Date: 04/30/23 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 12/23/18 11:42 am Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Something hurts inside of me. It's so painful even to read. Really hope that stories like this always be only a fiction.
Thank you
Date: 02/19/14 08:03 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Great story! Very raw in its emotionality. I love this style of writing. It think it delivers emotions and feelings really well.
Date: 01/28/13 09:54 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
I absolutly loved this! great great job hun! certainly one of my favs!
Date: 06/30/11 02:59 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
So AMAZING AND INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/30/10 08:06 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
This whole fic is...intense. Raw. Really raw. But I love that. =) It was almost dream-like to me. It felt like there was a fog over it, and...ah, I don't even know how to explain the feeling it left me with. Just know that I love this fic a lot. =) So, great job.
Author's Response: *grins* Awww, thank you. The way you described it, that's exactly what I was going for, when I set my mind to writing all of this out, and I'm really really really happy that you love it, and that it could affect you so much.
Date: 01/31/10 08:27 am Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
I can't even begin to tell you how much I hate reading this style. It makes my Grammar OCD go totally insane, smacking itself against the walls of my head until it's bleeding in a crumpled mess on the floor.
DESPITE THAT. I heavily respect how you managed to use the vagueness of the still and Bill's thoughts alone to tell an amazing story :3 I'm glad I read it after all (even though I might need intensive grammatical therapy now). Thanks :)
Author's Response: I'm kind of offended by your review. maybe it's because i've only been awake for fourty minutes, or maybe because this writing stile isn't a Grammar error. It's separated into paragraphs (which is writing style), but, the proper grammar punctuations are in there. bah, anyways, thanks for reading.
Date: 01/29/10 08:58 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Oh my god so I had to bounce here from LJ and finish this because I'm fucking impatient and WOW. Did NOT see that end coming! Really good twist...
Author's Response: lol, awwwww, I'm glad that you liked it so much that you skipped ahead. I'm glad you liked the twist though, when I wrote it at first, I thought people wouldn't like it, but I just went and did it, and yea am really happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 01/29/10 06:00 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Amazing story, very intence yet very confusing... Beautifull
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you
Date: 01/28/10 02:13 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Wow. Just wow. I love it.
Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad you do. ^_^
Date: 01/26/10 03:18 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
love...
Author's Response: thanks ^_^
Date: 01/26/10 12:30 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
:P its over. and i like how it ends. =]
Author's Response: Well then, I'm happy that you like how it ends ^_^
Date: 01/26/10 12:19 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Aww... How beautiful and kind of melancholic ending, but still very hopeful and strong. It's like cribble people, broken people and desperate people standing on their feet and move mountains because they are together just the way they've always meant to be. Even when being just a shadows of complete, "good" people, they are still more.
Thank you, Shelly, for writing such a beautiful, painful, challenging fic. Not just this style, but the content of this as well. I'm so happy that Bill and Tom found the way to be together. Not in a way that suddenly things are all okay for them, but it's like constant struggle, waiting and learning, but there is a will and that's the most important. I'm so happy for these two cribble, but so strong souls. Thank you, Shelly!
Author's Response: I don't think I've ever given anything a happy ending (but then again, I rarely even finish stories on this site) LOL, so melancholic is generally they way I go lol. I'm still happy that you found this to be hopeful and strong. The original ending was dreary, a true ending because of the nature of it, but I got poked to change it, and I think that this way is better. This is really just an end to another chapter in their lives.
I'm so happy that you stuck through this journey, through the pain and the heartache and the tears, and urged me to keep posting. You made it worth it, love ^_^
Date: 01/26/10 09:48 am Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
Thank you so much for such an amazing story. I loved every bit of it. Your words just flowed so easily and you knew exactly how to make it work. You're a very gifted writer, keep going hun! ^_^. Will there be more like Breathe in the future? *pleading eyes* O_O.
Author's Response: Awwww, gurlie, you're making me blush so much right now. I'm really really happy that I could bring you this story ^_^ And as for more like Breathe, I've got some oneshots in the making, but not any chaptered stories, as of yet. It's hard to write chaptered stories like this, so the plot has to be near perfect lol.
Date: 01/25/10 10:50 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
*.* SO beautiful!!!
Author's Response: *grins* thank you
Date: 01/25/10 10:25 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
awe the end
Author's Response: yep yep. thanks for stick through to it ^_^
Date: 01/25/10 08:43 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
I really loved this story. The way it was written really made the story feel realistic- like we were really inside Bill's head the whole time. It's also probably one of the most unique stories I've read on here, and I admire it for that :) Nice job :D
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you for your words, I'm really happy that you liked it, Breathe was a difficult read for some, I know, but I'm still glad that you stuck with it, and kept reading, and that the style (and plot) didn't turn you off. I'm also happy that you found this to be unique, I know some people probably thought this writing style was obnoxious and that the plot was too raw, but I love it and I'm happy that I got to share it with you.
Date: 01/25/10 06:20 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
:(
I'm so sad this is over, but omg, they are going to be okay now. Together, forever. Bill taking care of Tom the best way he knows how, to keep them strong.
And Tom, finally accepting his brother fully and loving him as best as he can!
I love these boys and I'm so happy with this ending! It's what they deserve after all the shitty pain they went through. It's not 100% perfect, but it's perfect enough for them and their love.
Thank YOU for writing it!
Author's Response: awww bb, don't give me the sad face. it had to end eventually, and somehow I'm glad it ended here. We don't need to know exactly what happened to them after this, just that they had each other, and that's all that matters.
I'm glad you love them, and that you're happy with the ending. you were the first one i told about this story, the first one who knew it's proper ending, and the one that made me rethink it, and I'm glad you did, because it made this journey they went on, so much better.
Date: 01/25/10 05:50 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.
fantastic! thanks so much!!
Author's Response: awww, thank you for reading this from beginning to end, love ^_^