Date: 05/22/10 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhh wow *____*
I really don't know what to say to this except that the ending was magical. It truly was. And I adored it. Reading this story was so beautiful and touching and I'm so very glad you decided to share it with us, because it's truly been a pleasure reading :)
Date: 05/22/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
You didn't upset me at all. This chapter was so heartbreaking and I swear I was seeing everything that was going on like it was happening. It was so powerful and this whole fic just has a general aura around it of its own. It's so original and I love it so much. I can't believe I waited until after graduation to read this because it's truly amazing. I just...sdsfsfsfsf.
Poor Bill. But it warms my heart to know that his magic healed Tom x3
Date: 05/22/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
Tom needs to go North with Bill. Definitely. No question about it. I absolutely go crazy over the stories that have Bill wanting to protect Tom by bringing him somewhere for some reason. They get me every time and I found myself crying at the bit where Bill was begging Tom to come up North with him and saying that he would take care of him :')
Date: 05/22/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh oh oh :(
I thought Gustav was going to die last chapter when he was all sweaty and whatnot, but then he did die and I'm still sad. The poor guy. He was so important to everyone and he never did anything that was detrimental to the camp :( Not like anyone else who died did, but...oh, you know what I mean.
:'(
Date: 05/22/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
Making love :') That's so beautiful. Usually it's so cheesy but I think the contrast between sex and making love that Bill used was what got me.
I can't believe there's only four more chapters *__*
Date: 05/22/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh no D:
Please don't tell me Tom's going to get infected, or worse yet, Bill. I don't think I could handle seeing one of them get infected with such a terrible disease :'(
Date: 05/22/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Bill healed Tom? ;____;
Or was that just him hallucinating XD
Anyway. I think I'm on Team Bill right now. He needed sex and Tom needs to get the fuck over it. It's not that he just wants it a lot. He needs it. It's the blood through his veins and it's what he's designed to do. Tom took him in and he knew what he was, and so he shouldn't be feeling like Bill's trying to use him. It broke my heart when he went into the room and Bill was screaming :'(
Date: 05/22/10 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Geez, I've never seen anyone write post-apocalyptic-style, diseased death as well as you do. It's like a fucking book. I love it so much <3 Never stop having such a wonderful writing talent. Not like you have a choice, anyway XD
Must be terrible to fall prey to the disease, though :(
Date: 05/22/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awh. Bill was willing to stop craving sex for his Tomi. How sweet is he? I mean, honestly. If I had a craving like he did for it, I'd be like, "Mofo, you give me some sex right now or I'll slit your fucking throat and leave you bleeding glitter out of your anus for weeks." But Bill's a sweetheart, so he doesn't do that. Plus, he loves his Tomi x3
Date: 05/22/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
Haha, that's great. Starting a car with sex. Hey, I think I could get used to that if I had a danachi!Bill ;)
But anyway, I'm excited to see where they're going to take the car now. Maybe use it to go up North? And then Bill will take them past the wall to see the world behind it? [/song pun funneh]
Date: 05/22/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha, Bill, you sly fox ;)
Oh, and this was bugging me:
Would he really want Tom this much if he hadn’t been craving the sex?
I believe you meant 'Bill', not 'Tom', but that's just me being a bitch XD
This story is wonderful :') I love it.
Date: 05/22/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awh, Bill's fricking adorable like all magicky and stuff x3
I'm so glad I waited until this was finished because if it wasn't then I would have to wait for an entire week. But I don't, so lucky me :D Anyway, Bill's just a fricking ball of cute and sunshine and whatever when he's talking about magic and his mom and yeah :')
Date: 05/22/10 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Mm, I adore the futuristic society you have here. It's really interesting and very detailed while still remaining very vague and that's something that makes my heart happy :D
Can't wait to see what awaits Bill and Tom :D
Date: 05/22/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awh. Tom needs to realize he's falling for Bill even if it doesn't seem like it yet. He's going to fall head-over-heels pretty soon because of Bill's magic...and not just the danachi kind either ;)
By the way, I love how you haven't even mentioned Bill's name yet. That takes a lot of self-control for people like me who want to introduce everyone who even slightly appears in the story in the first chapter XD
Date: 05/22/10 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awh ;___; Tom, you idiot. Bill needs sex, not food. And when he says he doesn't eat human food, he means he only eats sex, you thickheaded moron >.> Gosh. I love how you're making me hate how stupid Tom is already XD
Date: 05/15/10 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
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Date: 05/09/10 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
you must first know that this kind of stories terrify me, but once i started i just couldn't stop! The story is great, amazing. I loved it.
Date: 05/07/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Is it weird that Bill's voice has a calming effect on me after reading your story? I don't know why, but it's seriously never had that effect on me before I read this beautiful masterpiece... just thought I'd share that oddity. Anyway, I absolutely loved your story, if you hadn't gathered. The writing was just marvelous, I can't believe I waited this long to finish reading... I thought the plot was genius, and Bill and Tom's growing relationship was very... well, the only word I can use to describe their relationship was 'pretty', for some reason. I think this was possibly the most beautiful piece of fiction I have ever read.
So thank you for writing it, thank you for posting it, and thank you for taking the time to attach your amazing artwork.
Axela.
Date: 05/05/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
I think I commented only yesterday when I read the first chapter and now I am finished! I really enjoyed reading this story. The plot was unique, your descriptions of the seting were vivid, and the dynamics between the characters under the extreme circumstances seemed very realistic. As I mentioned before, I really enjoy your works and my only regret is not having read this fic sooner. You are an excellent writer and I will definitely fave this story.
Date: 05/04/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh I can't believe I just started this! The beginning seems very promising and I am going to keep reading! I have a thing with Bill calling Tom "Master", a very good thing in fact. I love all your stories and I think this AU won't disappoint.
BTW I think I might be this story's 1000th reviewer :3