Date: 06/01/10 03:52 pm Title: 6
well... update or i'll kill myself.
it's your choice.
Date: 05/29/10 08:05 pm Title: 1
Wow, this is definately the best fic I've read here, I just love the way you describe everything! You're really talented, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
(And btw, I've actually never written a review before, so I kind of don't know what to write. But I thought since I totally love this story I had to say something.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're very sweet and I'm honored that you're enjoying it so much! :) I'm also flattered to be the recipient of your first review. Thank you thank you for such a lovely review I really appreciate it.
Date: 05/29/10 04:26 pm Title: 6
omg omg omgg
ahhh i hate cliffhangers like these!
*bites nails*
Author's Response: hehe! thanks for the review :) next chapter is finally up!
Date: 05/29/10 04:15 pm Title: 6
How dare you to stop here.. :o
*pouts
Author's Response: sorry! :)
Date: 05/29/10 09:24 am Title: 6
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE LIKE NOW!!
I ADORE this fic!! I am SO happy it was updated again! PLEASE!! I DO NOT COPE WELL UNDER CLIFF HANGERS!!!
xx
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you still like it! :DD I'm sorry for being a meany with cliff hangers! I just posted the next chap
Date: 05/28/10 11:01 pm Title: 6
Dude I love this story. The cliffhanger was meaaaannn!
Date: 05/28/10 10:28 pm Title: 6
Noooo cliffhanger ! You better give me that other part soon ! lol I think I already mentioned this but I HATE this girl ! grrrr
Author's Response: I just posted it :D Haha Jenny is unlikable at the moment, I agree.
Date: 05/28/10 07:45 pm Title: 6
oh laaa..... UPDATE!
Author's Response: ok!
Date: 05/28/10 07:13 pm Title: 6
This story will be the death of me! Between the cryptic and somber clues Bill is giving in the beginning, to the evil cliffie, I'm dying! This really was a great chapter, especially since we now have Jenny catching on. Gah, I'm so anxious to know what's going to happen!
Author's Response: I swear I'm not trying to kill you!! :P Thank you so much. I appreciate the review! :)
Date: 05/28/10 12:21 pm Title: 6
Oh, fuck you, Jenny! :C
Now I want Bill to be kissed by Tom as if there's no tomorrow just so she can die with her jealousy until the end of time because she will never be as fierce as Bill is with Tom!
Author's Response: HAHA well said! :D I guess we'll just have to see what happens, hmmmmmm. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 05/28/10 05:39 am Title: 6
GOD I love this story! I'm ecstatic that you've started updating it again :) The heavy tension is so palpable you can almost touch it! I can only wish I could write like this. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: It makes me happy that you like it! :D Thank you, you're so sweet. I appreciate the review!
Date: 05/28/10 04:25 am Title: 6
JENNY IS SO EVIL I CANT TAKE IT
HIDE BILL RUN
SLAP DAT HOE AND KICK HER OUTTA YOUR HOUSE
AHHHHH
Author's Response: I just laughed so hard! Lol, love your reviews!
Date: 05/28/10 01:33 am Title: 6
I really have missed this fic. It feels like it's been an eternity since I've left you a comment. I'm really loving this though. Jenny is so evil. I kind of love it. Well, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm glad you took the time to leave a comment, it means alot :) Haha, she's pretty mean, yeah, I wouldn't say EVIL. I'll have an update within the next week! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 05/28/10 01:02 am Title: 6
GAH! Woman! That's a hell of a cliffhanger! I can't even review properly. ._.
That Jenny is evil. I know she is. D:
Author's Response: Mwahaha! I'm sorry to leave you hanging. I'm almost done with the next chapter so it will probably be posted sooner than I usually post (lol). Jenny is definitely an interesting character. I have a feeling you'll love her even more later on! Thank you for the review!
Date: 05/28/10 12:05 am Title: 6
of course you had to split it and torment us, but i'm sure the wait will be worth it.
Author's Response: haha I'm sorry! I sure hope so. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/23/10 08:50 am Title: 5
I saved this story a few days ago on my cellphone and only had the chance to read it this morning in a train to home. And let me say, I think you put me almost crying in the middle of all those people.
The story is beautiful. I love how you always put a little bit of Bill and Mary's conversation, it's actually what makes me really sad because from what I understood Bill and Tom aren't together anymore and seeing how they easily connected and developed their feelings since the very beginning makes it all sad. I like the way you write and describe things, it almost feels like I'm there and this last scene is one of the most perfect mental images I had the pleasure to imagine. Tom teaching Bill playing the piano is just too damn adorable and I couldn't imagine a perfect scene to describe a first teen love.
I like the whole idea of Tom being Bill's first love and how he sounds so young compared with Tom.
I'm still waiting for you to surprise me and actually put these two together at the end because when I read Bill thinking about how Mary needs to know this wasn't an ending like those in the stories, it really breaks my heart. (maybe I'm too sensitive these days! u_u). I just don't want Tom to be a coward and chose Jenny over Bill. Their feelings looks so pure and beautiful, you can't just destroy something like that. IT'S WRONG!! :(
I see you don't update this pretty often but I being honest when I say I can't wait to read more of this and I'll be praying for you to update as fast as you can.
Congrats for the amazing work, hope you keep working on it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Your review was just amazing. I love when people leave long, detailed reviews. It makes me happy to know that you're looking forward to more :) And again, thank you, I appreciate the feedback!
Date: 05/18/10 04:01 am Title: 5
So gorgeous. The entire story is awesome :D
I just wanna know what happens now :P
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Ooh, don't worry, much is to come! :)
Date: 05/16/10 06:02 pm Title: 5
LOVE IT! UPDATE GURL!
Author's Response: glad you do! :D
Date: 05/16/10 04:45 am Title: 5
I like the way you write is so soft and tender like playig a really good piano song, or the sound of typing arounf midnight.
Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely compliment :)
Date: 05/15/10 06:25 pm Title: 5
Girl, the piano scene was intense! Go figure that's the only hold the bitch has over Tom. This just can't bode well for Tom and his father.
Author's Response: Haha thanks! Oh no, it definitely does not. Thank you for the review!