Date: 11/02/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
i would like a danachi please.
Author's Response: me too XD
Date: 11/02/09 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow... That thing is hot.
Date: 11/02/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg, so Tom is stuck with a magical Bill who needs to be nourished with sex??
May as well give up all resistance now Tom. You're fucked already! LOL!
We're only on chapter two, but I really love this fic! Already you've created a unique universe with a fascinating plot and characters. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 11/02/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
So Bill needs sex for sustinance huh? He should come live with me, I'd feed him. I love the way you're writing this: you don't give too many details, leaving some things unexplained and mysterious.
Date: 11/02/09 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh hell. He's making me hard too and I don't even have a cock. Damn.
Date: 11/02/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh hell. He's making me hard too and I don't even have a cock. Damn.
Date: 11/02/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is just amazing. The universe it's in is so vivid and real, and the characters well developed even though there's only been two chapters so far. Loving this!
Date: 11/02/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Mmm, Tom doesn't stand a chance. And I love the way you describe Bill in this--adding so many little physical details that normally would be overlooked. Now I'm wondering what's going to happen when Tom inevitably gives in--whether that will give the danachi some sort of power. I can't wait for the next part!
Date: 11/02/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
more ... great story and plot can't wait for tom to give in to bill oh oh you could make tom walk in on bill sleeping with one of the crew guys and tom gets jealous i dunno just a thought
Date: 11/02/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is so great *_* Very different, and I'm really excited to read more! :D
Date: 11/02/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. This is like nothing I've ever read before. It's absolutely fantastic! Amazing, amazing job. I cannot wait to read more. I... Wow. I'm actually pretty speechless...
Date: 11/02/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved this. It was quite sexy, of course, but I love Tom trying to ignore the instinctively sexual pull there is between he and this 'creature'.
I love Bill's knowledge of the human language (what we've seen so far) and the fact that he KNOWS that he doesn't need to thrive off of human food.
I want them to fuck already, but I know there's more to the story than that, SO I am eagerly waiting for more (sexiness and plot development included).
Date: 11/01/09 11:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Something tells me it's gonna be hella good! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Ihope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 10/30/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
How you can come up w. something as awesome as this is beyond me.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 10/30/09 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start! I love this world you've set up for these characters and especially the way Tom and Bill met. Very nice. I'm excited for more.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 10/30/09 02:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited. So so excited. I love slave!Bill. Soooo excited :D (sorry that this review blows... its 2:30 am and... yeah.) XD
Author's Response: Reviews never blow! Thanks for commenting
Date: 10/30/09 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Not really anything else to say, except... Wow...
Author's Response: Thanks XD
Date: 10/30/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel pulled into the story already and I'm going to track it. I hope you continue to update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for tracking! I am updating very soon :)
Date: 10/30/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1
ooooh I definitely wanna see what happens next! :O
Author's Response: :) I will be updating soon