Date: 04/30/23 09:05 pm Title: Twins?
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 11/16/12 02:45 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel!
Date: 07/06/12 10:40 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
i sobbed so bad when Tom started ignoring Bill D: Good job with the fic btw!!
Date: 08/04/11 08:54 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
Fuckin' amazing!
Date: 06/28/11 08:16 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
This was the best Three-Shot I have ever read in this Category! Great job! The feelings were the most greatly described, wow!
Date: 08/09/10 01:41 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
omg that was tr best 3 shot ever i was so happy in thanks so much for writeing this lovley,cute,and and heartwarming fic,,i'm lost for words,,,there so cute togther :D
Author's Response: Aww thank yooou! :D The best? #^^# *giggles* You seriously just made the rest of my night (; *gives huge, fluffy hug*
Date: 08/09/10 12:50 pm Title: Brothers?
omg ,when he said i don't want to be your brother.all i was thinking was that he hateted him or whanted his love..i really loved this chapter :)
Author's Response: Yeah imaginge if he'd hated him Oo Poor boys! But, he didn't so that's just good xD Thank you so much!
Date: 08/09/10 04:06 am Title: Twins?
awwwww wow i loved this so very much your writeng made me smile so much ,,i love this chapter so much,,omg there not twins o.0 wow but they love eathother so very much..my heart went so fast reading the bit when they kissed it was so cute,and i'm so glad there so lovely to eathother..awww poor bill tho he think's it's wrong.well i can't wait to read the next chapter ,,~love Nina oxoxo~
Author's Response: Uhh thank you!! :D No, they're not twins; that's my own little twist to the (in my opinion) over-used plot with adoption ^^' I'm glad you like it!
Date: 06/02/10 04:50 am Title: Foster-brothers?
I just want you to know that I loved your story :D
When Tom ignored Bill after the kiss, and when Bill found out that he would never find out about his biological parents, well those parts made me cry..
And I read the 2 first chapters at home, and I found it so addictive that I nearly missed my bus xD
So I just thought you should know that someone else loved your story too :D
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D You just made my night (; It always makes me so happy when someone likes my stories (especially when they're addicted enough to nearly miss their busses (; - and cry! Making people cry just from a story is such a big thing :D) So, yearh, thanks!
Date: 03/10/10 04:55 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
Fine, I'm here again as promised (:
I did read your reply but I bloody hope I wasn't being too critical. The thing is, when I point out things that leave me confused, I make them sound like they spoilt the story, but it's not like that. In fact I do enjoy reading, there's nothing I love more. As well as I enjoyed this lovely fic. :)
Ehm...yes, I have two or three little things to point out this time too. Actually it's just one, basically. I'm not sure I fully enoyed Tom's character. He pretty much sounded like a puppet, no offence. Does his life involve something that is not Bill? Does he ever think of something that's not Bill? Does he ever speak of something else? Lol sorry I just couldn't help myself, I'm extremely sorry. The point is that he sounded like dumb. All his life seems to revolve around Bill. I understand the delicate moment, and that probably at the moment Bill totally needs him, but I think that Tom is a complete dumbass. Very cute at the same time though, :)
And YAY for sexy first scene! To be honest, all those Bill&Tom moments were just worked in a very sweet way. Long scenes, a proper mix between sexiness and fluff. :) I really liked them.
There's not much else to say, I did appreciate the fact that you tried to come up with an original plot. It was fluent, in fact. Ohhh! I almost forgot!
Last time I said "great opening!", then this time I just must say great ending as well! I loved the way you developed the concept of reflection and mirror. Seriously, that was just lovely, it seems like a story with a moral in fact. :)
Nice job!
Author's Response: First of: no, you weren't too critical at all, I enjoy reading reviews that doesn't only point out the good things but the "bad" as well. It's what makes me better, as I said (;rn You know what? I acutally think you might be right, speaking of Tom's character. I didn't spend a lot of time developing him and maybe (obviously xD) that shows - which is why I now know that I should spend more time making up my characters in other stores (I already do that, but it's still nice to have my own thoughts and speculations regarding my older characters confirmed (; )rn I'm really glad you enjoyed the sex and fluff too, since you don't seem like a reader who just loves everything (not that I'm saying anything's wrong with that xD) but one who looks at the story a bit more critically (: -Also, thank you so much for all the compliments and sweet words, your two reviews have totally made my days! :D I do hope you'll read and enjoy other of my stories in the future ^^
Date: 03/09/10 01:07 pm Title: Brothers?
Mmmm. I need to go away soon, this is why I'm reviewing the first two chapters, I'll read the third when I'm back.
First of all, I really like the idea of the plot - Bill being the foster child in Tom's family, and all the repercussions on their relationship. In fact I absolutely loved the fact that when the story starts, Bill has just found out he doesn't biologically belong to that family. I also liked how you took your time to describe their feelings.
Though I must say that I think in stories like this one, it's difficult to deal with this subject, because the twins must both be coping with so many intense thoughts floating inside their minds that it gets hard for the author to capture them all in a believable way. I appreciated the fact that you didn't try to picture them all together making the story confusing; reading it was very fluent in fact. I liked that Bill still considers Tom his brother, but then the kiss definitely changes something between them; I think that Bill could've been more...I don't know...confused? Personally I would be. It's okay to take things in and let them be, but...
