Date: 12/29/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 18- How can i connect to you?
that was the most awkward pre-sex situation ive ever read about XD lol, update super soon!
Date: 12/29/09 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 18- How can i connect to you?
that was a good chapter
Date: 12/29/09 12:39 am Title: Chapter 18- How can i connect to you?
Thanks for the update. So glad Bill has Tom to help him through his nightmarish hell...
Date: 12/28/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 18- How can i connect to you?
No no no, you're banner is really good! :D
Date: 12/28/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 18- How can i connect to you?
oh, you cock block!!! ‘____‘ I'm seriously hurting right noooow, helloooo!!! T____T'
Date: 12/28/09 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 18- How can i connect to you?
Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh and a few corrections: the word is conceited, not conceded. For the line that starts "He had just the right amount of confidence that he didn't sound conceited..."
And its sensed, not senced. "Tom must have sensed that..."
It's cautiously, not cauciously. "Tom asked cautiously..."
Author's Response: oh thank you so much:) the new program on my laptop doesnt have a spell check so things like that get ignored easily by me.
Date: 12/26/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 17- A kiss, a touch, never enough.
Cock block. Lolz. Great chapter as always. Can't wait for some Tom/Bill!!!!!!
Date: 12/26/09 11:02 am Title: Chapter 16- This life is so sick.
Awwwwww. Short chapter. But so sweet. Glad to see you decided to continue with tha story! :D
Date: 12/26/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 15- The pain of love wont break us up.
Ohmahgawd. Beat the shit out of that muthafucka Tomi!!!!! Get him good! Lol. I loved this chapter... But I love them all so that's not something new. Hehe. I hope bill doesn't bruise too bad. It sucks to have a purple face!
Date: 12/26/09 10:36 am Title: Chapter 14- Your world is about to destruct.
*hiss*. *snarl*. Beat him good Tomi. I love it Hun! :)
Date: 12/26/09 10:22 am Title: Chapter 13- There are dark flames comin' down.
Oh nos!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/26/09 10:15 am Title: Chapter 12- To start all over again.
Tomi knows best! You always got me crackin up girly. ily. Oh no, some Bu drama. How does he know where bills gone?
Date: 12/26/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 11- Blessed kisses waiting.
Ohmygawsh yay. And this might work for them for a lil while cuz no1 knows bill. Great chapter!!!!
Date: 12/26/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 11- Blessed kisses waiting.
Ohmygawsh yay. And this might work for them for a lil while cuz no1 knows bill. Great chapter!!!!
Date: 12/26/09 02:51 am Title: Chapter 10- One night to share, just you and me.
I love twc and hardcore smut but this flitacious twinny stuff is just TOO CUTE!!!!!!! So inoccent. Fer totes.
Date: 12/26/09 02:10 am Title: Chapter 9- Hey, i'm here with you.
Ohemgee I want the test results!!!!!!
Date: 12/26/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter 8- The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret.
They talk like little kids. Each time one of these teenagers says tummy or mommy I burst into a fit of giggles. LMFAO!!!!! The perfect song at least in my opinion fir this story is My Black Dahlia by Hollywood Undead. I love picking my own personal soundtracks. Hehe.
Date: 12/26/09 01:51 am Title: Chapter 7- I can hold you when you reach for me.
No you sick fuck! That had me crackin up for totes.
Date: 12/26/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 6- Angel, don't you cry.
Tom like likes billa and he is denying it. So cute. Lmao.
Date: 12/26/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 5- Come and kill the dream gone bad.
Tomi is such a sweetie!!!!!!!!