Date: 10/22/09 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I didn't read the story that this is a prequal to but this was amazing. The emotions were so painful but human. That's what this was, it was human, revealing all of life's imperfections but showing the good in it too.
Date: 10/22/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Aaahh, so hurty and good. The way you write Bill's confusion about true love and even their relationship dynamics -Bill couldn't find it in himself to take that last bit Tom was willing to give- felt so real. I love your writing always and I loved this.
Date: 10/22/09 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like the tom in this fic.I dont know why I feel he's like that in real life :)
Date: 10/22/09 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing. So intense and emotional *_*
Date: 10/22/09 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Sometimes with Tom he's the worst, but only because he can be the best.
this is such a great way to put into words exactly that. relationships are so full of these wonderful contradictions.
Date: 10/22/09 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1
The opening scene was so graphic. I think you nailed writing Bill on the head. I thoroughly enjoyed this, even though there was no dialogue. 10/10.
Date: 10/22/09 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
WOOOW! I got goosebumps.
Mein gott. Amazing... O__o
Date: 10/22/09 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1
That was...breathtaking, really. I don't know what you're worried about, I think you nailed it with Bill in this, maybe even more so than in Okay.
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