Date: 02/07/11 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
want. more. PlEASE!
Date: 04/02/10 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
wow
i already like this
jeee, wait a sec, i don't get it
so they are friends? they've overcome that bs Bu said about hum, but they are friends, right???
right?
so why does Bill let him do all this sexy stuff? this intimate petting, grabbing ass? I know it might look like they are simply joking around, but it doesn't look like this!!!
I mean we lack here one lil this - the moment of realization that Bill actually likes when Bu touches him, that this touching turns him on!
i definitely don't criticize, all I wanna say is: "did i miss smth?"
so only teasing? hm.... ok
oh and that letter, bill's letter in the beginning is terrible awesome!
XD
i love it, words are in their place, so talently chosen
TY
love
Author's Response: Well, I'm on TEAM Bushido, and think that Bushido and Bill are friends in RL. There are a bunch of reasons why I think that, stemming from the fact that they're often seen at afterparties and stuff just hanging out, and a few people I know actually talk to Bu and know more stuff about the man than I ever care to find out LOL. But so this was written in the thought of them already being friends. And the Bill i hope to portray, if my muses for this story ever come back, is one that is really chill with his friends, and doesn't mind the fondling and dirty/crappy jokes, when he knows that they are jokes.
Thank you for your review though, and for your awesome words <333
Date: 04/02/10 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
wow
i already like this
jeee, wait a sec, i don't get it
so they are friends? they've overcome that bs Bu said about hum, but they are friends, right???
right?
so why does Bill let him do all this sexy stuff? this intimate petting, grabbing ass? I know it might look like they are simply joking around, but it doesn't look like this!!!
I mean we lack here one lil this - the moment of realization that Bill actually likes when Bu touches him, that this touching turns him on!
i definitely don't criticize, all I wanna say is: "did i miss smth?"
so only teasing? hm.... ok
oh and that letter, bill's letter in the beginning is terrible awesome!
XD
i love it, words are in their place, so talently chosen
TY
love
Date: 02/11/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
this has an amazing plot. Please continue.
Date: 11/25/09 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
Duuude1 Nice man! I love it when Bill makes Tom jealous! Hope you update soon!
Date: 10/21/09 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
I thought it was Tom/Bu too ;dd
and um ..please more?It's wicked,
Date: 10/20/09 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
ohh, I love this so far. Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/20/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
very nicely put...can't wait for more
Date: 10/20/09 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
For you, I will hold back any comments of OMG MY HEART IS BREAKING RIGHT NOW or MY INNER BILL IS CRYING IN THE CORNER AND NEEDS HIS TOM RIGHT NOW, or even the WTF TOM, YOU'RE LOSING YOUR BROTHER YOU JACKASS!
Nope, none of those.
But....*wibbles and holds twc flag to her heart*
Date: 10/20/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
FINALLY!! Damn, chick, I was sooooo ready for you to post this! XD
Date: 10/20/09 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
Hmm.. A tringle of love, hate, jealousy and longing? Or something like that... I just canb't stand Billshido, but I keep reading it (once again). What's wrong with me? :D
I hate to see them drifting apart and when it happens slowly, it's even worse. I guee I have to wait to find out who will be hurt in the end.
The tone of this fic was very depressing from the beginning, but I was surprised that it got somehow a little lighter at the club. It's weird, because basicly things happening there were sad, but the way you wrote it (esp. in dialogue) made it lighter, almost like... hmm.. selfdenial, you know? So, it was more pr less sad until:
Bill rolled his eyes, and Bushido released him, grins still on their faces. "Yea, yea. Everyone has an obsession with my ass. Apparently there's an entire forum dedicated to my ass, and another one that is dedicated to what goes on and sometimes in my ass."
LMAO :D
Date: 10/20/09 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
Lovelove :]
We love us some Bu :D
x.
Date: 10/20/09 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
ok I'm confused I thought it was supposed to be tom/bushido
interesting fic though! :p update soon I wana know toms reaction :
Date: 10/20/09 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
This is awesome!!! WOOOOOO
cant wait to read the next chapter. update soon will ya? :D
Date: 10/20/09 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
I need more >.> I've already fallen in love with/favorited this story LOL
I can imagine that it won't be easy for Bill to get it on with Bushido, at least when Tom's watching with 'disgust' and not jealousy XD But maybe it's a misunderstanding and Tom's secretly in love with Bill, too? I have to go check the pairings now XD
Date: 10/20/09 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
This is good! A jealous Tom us a sexy Tom!!!!!! I love Bushidos and Bills interaction.
Date: 10/20/09 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
You've got me hooked. XD
I'm gonna love seeing where this goes.
Date: 10/20/09 03:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Anew...well kinda.
Why, hello there. ;-) I see you dedicated this to me. You know it gets me hot, hot, hot! (I should probably be in bed) ANYWAY! This right here proves that you're a born writer. So fuck the haters and keep doing what you do best, bb. I honestly am not a fan of Billshido AT ALL (Bushido's head is really long... It's sort of creepy) but I saw that you were the author behind this and had to give it a read. :3 Don't let me down! Nah, you won't. Hehe. Okay, I'm rambling now but yeah just know this is the first story with Billshido as the main pairing I am giving a shot. Feel blessed, woman.