledged to be able to read this. After all, this was...
...magic, right? :)
Date: 12/30/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 16
This has to win in the THF awards. I almost didn't read this, but I am so happy I did. Thanx Em, this is an awesome piece of literary work.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! <3 I'm glad you read it and liked it :)
Date: 12/30/09 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG It's over!?!?! I CAN"T BEILVE IT!!
This was such an incredible story, I'm sorry to see it end but I'm so happy they made it to the other side! *does happy dance*
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 12/30/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 16
It was really cool, I charm from beginning to end, Gusti died T--T, and I, well, I would ask permission to do a translation, of course, only if I may, is one of the best stories i read, and believe me, and read a lot. I love it
Date: 12/30/09 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
omg. love it. the last chapter is perfect. AWESOME!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/30/09 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
*happy sigh* I'm glad the story had a nice ending :D They're in love and walking into the sunrise. It's so wonderful!
Date: 12/30/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
Okay, since I have a habit of reviewing twice on stories, I'm doing a followup on my last comment down there. Now that my thoughts are less garbled and frantic. I guess i've decided that if you don't do a sequel, it won't be so bad after all. -surprised nod- as a rule, I normally don't like most sequels, because they sometimes tend to drag out the story. For this, I think it'd be wonderful either way. And also, I really do love this ending!! I don't know what I was expecting before, but this completely startled me - mainly because I was ignoring the fact that all good things come to an end XD- and also made me feel similar to Bill and Tom. Wowwwwwww..... I still cant stop ranting about how amazing this story has been.... Man. All in all- do a sequel and I'll love you forever, or leave it like this and I'll love you forever. I guess i'm undecided XD again, thank you so so so so so so SOooooOooOOoOmuch for writing and sharing this story with us - it has been a superb and bubbly and frantic and brilliant journy, with a delightful, tranquil, fulfilling ending! (do I sound british??)
Date: 12/30/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
-cries- noooooooeeezzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -sobs-
I'm gonna miss danachi Bill... it has been an extremely wonderful story. If I've had money I would've invested and made this a full fiction novel.
but really. I want more but this story ended perfectly. This is the best fanfiction I've ever read in my whole time in this site and on a whole lot of others.
-squeezes you- thank you for sharing this!!!!
Date: 12/30/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 16
standing ovation x 200,000,000,000...;)