"I don't like feeling this awkward around Tom. He's my brother for crying out loud." - Okay so, he's found out just recently that he's not Tom's twin, and now he's probably about to find his real family, and he even has just KISSED Tom. Doesn't he realise that something has actually changed?
"I have to bit my lips in order not to squeal highly." - Mmm. I understand the excitement, but the moment was serious, so...squeal...highly?
And then there's the kiss.
"Maybe he is mad because of the whole kissing-thing?" - Bill's to much of a naive. Of course Tom's in a pensive mood for that reason, and it's obviously a GOOD reason.
"I mean, it wasn't even bad - in fact it was a fantastic kiss!" - Heee, Tom's a good kisser, both in fics and real life (...I'm just guessing, GUESSING xD), but in their case, does it even matter? There has been the kiss, THAT'S IT. Fantastic or not, it should make them go completely confused, that's how it should be. I don't think it matters if the kiss was fantastic or not...
I know I sound harsh there, I'm so sorry. I sound like I didn't like the fiction, when it's not really like that, I just pointed out little things that won't surely change my general opinion about the story. In fact I really liked it; first, because it makes me feel like I'm reading one of my first twincests ever, and secondly, it deals with so many feelings that it's adorable, seriously.
There are two parts that I particularly appreciated. One was the opening. I think that an opening has to be brilliant - well, it's not that I get to read many brilliant openings so often. Yours is great, not only because of the mirror (mirrors are an element that I *personally* love so much. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it when someone, whoever it is, looks into the mirror and sees a stranger, whatever the reason. I LOVE IT), but because you linked it with the rest of the story in a very cute and smart way at the same time. :) Seriously, good job.
The second thing is the kiss. It was well written. Long scenes are always my favourites, and I adored that you took so long to describe it, both the kiss and their sensations going on at the moment. :)
It was really sweet. :)
I'm going to read the third chapter sometime soon, bye!
Author's Response: Wow I was blown away even before reading, just by the lenght of your review! ;D I'm so, so happy you took the time to sit down and really write what was good AND bad because that's what gives me the chance to improve as a writer (: As for the plot, I couldn't wait to get started when I first thought of it since I've seen sooo many stories where they're twins seperated at birht etc. etc. and I wanted to add my own twist - to turn it upside down (:rn First of all, it makes me so happy that you like the story (: (Personally I'm not really that fond of it when I re-read it now, but, whatever (; ) And some of the things you pointed out as good and bad are parts that I adore or hate myself, as the opening for one. I'm actually kinda proud of that (; Haha. And when I read it through now (I actually did just a couple of days ago xD) I almost have to stop and log off 'cause I really think some of the parts are rushed and not at all well-explained (as their feelings about the kiss; the confusion as you mentioned and stuff like that)rn Oh and yes, we can defiantly agree on the fact that Tom HAS to be a good kisser. He simply has to! xDrn But, thanks for the (very long) review :D It really made me smile and feel just a bit more happy about the story (; I do hope the last chapter won't dissapoint you ^^,
Date: 02/03/10 04:34 am Title: Foster-brothers?
omg i like this fic it was short and awesome........but u got me wanting more of the foster-brothers........i think u should try to write a part 2....
Author's Response: Thank you! :Drnrn Oh, really? I haven\'t thought about it before but maybe I will. At least I could easily put some ideas down on paper (: I\'m glad you want more ;D
Date: 12/05/09 01:12 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
thank you! :D this was such a nice story. And I liked it was short, too.
Author's Response: No, thank YOU ;b I thougth about making it longer, but I figured it would be a waste. There\'s nothing else to say in it :brnrn Thanks for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 11/18/09 03:24 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
aww, that was PERFECT!!! and very sexy, might i add... :d x
Author's Response: Well, thank you! :D I\'m glad you enjoyed it ^^,
Date: 11/07/09 12:56 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
Awwww this is sooooooooooo cute ^.^
I love it!
Author's Response: Yay, thanks a lot :D I\'m glad you enjoyed it ^^
Date: 11/02/09 01:14 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
Aaaaaw, that was hot and fucking amazing!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks ;D It was my first time of real Tom/Bill action xD Y'know; all the way... xD
Date: 11/02/09 05:18 am Title: Foster-brothers?
wow, i really loved this!!!!!!! im looking forward to another great story from you!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot! #^^# I\'ll make sure to post one, then (; Glad you loved this ^^
Date: 11/01/09 11:24 pm Title: Foster-brothers?
I'm glad everything worked out for everyone in the end.
Author's Response: Yaerh ^^ Happy endings are the best though the sad ones are needed sometimes. Thanks for reading and reviewing (:
Date: 11/01/09 11:17 pm Title: Brothers?
That was a terrible thing for Bill to say, they are his real family, they loved him and raised him. That's real enough for me.
Author's Response: Yearh I think so too but Bill just tried getting and reaction from Tom. Luckily he doesn\'t really feel like that (;
Date: 11/01/09 11:02 pm Title: Twins?
I feel like the kissing came out of nowhere but at least from Bill's end it had been building.
Author's Response: Oh, I tried building it up though, maybe it didn\'t work out all that well? But thanks for reviewing anyway :]