Date: 01/02/11 05:42 am Title: 8
I waited for this forever, thought you didn't on this site anymore.
I feel like I'm the luckiest person in the world today :))
Date: 06/27/10 10:22 am Title: 7
this story is like nothing i've ever read before, its incredible! the plot is amazing. i have a feeling this story is going to be one that shall make me cry at the end of it! i love it! i cant wait till the next chapter.
Date: 06/25/10 01:29 pm Title: 7
this is fascinating!!!! i love it! update more soon!
Date: 06/24/10 02:47 pm Title: 1
Poor Bill! I just want to give him a big cuddle ;o *Loves*
Date: 06/23/10 03:16 pm Title: 7
Ahhhh! Mein head is all jumbled :( Dont know what to believe!
Date: 06/22/10 10:24 pm Title: 7
OMg their kiss was just so perfect ! I’m glad they were able to have a moment alone and forget Jenny for a while...
And oh boy.... What. A. Bitch. !!!!!
Date: 06/22/10 11:55 am Title: 7
FUUUUUUUUCK!!! I HATE THAT STUPID LYING COW! WHO THE FUCK DOES SHE THINK SHE IS TO BE SPINNING OUT SUCH COMPLETE BULLSHIT????FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK
IHATEHER!!!!!!!!!
but, I gotta say that the kissing at the start, yeah, i love that bit ;D BUTICAN'TGETOVERWHATAWHOREJENNYIS!
I think it's lie, personally.
Abe, you are now my favourite author. Lavendar Field, Breathe Away and this are just so fucking amazing. I'm totally obsessed with ALL of your work!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!
ANY OF THEM!!!
I'LL FUCKING DIE IF YOU DON'T!!
Date: 06/21/10 08:28 pm Title: 7
Ummm, wow. I honestly don't envy Bill right now, the poor thing ;_; Especially since he's having a harder time trying to determine who and what to believe than I am.
This is amazing, hun. I'm definitely enjoying your 'tangled web of deceit' and I can't wait to find out what's next! ♥
Date: 06/21/10 07:52 pm Title: 7
Fuck me I love this story! You are one of those rare people who can write tension SO palpable that you feel it jumps out of the page an straight into your head, you can feel ALL of it. It is a wonderful thing to lose yourself in stories like these. Please don't lose interest in this wonder piece, I don't think I could take it if you stopped updating :)
Date: 06/21/10 03:14 pm Title: 7
Jenny is a liaaar :)
Author's Response: Or is she...? Tis the question!
Date: 06/21/10 12:18 pm Title: 7
Oh my god- I love this story! It's so well written and i love how it's structured with it being past and present. I feel so sad for Bill, especially when he is remembering the past and Jenny really annoys me! I want her to back off and let Tom and Bill be together!
Cant wait for the next chapters! x
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so so glad you're liking it! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 06/21/10 08:18 am Title: 7
GAAAH I hate Jenny she's a bitch. Poor poor Tom though and poor bill being put through it all. I loved this chapter can't wait for the next one :)
Author's Response: Hahaha. THANK YOU! :D
Date: 06/21/10 04:29 am Title: 7
Tangled web of deceit - exactly what i was thinking - gosh i dont know who to believe and now im on the edge i want u to up date the entire story now lol...nah i can wait this is soo intriguing!
ps - i still dont like jenny i think shes too manipulative but i wouldn't trust vanessa either. But instead of believing anyone else i think Bill should talk to Tom and get his side of the story
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it :) And yes, that is very wise advice.
Date: 06/21/10 03:44 am Title: 7
Bill can't just believe Jenny so easily when he knows she wants Tom for herlsef. I know you always feel kinda confused in these situations and there's always an "if..." but if Bill liked Tom THAT much he would at least try to trust him, not just stop whatever they're having, right after getting out of Jenny's house. Shame on you Bill!!
He needs to talk with Tom not just run away because that makes him a coward. Gosh, the beginning of the chapter was so good how could you just end it like this?? xD I want a Tomi like this to myself, not fair.
Anyway, I feel addicted to this story so I'll definitely be waiting for more, that's for sure.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's not that Bill actually believes Jenny, he's only dis-continuing their thing together because he realizes how many problems it can cause and how many people it can upset. I'll explain in the next chap :) But yes, he definitely needs to talk with Tom. Hehe I want a Tomi too! :D Awesome, I'm so glad you like it. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 06/21/10 02:11 am Title: 7
it's really good!! at some points, jenny sounds so convincing & in my head i'm thinking 'don't believe her, bill, don't give in to her evil ways!! i can't wait for future updates :D [btw, i really love lavender fields. i would like it if you updated sometime ;P]
Author's Response: Hey, there could be some truth to her statements! You never know. ;) Thanks! Umm, well, I've still got to find the time and motivation to write the next chapter of Lavender Field, but hopefully it will be soon?
Date: 06/21/10 01:48 am Title: 7
Oohh who and what to believe?? Gosh I feel sorry for Tom more than anyone in all of this, he's stuck in the middle with every one making decisions for him.
Author's Response: Tis the question! You're right, Tom hasn't really had a say in any of this madness, has he? Thank you so much for the review :)rn
Date: 06/21/10 01:25 am Title: 7
Is she evil? YES. Okay, maybe not evil but definitely selfish and manipulative. I'm sure she really does have her own reasons but that's no excuse. Idk.
Hell with it. I'm going with evil. xD
Author's Response: Definitely selfish and manipulative. POSSIBLY evil. But is she truthful? Hmm... Thank you so much for the review! :) Btw, are you still willing to look over that one shot I sent you? If you can't, I totally understand, though! I was just wondering.
Date: 06/11/10 03:23 pm Title: 6
OMG!! no i would have LOVED the super long chapter! :(
Date: 06/09/10 07:45 pm Title: 6
ahhh, i hate cliffhangers that are really good!!! this wasa good chapter, though :D
Author's Response: thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback :D