Date: 10/23/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
This is different. Really different. Different from anything I've ever read. But I encourage different. The fragmented way that you write really captivates me. It's like poetry but a story. I like it. No, I love it. It's so original. So fresh. Anyways, I can't wait until a new update. Im officially a fan
Author's Response: I'm truly happy that the writig style captivates you, even though it's so different than anything you've ever read. I love fragmenting writing. My writing on here is usually disjointed like that, bit this is the first time I've done it in this fashion I'm glad that you think it's original and fresh, and there's a new chapter now! i'm glad I could turn you into a fan
Date: 10/23/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
ugh. i absolutely love this. its perfect. i can't say that enough. im a huge fan of this writing style. (my fav author is ellen hopkins.) she uses the same style for her books. anyway, i like this chapter and i hope bill doesn't get into any trouble by hanging with tom. can't wait for more babe. :)
Author's Response: WOOT i'm loving your praise lol. and I've actually read.....Crank. And I think Burn like when they first came out, and loved them. This is my natural writing state, it KILLS me to have to write in a structured writing form, so I'm glad you liked the fact that its so disjointed. oh and there's a new chapter up now!
Date: 10/21/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
I've yet to see the sexing, so let's finish with this angsty bit, yeah? :PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
Author's Response: HAHAHA. it's comingggg, i promise. like soon, hopefully before you sign off tonight, cause I wanna post the next chapter soon. <3
Date: 10/21/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
Whoa....*wibbles* Billa, Billa, Billa! Hang on tight, bb. We won't let you fall!
Author's Response: awww. hell be fine bb. lots more agst, but remember, the summary of this is angst, drugs, angst, sex, more sex, angst etc etc etc xD
Date: 10/21/09 01:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
I really like how you've written this...it's new for me and very refreshing. You give a nice 'in the mind' view of Bill's feelings and perception of things. BRILLIANT...seriously :)
Author's Response: awww, I'm glad that this writing style pleases you so much. it's oe of my favorite styles, ad i was worried about how you guys would take it, but hearing that it's refreshing just put a huge grin on my face.
I'm glad you like Bill's inner thoughts and whatnot. :-)
Date: 10/21/09 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
I like!!! :D
Author's Response: i'm glad that you like it ^_^
Date: 10/21/09 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
I am in love with this story.
Author's Response: awww, yay. glad to here it's love ^_^
Date: 10/20/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
I'm sobbing like a baby. It's so sad.
Author's Response: awww i'm sorry you're crying hun. well kida. i feel bad, but i'm kinda glad this could affect you so much. i didn't mean for it to be sad, it kinda just came out that way.
Date: 10/20/09 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
Very interesting, disjointed style. I loved it! Well, I'm usually into this kind of extremely disjointed writing, so no surprise, I guess? It's not the easiest to read as I need to concentrate so completely to get on that mood and when I get it, it flows on smoothly. Just trying not to be disturbed by anything...
Angsty. A lot. I'm almost scared is it going to be a little too much for me? (Is it possible?) But no, I don't think so. I'm having a phase that I read almost only band-related twincest-fics (going back to the roots, huh! :D), so I was and am a little concerned if I can hang on, because I haven't read any AU lately, but I try to hang in there, because I love you style... Always has :).
Cruel and harsh for Bill for now. So, so sad...
Author's Response: Aww, hun, I'm glad that you loved the disjointed style. was worried about posting it, still kinda am. It's really hard writing like this, because I have to remember that I can't fuck up the sentence structure TOO much, because it STILL has to make sense. I always end up going too far into character and writing something and going....they're not gonna get it, because I don't get it when reading it just as me, rather than as Bill.
But yea....i didn't mean for it to be so angsty. I kinda just sat down without any thought of a storyline and thats how it came out, I was like WOAH. But awww, I get you, I...am TRYING to not write so many AU fics, but when I get a idea, it comes to me, and this is EXTREMELY AU, because it's basically what would've happened if the twin's got separated...with a couple of things changed, b/c I still wanted the G's in it and whatnot. I'm glad you're going it a chance though, and I'll try to post something that isn't AU soon.
Date: 10/19/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
:S <---- this is me, wibbling in the corner over this.
I NEED TO HUG BILLA RIGHT NOW, BECAUSE HIS TOMI IS BEING A DICKHEAD!
And ugh, Bill's head is such a hurt mess. :((((((
:((((((((((((((( ----> this is me crying over his pain.
Author's Response: awww *huggles* Bill will be fine....now that I'm changing the ending xD do't worry bb and don't get TOO angsty, or there'll never be any fluff in the mpreg!
Date: 10/19/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
wow. i was actually looking for a fic to read that was written in this style. perfect timing, ja? i like it alot so far. will more be explained about Bill's mom? and will the rest of the fic be like this? cant wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: awwww. i'm glad that this fic turned on at the perfect time, and that you like the writing style, because i'm still pretty worried about it. i want this to be one of those fics that you never forget, and i've already had ppl flaming it so *headdesk* but, ah to answer your questions, yes, more will be explained about Bill mum, and yes, the rest of the fic will be like this. I'm still debating on the last chapters, as the chapters are based on Bill's state of mind, but as far as I know (have saved on the pc) the entire thing is in this formal.
Date: 10/19/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
Awwww. I almost cried reading this...
ANGST. T_T
Author's Response: awww, i'm sorry. i wish i HAD made you cry though, that was my goal.
Date: 10/19/09 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
I like this :]
Epicness :D
Author's Response: i'm glad you like it hun, and yay for epicnessrn
Date: 10/19/09 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
i love the writting style. this chapters kinda haunting and replaying over again in my mind. it truely is heart-breaking but amazing! and beautiful:)
Author's Response: awww, I'm SO EFFING GLAD that you like it. ^_^ I was angsting over this last night, and all day today, because not many people like it, or at least do't like the plot/writing style. haf, i'm still glad that you liked it though. your review is making me smile a lot. lol
Date: 10/19/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
D: aww! thats heart-breaking. I've never read a story with this format before, and to be honest i really like it. This story is beautiful. Keep it upp :]
Author's Response: *flutterclaps* my second review! I'm SOOO happy right now. Especially since you said you've never seen this writing style before, but that you like it. I was angsting over this SO BADLY, and you and my first reviewer quelled my fears.
I'm kinda glad you find it to be heart-breaking though, because that was my ultimate goal for this chapter, and I'm glad that you find it to be beautiful. ^_^
Date: 10/19/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
Oh for fuck's sake, girly. D: That made my heart ache and throb and crack open all over my lap. That's so sad and I love how the sentences are in fragments and all discombobulated (oh yeah, that's right). It really makes it seem like your inside Bill's head as he rambles to himself. It's amazing and I can't see why you're angsting out over it. It's brilliant!
Author's Response: *is grinning up a storm* I'm SO FRIGGEN HAPPY that you liked it. it's like I can actually breathe a bit, and stop angsting, because I really was SO NERVOUS about this.
I'm glad that it could affect you so much though, because that was my goal. I want eeryone to feel Bill's pain, which is why it's in this writing style. And I love that you liked how the sentences were disjointed, this is TRULY my favorite writing style, and to have at least one person like it and understand it made me happy to NO END.