Reviews For Breaking It Down
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Reviewer: undrockroll Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

review test!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1

awe Tom is sad and pathetic. It's so heart wrenching. I just want to hug them both. They just need hugs and love and support when they're all broken like this.

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1

This made me cry.
I absolutely love your writing.
The way you described how Tom feels and how Bill reacts on it, just wow. *speechless*

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Very nice series. The angst is phenomenal. Loved this part, too

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Maria

Reviewer: cChompinAa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/09 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

simply beautiful.

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Incredibly touching and moving. That's how it is, you hurt people you love and it always will keep happening, but in the end, they'll always be there for you.

Reviewer: sheerac50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

This made me cry. Their emotions are so real and painful. *hugs boys*

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so heartbreaking ;_; But still so beautiful...

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh.... You know, I think this is going to go on my favorite serieses next to Keepers universe. To be the second one there. I don't favorite anything lightly, but this feels like a series woreth it. I like this series a lot. It's so breaking my heart in tiny pieces, but there is still something more; genuine affection underneath all the pain.

And the most beautiful part here is your amazingly genuine, sharp, realistic and understanding way to write Tom's mental breakdown and anxiety. It's heartbreaking, because.. I just know. Been there, done that. You write it in a way I can relate to every single emotion written here. They are no artificial and I can't help but to think that maybe you too have some sort of own experience? Maybe.. Or you just write so well. It's touching to read something so real.

Thank you for this series!

Reviewer: Buyyouadrank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

This whole series is a little heartbreaking but it's so beautifully written that I can't stop reading!

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ugh, I feel for Tom so much in this. I can just feel Bill's needs and demands eclipsing him, but I can't blame Bill either really--they both have this strange co-dependency going on and they hurt each other without meaning it even though they love each other so much. *sigh*

Reviewer: VerbalAssault Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so beautiful. Do you suffer from depression? This is just so... spot-on, accurate. Everything about it is so realistic and believable and RIGHT. This is so amazing. I love how you put in that Tom doesn't know WHEN it started. When I go into a low, that's exactly how I feel. This is just amazing.

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1

This series is so sad! I've cried during every story! XD

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1

These boys are breaking my heart. I can see why you asked for fluff last night. So painful, so wrenchingly real.

Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1

u made me cry :(

Reviewer: Haylz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1

D: So damn good. ♥

I love how the twins have taken over your brain COMPLETELY.

Thank you gul ._. ♥

Reviewer: Chayenne7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 03:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Isn't it great when you are on a roll? I mean the same thing happened to me with Keepers Universe. It started somewhere and then the stories just came, until a whole world was wrapped around the core. You don't have to bother with storyline continuity or necessary connecting parts, only the inmportant stuff, only what matters. This is pure indulgence. I'm so glad you've found this universe for yourself. It's a joy to read, even if it is so very, very painful.

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh jeez. *pets Tomi*

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Ugh....
I love you.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww, Tom! *hugs him*

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