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Reviewer: final_thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/09 03:02 pm Title: 2

this is so great! and entertaining! Bill is so awkward haaaaaaaa i like it

Author's Response: He's just a seventeen year old like any other ;] thanks!

Reviewer: staggeringenius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/09 01:42 pm Title: 2

I had no idea you were working on something else, but I like it. It seems pretty interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Author's Response: Yes, my new project!! I mean, it's a horrible idea to work on 5+ stories at a time, but I just can't help it. I'm really glad that you find it interesting :) thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/09 01:27 pm Title: 2

I loved it. I like that you're taking it slow. It's very well written, too; I can barely make myself look away from the screen x]

Good job =] , much love

Author's Response: Thank you! That means alot! I'm sooo glad.

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/09 01:27 pm Title: 2

I loved it. I like that you're taking it slow. It's very well written, too; I can barely make myself look away from the screen x]

Good job =] , much love

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! :D

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 09:56 pm Title: 2

This is just so cool! I love how cryptic and mysterious things are turning out to be. And the angst! I can see it coming any moment now and I'm both curious and reluctant. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!! Ohhhh yes, it's definitely coming, but not for a while. :) So glad you're enjoying this!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 08:06 pm Title: 2

This is so different from your other story and yet, no less intriguing! I need to know what's going on, because it seems that Bill's past with Tom is filled with both good and bad and I get the feeling that Tom is not in it anymore, but I just need to know why. 

I don't know what to think about the girls yet, but I will certainly wait to read more about them before I form my own opinion.

Bill and Tom's connection is just amazing to watch. @_@ 



Author's Response: DEFINITELY different! Haha. Oh, yes. Everything will make so much more sense later. Thank you for the WODNERFUL review :) I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: lovesbeaux9189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 06:54 pm Title: 2

i would reallly like to see where this one goes :)

Author's Response: awesome! you will :)

Reviewer: StarStruck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 04:21 pm Title: 2

Definitely good. I'm really enjoying this. The other day I was just wondering if you were going to update this ever, and you did and I'm quite happy =D

I really like this, I especially like the way you've interpreted the characters as the way people are described in the song, awesome idea. Love your writing style, too, it's so nice and has amazing flow and the dialogue is very entertaining. Bill and Tom's immediate connection is very interesting, indeed. I'll definitely be looking for more ^.^

--StarStruck



Author's Response: Thank you!! It really makes me happy to know that you are enjoying it thus far...even if it's only chapter 2. :P

Reviewer: xXgustavXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 03:17 pm Title: 2

MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! Don't leave me waiting please.. I love this story so far. I like the way you describe everything that takes place. Also, the way you have this story written, it feels so original, not so planned out like most. It has that natural flow to it. So, please continue. :)

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I really appreciate all the feedback. And I'm super glad that you're enjoying it! It really means a lot. I will :)

Reviewer: IWillBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 12:32 pm Title: 2

I LUUURVE IT!!! more more more!!!


please? :)

Author's Response: :) of course!

Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 03:16 am Title: 2

please keep going i can't wait to read more

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :D

Reviewer: veestone Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 03:03 am Title: 1

This is wonderful, an interesting way to tell the story. I would love to read more.

Author's Response: Coming right up ;) Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 01:38 am Title: 2

I was just thinking about this story and I'm really glad to see it updated. I like the progression so far, but man, I do not like Jenny. Bill thinks she is confident and sure, but he's seventeen. That's not what I think she is. Anyway, the character development is working very well, I think. I'm always anxious for more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you SOOO much! I'm glad to see you picked up on Jenny's false image. It will become important later! As always, thank you for a lovely review. :)

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 01:04 am Title: 2

This sounds really lovely.
Both plot-wise and your writing style.

Author's Response: I'm super glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: InsertWittyNameHere Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 06:45 am Title: 1

YAY definately!!
I LOVE your work, simply amazing!
I think every one of your FFs is worth continuing
I can't wait for an update
Please do continue!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! :D Your so nice. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/09 12:04 am Title: 1

Even though I shouldn't be worrying about this yet, I'm already a bit scared about the end =/

Even so, this looks like it's going to be very interesting :D

Author's Response: There are 2 possible endings for this story. I'm still debating between them! But you shouldn't worry! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 06:13 pm Title: 1

I like it so far; please continue it x]. I wanna see where it's going to go =]

Author's Response: Ok :) Thanks for the reviewww!

Reviewer: IWillBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 11:37 am Title: 1

I want to see where you go with this! It could be really interesting! You write so descriptivley! I

Author's Response: Awesome, thanks! :D

Reviewer: mrs-kaulitz092398 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 12:22 am Title: 1

I LOVE this song and I trust you to do it justice! YAY YAY YAY I can't waittt fur moreee

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/09 05:51 pm Title: 1

I'm really intrigued by this story. I love how you began it, as well as the way you describe things. I hope you continue it!

Author's Response: Wonderful! Thank you so much! I will continue :) Haha, against my better judgement, of course. Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it.

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