Date: 12/12/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 15- The pain of love wont break us up.
I hope you don't take this wrong way, but I think it's too soon to completely end this story. Maybe ending this story, because now Bushido is out of the picture, but still have a sequel. The reason is because Bill still has so much emotional baggage that he's carrying. I love this story and I'd hate to just see that part hanging. However, because I can see your skill as an author, I can very well see you somehow ending the next chapter just right and then adding an epilogue that would be in the future where Bill is, for the most part, emotionally healed. Again, I hope you don't take this review the wrong way. I really do love this story, and this chapter as well. I'm merely hoping to give my opinion. Though, I'm sure whatever you do will be fine. :)
Date: 12/12/09 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 15- The pain of love wont break us up.
awww!
sequel must be done!
Date: 12/12/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 15- The pain of love wont break us up.
Awesome chapter. I really love the tenderness Tom is showing to Bill. Looking forward to the sequel!
Date: 12/12/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 15- The pain of love wont break us up.
when will bill find out about his STD test? and i am sad the story is going to be ending soon.
Date: 12/10/09 04:42 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
oh my goodness! i cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 12/09/09 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
Omg ! no no the scene was amazing good job !! o jeeze iam so anxious !
Date: 12/09/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
It didnt
Date: 12/09/09 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
*gasp!hypervenelate* That... was... the worst... cliffie... EVER!!! *dies a little* OMFG How could you leave it there! It was all super amazing then BAM OVER!!! ;_; I can't wait for more... seriously, you're fabulous!!!
Date: 12/09/09 08:42 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
god damn man.
update again soon
Date: 12/09/09 08:31 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
Don't worry it didn't suck :) Oohhh, the suspense is building...and then it gets cut off :( Please update soon!
Date: 12/09/09 08:31 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
Don't worry it didn't suck :) Oohhh, the suspense is building...and then it gets cut off :( Please update soon!
Date: 12/09/09 01:12 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
OMG how long you gonna leave us hangin?!?!?!? Poor Bill *cry's* god he can't end up with Bushido...he just can't!
Date: 12/09/09 12:56 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
Omg.. this was amazing. The fight scene was described very well ^-^ This cheered me up.. as sad as that sounds xD I'm taking a break from writing an english paper so.. -.- I loved this though.
Date: 12/09/09 12:52 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
Oh no!!! Bill! Tom! I hope this Bushido guy gets what he deserves from Tom. I hope Tom kicks him into next year and I hope someone calls the police and medics to help Bill. More soon I hope this cliffy is evil.
Date: 12/07/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
Cant wait
Date: 12/07/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
uh-oh...
Date: 12/07/09 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
oh. em gee. That's awesome! I jeest love this!
Date: 12/07/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
Uh oh.... Bites nails...
Date: 12/07/09 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
OHMAIGAWD! I read all of this in one sitting and it's FABULOUS I must say! I can't believe that the chapter I finally end on has a cliffie like THAT! Dayum it blows... I just hope you update soon because this is brilliant and I'll die if I don't get more soon!
Date: 12/07/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
Omg !!! NEIN !!!!!!........egh a cliff hanger.....its ok as long as u update......*sigh* i have 2 know what happens.