Date: 10/30/09 12:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, this story is certainly off to a great start. I love the way you described Bill; especially the dark around his eyes.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/30/09 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow.. That was an interesting start. This story has all the elements I would normally avoid, but still it's very fascinating. Very interesyting way to write, feels like watching a movie. I'll keep following this one for sure.
Author's Response: I hope you're still able to enjoy it even if there are parts you'd normally avoid. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 10/29/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooo ooo oooo. GIRLLLLL.
I need more of this! I'm loving the scifi-ness of this, PLUS the little supernatural bit, and how Bill (cuz we KNOW it's Bill)just SCREAMS sex.
yea. this is love.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 10/29/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMFG This is an amazing introduction I'm so intreiged it's going to drive me crazy until there's more. I love the idea, dystopian and sci-fi you had me at hello. Amazing
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It wont be too long before an update :)
Date: 10/29/09 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh I LOVE it! The descriptions you used for the gypsies were great. The whole situation of exploiting sexy Bill is great too, all though I'm not too sure he doesn't have something up his sleeve. Love this grungy sort of post-apocolyptic world. Can't wait to see what come next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comment- I'll be updating again soon :)
Date: 10/29/09 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhhh, wowza! I like this. A lot. *nods excitedly*
Author's Response: thanksk :)
Date: 10/29/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, the beginning is very intriguing. I wonder what danachi really are and what kind of magic they possess.
Wanna read moooore!
Author's Response: More soon! Thanks for commenting
Date: 10/29/09 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa that's creepy! BUT AWESOME! I'm really excited for this fic bby :)
Author's Response: thank you! Hope you keep reading
Date: 10/29/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
fucking hell that's hot. hot. hot. hot.
my mouth is watering and so is everything else. ;)
where can I get one of these beautiful creatures? lol
truly loooove it.
Date: 10/29/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome set-up. I love post-apocalyptic stories, and this promises to be a good one!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you keep reading
Date: 10/29/09 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOTTT OMG OMG OMG
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/29/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness this is amazing! I love this start!!!! What an amazing taste of this story!! I'm so excited!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 10/29/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just love this first chapter! Everyone loves a good twincest fic, lol, but this has a unique and intriguing plot running alongside that.
Really excited for more chapters of this fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 10/29/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. The way you right is simply captivating, and it looks as if this story won't be an exception. Even after this first chapter, I find myself yearning for more. Can't wait to read further!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Date: 10/29/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
*eyes glaze over*
Oh yeah, I'm gonna like this story.
Author's Response: Hopefully! XD thanks
Date: 10/29/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is this meant to be creepy?
Because it really creeping me out! 0_o
Author's Response: ... I guess it is supposed to be slightly creepy
Date: 10/29/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O
This was such a great first chapter ♥
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/29/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is diffrent from your other fics..I really like it .. :) I like bills character :p alot :D pls update soon
Author's Response: Thank you :) the fic will be updated very regularly
Date: 10/29/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh god, I LOVE THIS! You're amazing Em, seriously. The whole thing just vibrates with mystery and dark sensuality. I can't wait for the rest. ^.^
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much- I'm so happy you like it <3
Date: 10/29/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good so far I wonder what's so bad about bill that the gypsies gave him away like candy on Halloween?
Author's Response: thank you and all will be revealed...!