Date: 11/08/09 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was great! So super hot. You have me wondering: does Bill get wet "back there" on his own? I can't wait till Tom breaks.
Author's Response: Hopefully that question will be answered XD
Date: 11/08/09 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
dumb Tom
why don't you take advantage of the danachi?
u stupid boy
u're going to have blue balls
Author's Response: Tom's a nice guy!
Date: 11/08/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tom is so noble! I'm looking forward to seeing him breaking point, tbh. Mostly because I wanna see what it would take him break him ;)
Author's Response: haha don't we all want to see that? XD
Date: 11/08/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tom truly has an iron will! This story is so mysterious and erotic...I really can't wait for another chapter!
Author's Response: thanks for commenting :)
Date: 11/08/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2
O-M-G
trully awesome !!!!
I just, l o v e it !
omg, so deep,
so freaking amazing !
i luwluwluw it,
can't wait for the next chapter ! O.o
xox Billie
Date: 11/04/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
ohhh i love the sexual tension
u're killing me
please let tom fuck bill soon
more
Date: 11/03/09 02:31 am Title: Chapter 2
I have to say I LOVE the banner for this it’s just perfect.
I am really enjoying how suspicious and yet at the same time tempted Tom feels. And I am loving the setting, it’s so very different to any of the other AUs settings
Date: 11/03/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Loving this so far! I'll be watching for future chapters. :)
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 11/02/09 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
So good, and so interesting.
Does he feed on the act, fluids, pheromones, what?
And did he consciously induce Tom's little wet dream, or can he do it in his sleep?
Ready for next chap. :)
Date: 11/02/09 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
There is a certain cadence to the wordflow. It pulls you in and holds you, and doesn't let you go until the chapter is done. It's simply amazing, really.
Date: 11/02/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I literally screamed with glee when I saw this story was updated. I knew I was addicted halfway through the first chapter.
Awesome update. I love how Tom isn't sure what to do with it(Bill) and how he's totally acting like he needs to poke it with a big stick. I do wonder what it eats, or more specifically what about sex it needs to eat. Tom's energy, his spunky, the energy generated between two bodies. It seems that satisfying himself keeps him sated but is that like cannibalism?
I'm so totally looking forward to an update and what this story has to offer and where in the world it's going. I'm totally enthralled!
Date: 11/02/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am sure this whole story is going to be great. Loved this.
Date: 11/02/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL commetn here:I was wondering if Bill need not sex but come to feed himself o.O maybe if that was the anser he would feed himself with his own :O)
Also, if he's starving,it means he was without sex since a long time ago or he just needs it constantly? (he with the gypsies, these ugly smelly people of the story, it's just desgusting, really.I hope they did not liked him too much, at least it seems the had problems xD)
Date: 11/02/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
c'mon tom...just give him what he wants!!!
great fic!!hot hot XD
Date: 11/02/09 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am so fascinated with this world and I really wanna find out more! I hope all the updates are this fast :)
Date: 11/02/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg this story's soooo interesting! It's definately different too. Update soon please!
Date: 11/02/09 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love this! Its clever. And hot. Yum. Yum, yum, yum.