Date: 03/23/10 07:42 am Title: 4
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!
That is what I think about this so far.
It is one of my favourite fics at the moment and every time it get's updated I give a little leap of joy ^_^
Tom is so adorable... With the mum walking out and the red clothing. I love that ^_^
GOD I love thos so much!!!
Update soon!!!!!!!!
xx
Date: 03/22/10 05:04 pm Title: 4
This is my way favourite fic at the moment! :D
Author's Response: I'm honored that you like it that much! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/22/10 12:16 pm Title: 4
beautiful chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/22/10 06:36 am Title: 4
This definitely has me intrigued, really wanting to watch the train wreck, though I hope there are survivours =)
Author's Response: I hope so too. :) Thank you for the review! I appreciate it
Date: 03/22/10 01:23 am Title: 4
;_; I can feel the sorrow, regret and heartbreak as Bill recalls the story. Its gonna be devastating. Gustav and Jenny are bitches, just saying.
Author's Response: Those are the emotions I was trying to convey :) ...Haha, yeah, they are. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/22/10 01:19 am Title: 4
You have me hanging on your every word. Wow.
Author's Response: :) I'm flattered that you're so into it! Thank you for the review
Date: 03/22/10 12:44 am Title: 4
You really, really know how to make a character that I want to stab. ._.
The ending of this chapter is amazing. I love the drunken feeling to it, done very well. And the sneaky way Tom cuddles into Bill and holds his hand. *sigh* Wonderful.
Author's Response: Lol I'm guessing that would be Jenny ;) Oh my, just wait... Thank you! Glad you liked the bit of fluffiness (:
Date: 02/26/10 02:29 pm Title: 3
BAH INTERUPTION
lol
I missed this story =]
Author's Response: I know, dangit! Aw thanks for the review :D
Date: 02/23/10 12:31 am Title: 3
This story is so intriguing! I squeed a bit when I saw the update. And the tension at the end was wonderful. :D
Author's Response: Ooooh glad you think so! Hehe thank you. <3
Date: 02/22/10 06:02 am Title: 3
God I was just siting here chanting 'kiss him. Kiss him. Kiss him.' Im not quite sure who I wanted to do the actual kissing but meh, they're both dudes, it'd work both was XD
Oh my GOD I really like this!!
It's so...
So...
Interesting!
I love how it's all like a flashback, it just makes everything seem... I dunno... More real?
Oh well, update soon, please!!
xx
Author's Response: Kissing comes later! :P Thank you, I'm so so glad you like it!
Date: 02/22/10 05:35 am Title: 2
OHMY GOD!!!!!!!!
I read the first chapter of this story AND I COMPLETELY LOST TRACK!
HOW COOOUUULLLDDD I??????
lol I HAVE to go read more of this now!!
I remember thinking bout it the other day! lol
I have to go listen to hakuna matata now,.
I Love that song lol
Author's Response: Lol how could you?! :PP Kidding, of course! Haha you should definitely go read more now. :) I LOOOOOVE hakuna matata--what a wonderful phrase! Thank you for the review lol
Date: 02/21/10 06:49 pm Title: 3
this story is so intriguing. can't wait for more :]]
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thank you for the review :D
Date: 02/21/10 02:36 pm Title: 3
it's just three chapters and i'm in love with this atory already, it is beautiful. update soon! :D
Author's Response: That makes me happy! Thank you!
Date: 02/21/10 11:19 am Title: 3
I love how this chapter has illucidated some of the mysteries of the last chapter! Hearing about Vanessa's observations and then Tom's revelation...this is really starting to get complex!
Author's Response: Indeed, it is! This is only the beginning of the complexity. :P I'm playing off of the song lyric "We were all in love and we all got hurt." Thank you very much for the review! Glad you're still reading this :)
Date: 02/21/10 10:27 am Title: 3
D'aww... this looks like it's going to have an angsty ending.. but I'm reading it anyhow. :) Love your stories!
Author's Response: Maybe! There are two possible endings that I'm debating between at the moment. Thank you so much! :D
Date: 02/21/10 09:52 am Title: 3
Omg this update made my day...I was listening to the song white houses the other day and wondered when the next update would be and here it is....Tom is definitely mysterious not quite sure what to make of him.....I like vanessa she seems nice, I also like Gustav but I think it's because he was the second haracter we meet in this story.....and Jenny I really don't like her.....loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad it made your day! :D Don't worry, we'll get to know Tom veryyy well in the near future. And yes, Jenny's a bit...well, I'll leave her for you to judge haha! Thanks for the lovely review :)
Date: 02/21/10 09:02 am Title: 3
Oh...it's lovely. I have a theory but it's a stupid one. Is vanessa going to write "White Houses" later on? O.o
Just reading this makes me teary
Author's Response: That's actually a wonderful theory!! I was toying with the idea myself but then I thought 'hmm, that wouldn't really make sense' because in the song, Vanessa is the main character who falls inlove with the boy in the red shirt, but in this story it's Bill who does. Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/21/10 07:34 am Title: 1
Dude, I'm so into this! When can we expect another update? :)
Author's Response: I'm so flattered! Um, my updates are usually random and based on inspiration..
Date: 02/21/10 05:20 am Title: 3
thank you so much for updating
Author's Response: you're welcome! thank you for reviewing :)
Date: 01/17/10 10:55 am Title: 2
AH DUDE this was amazing! This reminds me of that song by Vanessa Carlton, White Houses, down to the last t. I LOVE THAT SONG! Is that where you got inspiration? Please pleeease dont stop, I'm so curious! WHY DID THEY BREAK UUUP? Aww, now I'm going to be miserable until I find out why :(
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, if you read the story notes I mention that this song is entirely based off of that song. Haha it will all be revealed in time! Thank you for the review :D