Date: 11/06/09 07:55 pm Title: So Over You
something seems off about Mark. i dont like him or Olivia. that bitch needs to die
more soon please
Author's Response: more is coming (:
Date: 11/06/09 04:43 pm Title: So Over You
huh!!!! WHATTT happend!!! more please
Author's Response: more is coming (:
Date: 11/01/09 01:47 am Title: It Ends Tonight
Megan was so badass for telling Tom and Olivia off! i was so proud of her in this chapter. Tom doesnt deserve a family like them and i'm glad he realizes what he's lost
more soon please
Author's Response: XD more is coming!
Date: 11/01/09 12:21 am Title: It Ends Tonight
im offically killing olivia
Author's Response: please do XD
Date: 10/31/09 06:19 pm Title: It Ends Tonight
more please! Go Megan!!! just tell them where it's at!!! love it! Tom don't you realize what a f*cking Whore you're sleeping with!!! geezzz
Author's Response: hahaha. more is coming.
Date: 10/31/09 05:56 pm Title: It Ends Tonight
wow! quite explosive! i loved it!! olivia makes me so angry!! i can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: more is coming!
Date: 10/28/09 10:15 am Title: Pictures of You
i am extremely confused but there is one thing that i know for sure: Tom is a dumbass. he is beyond dumb, Bill should slap him around and see how he likes it. i'm just dying for Bill to knock some sense into him.
great chapter, as usual
more soon please
Author's Response: thank you :3 more is coming soon!
Date: 10/28/09 07:09 am Title: Pictures of You
I still don't get it.. more pleasse
Author's Response: more is coming
Date: 10/27/09 11:47 pm Title: Pictures of You
ok so pretty sure that tom needs to be a man and choose ebony or olvia and stop changing his mind and give us whiplash
Author's Response: hahaha yeah.
Date: 10/26/09 03:56 pm Title: Learning to Fall
I still don't know why tom lied... more please
Author's Response: more is coming
Date: 10/26/09 01:40 am Title: This Game
this is it! i'm calling Bill and we're beating Tom up! Another woman! that fool has lost what's left of his mind! he pisses me off so much already and its just the 4th chapter! ugh he is so dumb!
more please
Author's Response: it's only the 3rd chapter ;)and more is coming :)
Date: 10/25/09 10:19 pm Title: This Game
ok this chapter has put me even more on edge...im about to come into your mind and punch this fictional version of tom in the face...lol
Author's Response: hahahaha :')
Date: 10/25/09 07:36 pm Title: Learning to Fall
i knew it!! i really want to know what was in the text message. Great update as usual! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: you'll find out what was in the text message in the next chapter (:
Date: 10/24/09 06:37 pm Title: Where Is The Love?
grr...i hate cliff hangers...so you should hurry up and post the next chapter please :)
Author's Response: i'll update asap :)
Date: 10/24/09 05:26 pm Title: Where Is The Love?
i knew that dumbass lied to her! i feel that he has a good reason though, i dont know why but i do. he'd better have a good damn reason i swear or i'm going to get Bill and we're gonna kick his ass
more soon please
Author's Response: hahahahaha. lol. more is coming!
Date: 10/24/09 03:49 pm Title: Where Is The Love?
whoa!!! what an explosive chapter!! i can't wait for the next chapter and what happens!! great work!
Author's Response: thank youuuu!
Date: 10/24/09 03:06 am Title: This Game
the divorce better not happen!
Author's Response: just wait and seeee! (:
Date: 10/24/09 01:45 am Title: This Game
omg omg omg you have NO idea how happy you've made me with this sequel!! i can't even breathe right now.
it was all happy in the beginning, i can't believe Tom wants out now. what's his problem?
i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: awwh! -pats- more is coming soon!
Date: 10/23/09 08:32 pm Title: This Game
nooo! they can't get a divorce!! i love it! i can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: more will be coming soon!