Date: 11/11/09 03:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow. Bill is almost a different person here, but no less appealing. I'm glad Tom has stopped thinking of him as an it, but I'm intrigued with their race now. The danachi, I mean.
Date: 11/11/09 03:27 am Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love this story! I saw the artwork you did for it at MTT and I realized I hadn't read the story yet. Now I'm dying to read more!! Bad idea... :D
Hope you post again soon. You've got me soo curious!!
Hugs,
Date: 11/11/09 01:53 am Title: Chapter 4
No, he does not in any way need trousers! Don't you dare make him wear trousers, Tom!
On a more sane note, I love how Bill's more, well, human in this one. He actually talks more, even if he keeps turning everything into sex, as Tom so elegantly put it.
Since I have no idea what a danachi is supposed to be like in real life, for obvious reasons, I can't help but get the feeling that they're much more human than the first few chapters with our lovely Bill here have led us to believe.
Date: 11/11/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter 4
Ohhhh, I never considered that Bill could actually use his magic to escape the chain, lol. Silly me! Thanks for posting bby!
Date: 11/11/09 12:20 am Title: Chapter 4
Commenting because I want you to keep posting. Not really sure what you want me to say other than, if you stop posting all the kittens in the world will die. Could you live with that? *sniffles* Evil...
Date: 11/10/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how your updating fast. This is so original, I love it! I want Bill to stay w. Tom though... why does he have to go North :(
Date: 11/10/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story, it's so enticing and just draws me in. It's so different and unique and that's often hard to come by. I enjoy Tom's insecurity around Bill it's refreshing that they don't just mesh right away and that there's so much more to Bill then what we're getting now, it keep me on the age of my seat and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 11/10/09 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like Bill behaving more natural! It threw me off but I enjoyed it so I'm on Tom's wavelength at least. lol poor Tom. Fun chapter!
Date: 11/10/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
It was really nice to finally get some actual conversation going between the two and learn a bit more about Bill. Before this everything was sexy but completely baffling. And Bill did seem redically more approachable in this chapter. I'm wodering if that's because his magic's been fueled a bit by him touching himself. And of course, can't wait till Tom gives in and does something with him.
Date: 11/10/09 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
So far I really like your story. It is certainly like nothing I've read before, but in a good way. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11/10/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love magik. There's something about it that pulls me in. It's so alluring and facinating. Bill holds magik, and I would like to know more about it.
Something tells me that these 2 are going on a bit of a road trip at some point in time...
Date: 11/10/09 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ok, so, I was away. And all I kept thinking was .. damn, Remnants wil be updated by now ... LOL!
I actually like that Tom is resisting for so long. Cause when it eventually goes down - and we all know it will - it's gonna go down hard! I will probably drool a bit, when it does...
Absolutely love this fic.
Date: 11/10/09 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story is just so original and enticing *_* I love the world you've created, so eerie and dead, with two strangers just trying to get by. Bill is really interesting and mysterious, I'd love to know more about him and about the things called danachi. Tom seems like a good guy so far, too, I like his character, as well :) Nice job, great idea and lovely writing!
Date: 11/10/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't tell you how much I'm already enjoying this story and how much I look forward to each update! :) I really liked this chapter, I liked their interaction and that they are now on a first-name basis though it was kind of sexy when Bill called Tom 'master' ;)
Date: 11/10/09 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
yaaaay!!!! Bill speaks! XD
this makes much more sense now, but not really... I'm loving it, and I hope you update soon.
bill is so sexy and tom so shy...the perfect recepy for love hehehe
Date: 11/10/09 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love the fact that Tom is resisting him for the time being ;) I also really like that Bill is talking more, for some reason.
♥ Reeeeally good so far!
Date: 11/10/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this fic so much. Bill becomes more fascinating to me with every new chapter and every new piece of information about him. No idea how on earth Tom keeps resisting him, but for some reason, that resistance makes this Tom all the more likable. Can't wait for the next update. :)
Date: 11/10/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
*pouts*
tom doesn't give in...he has a strong will..damn..bill has to try harder ;)..he's such a mystery
loving this...keep it coming
Date: 11/10/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill back-story, YAYY!! I get hte feling Bill's just luring Tom into a false sense of security...theehee!! <333
Date: 11/10/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
this story is incredible =]]
please keep writing. i've gotten so into this story i don't know if i'll be able to get out of it =]
