Date: 11/02/10 11:37 pm Title: Histrionic
lovely. hot. =)
Date: 07/28/10 02:08 am Title: Histrionic
haha. Hot.
Author's Response: XD Thanks!
Date: 02/22/10 07:00 am Title: Histrionic
*seedy laughter*
Author's Response: xD<3
Date: 11/21/09 11:51 pm Title: Histrionic
I really enjoyed all the things Bill did to get Tom's attention. And I love that Tom wanted Bill right form the beginning. I wish that there had been more evidence of that and that Bill would have been inspired by that. But I love that he was inspired by lack of attention as well.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this was more of a quick cutesy thing with not a lot of depth, lol, I probably should've added more XD But thanks anyway!
Date: 10/30/09 04:48 pm Title: Histrionic
Cute, however I really wish u had expianed the thoughts the twins were having, struggling w their feelings, etc. Cuz like this it seemed a bit out of the blue that Bill showed up in Tom's bedroom ready to fuck. I'll always love Bill in a miniskirt tho, lol. Thanks for writing! :)
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah. I guess it was kind of supposed to be more cutesy than delve into their emotions, but I could've added it in a bit more. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 10/29/09 10:49 pm Title: Histrionic
I noticed the sections you mentioned above it started out kinda cutesy/annoying/funny but got smuttyer as it progressed.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's how it was supposed to go. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/29/09 11:40 am Title: Histrionic
wooooah that was awesome! even without the sex!
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks! I'm glad you liked it ^^
Date: 10/29/09 07:05 am Title: Histrionic
Cute,it was, indeed. I liked it, though I would have dwelled a bit more on their feelings, but as it was, it was pretty lighthearted and cute.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
rnYeah, I agree, I probably should have added more on their feelings. But thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 10/29/09 12:48 am Title: Histrionic
You did a great job, love! I really liked the cute & silly slipping into the crossdressing/smut.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :) I'm glad you liked it!