Date: 05/03/10 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
I loved it. It had such great detail and a good plot. xD
Date: 04/28/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story was absolutely amazing. I loved every moment of it as well as felt a jolt of fear and pain and laughter at times. Very well done.
Date: 04/28/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story was absolutely amazing. I loved every moment of it as well as felt a jolt of fear and pain and laughter at times. Very well done.
Date: 04/28/10 01:06 am Title: Chapter 13
aww that was such a sad chappy! i kept having 2 whipe at my eyes. poor gus
Date: 04/07/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter 16
This was a good read.
I loved the ending and what happened to get Tom and Bill to where they were. The story has been stuck in my head for a long time since I first read chapter 1. It's so unique and sci-fi, drama, alternate universe stuff isn't too shocking nor cliche. They're perfect.
The moment when you could tell they were in love made me go "awww" even tho the circumstances were slightly scary to think about.
The other memorable parts to me where when Tom first meets the danachi, When Bill tears up toms room, and the TomxBill car scene. The last one was especially hawwwttt. ahaha
I know somewhere earlier I said this should be made into a movie and I still stand by that statement.
You have a gift and it needs to be shared to the masses! O:
And if there is by chance a sequel coming in the near future (though it doesn't need one, ended perfectly) You can still count me in to read it!
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Date: 04/02/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 16
WOW This is the fist fanfiction I ever read in my life, it was recommended to me by a great friend of mine called Sieren, I loved the story in every way it's amazing!! great job!! I'd love to read more stories of yours
Date: 04/02/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loving this so far!
Date: 04/02/10 06:35 am Title: Chapter 16
Finally read this today and I wish I would have read it earlier, but I'm always stupidly unsure of scifi-ish stories, fan fic or otherwise. Anyway!
Really great plot and storytelling. I love how I could literally feel the desperation in the second to last chapter. I always adore fics where the bond between Bill and Tom is this strong. Really engaging read.
Date: 03/30/10 12:29 am Title: Chapter 16
Wow. While reading I didn't even had the time to check the time, so now I've been awake for 24 hours, just because I couldn't stop reading!
I really like the story. I like that it's kindda sci-fi ish, and that it's not really about twincest, but just about the love between to living individuals.
Fantastic story, I'll definately tell others to read it :)
Date: 03/27/10 01:09 am Title: Chapter 16
I think this is one of the best
"twincest" story I have read in a while.
Date: 03/26/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 16
I loved it. I loved everything, the description, the created characters, the plot, just... everything. I have to say, this would make a pretty awesome movie. Thanks for writing it, it was complete amazingness
Date: 03/24/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awww i'm so glad they made it together to a new life full of love and amazing sex ! ! :D
That was an amazing story... your writing style is so good, makes you one of the best author here. I'm really impress by the quality of this fic. I enjoyed it from beginning to the end. The plot idea was excellent, the character were perfectly described and the whole story was interesting. Thank you!
Date: 03/24/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
That chap was probably my favorite, so full of love and emotions, beautiful!
Date: 03/24/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 12
awww I like how they can be so much more powerful if they make love... adorable !
Date: 03/24/10 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm re-reading this story, haven't finished it the first time when it was not complete and now I wanna know the ending but I can't remember the beginning, lol.. What I'm trying to say is that it's good enough to read a second time ! :)
Date: 03/24/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 8
You know, I really want to give you an amazing and long/pointless but interesting review, but I can't. I just want to get to the next chapter, because I'm so completely eager to find out what happens next. It's an awesome story, I really love it
Date: 03/23/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
HAPPY ENDING YIPPIE!! i can now only wish there was a sequel, -le sigh-
fantastic fanfic, something that should be made in a book!
Date: 03/23/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
i was sniffling and crying and sobbing and w/e else! it was so saddddd! I just want to spend the whole day crying because this chapter was so freakin' awesome! I love it, ur so awesome!!!