Date: 11/16/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 5: Murky Waters.
Aww Bill. I totally wanna punch Tom in the mouth and balls on your behalf. Obviously, he doesn't NEED them.
Jerk.
Author's Response: LOL. DO EETTTTTTTTTTT. xD
*huggles*
Date: 11/15/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 5: Murky Waters.
Lol, ooohhh Bushido should be the devil in "Hell"!!! Or not.. LOL ILY
Author's Response: LOLOLOL. He oould. IDK yet LOL. and ily2 <333
Date: 11/15/09 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
Fucking hell girly. You do not lie. Your smut and angst is EPIC.
Author's Response: lol. hahah. thank you ^_^ <3333
Date: 11/15/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
Of course I enjoyed, smut AND angst. That's my kinda fic! xD
Author's Response: lol. YAY. and I'm glad this fic is every you like.
Date: 11/15/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
Girrl I;m so glad I had some chocolate ice cream with me while reading this. xD
Author's Response: LOL. awww. i don't MEAN to make it angsty. it always just comes out that way.
Date: 11/11/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
Enjoyed? You bet! God, you are making this very difficult for me... I f*cking LOVE this! The way you write (like I've said million times before) and what you write here. This was so hot, the ending and all.. Even the jealousy. I can't explain, but this captures the moment in a way I very rarely see. Just those single, flowing imagines, feelings, moments. This is SO hot.
And even if everything seems to be so wrong, I kind of relate to Bill so much here in a weord, sick way. It's twisting to a imaginery world, where wrong is suyddenly right and it's all about pleasure and pain and numbness and irresponsible CRAVE for something and everything. And hate and longing boosting it to go further and further. Like being so f*cking sick is so f*cking great at the same time. Oh, I love this. Period.
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad that you're enjoying this journey dude. I'm always glad when you like my writing style, and of course WHAT I'm writing. YAY for hotness. I'm always wondering if I'm toeing the line between sexy and vulgar but I'm glad it works here, the flow of the story and Bill's thoughts/narrative.
I'm glad you can relate to Bill though. His...wanting his brother is wrong, but i feel like in a person's life, there is something that they'd do anything for, and for Bill that's Tom. He's do anything for Tom to recognize him, even if it means doing something that isn't right. I'm glad that you love this.
Date: 11/10/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
Sexy and depressing
Author's Response: lol. thank you <3
Date: 11/10/09 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
I really love the way this story is written :) It makes the chapters seem... more suspenseful, if thats the right way to describe it.. or maybe its just me :P But I like it so much anyways ^_^
Author's Response: I love your description of my chapters. it made me smile a lot. ^_^
Date: 11/10/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
thank you bb, very hot. i'm of few words this morning.
Author's Response: no problem hun ^_^ and it's alright. am just happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/10/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
O...M...F...G! THIS IS SOME OF THE HOTTEST SMUT I HAVE READ ON HERE! GAWD I NEED A FUCKING DRANK xD
I loved it by the way.....looooooooooooooooooooooooved it xD
Author's Response: *hands you a drank* LOOLOL. I'm glad you loved it <3333
Date: 11/10/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
Amazing as always, I was so excited when I saw you'd updated. Just fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I didn't know you were reading this one, but I'm glad you are. Your review made me squeal a bit.
Date: 11/10/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.
*snuggles* Of course I did. D'uh.
Silly Tomi! :P
Author's Response: lol.*huggles* you're awesome bb.
and I'm not silly Billa >.> LOL
Date: 11/10/09 04:10 am Title: Chapter 4: I Love It.
*goes pleasantly cross-eyed at the images*
Oh my, BILL! Jesus, you are both addicted to the other. Really!
Author's Response: lol. thank you for reviewing bb. i thought no one would enjoy this *headdesk* but i'm glad you get this story so well, even though I haven't really told you alllllllll about it like with other fics LOL. oh and i tried to IM you, but you were gone *sad face*
Date: 10/25/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
I soooooooooooooooooooooooooo enjoyed
Author's Response: YAY. I'm glad you did. It makes me feel like I did something write.
Date: 10/25/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
Oh fuck!You girl, what was that??? :D
Cold shower for me like right now! This is getting better and better.. So twisted and weird, hot and disturbing. I don't know how to react exceot that I really do love this style of yours. I've said that already, but this is amazing. The ending w3as so hot... :)
More, please!
Author's Response: LOL. THAT WAS INSANITY, if I'm allowed to be honest. I'm very very very glad that you like the story and the style, because i was hella nervous about this. the next part will be up later today. AND I got your email, i just haven't had time to sit and reply, but your beta is nearly 2/3rds done. I would've finished it today if I had actually kept up with my schedule, BUT i didn't log on to the computer til LATE.
Date: 10/25/09 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.
Wow, nice! Wonderful style... Absolutely addictive. Like being in Bill's head in his thoughts and in reality and in memories and hopes and in pain and in love at the same time, nothing to grab on, but float on waves.
I loved the connection for going back to roots here and their difference (disjoint, broken.. excellent choises of words)and the ending even if I had to read it couple of times to get it and I stil probably didn't get it.
So up to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: *gris* am still glad that you like it. this writing style is hellish, and even though the story is actually sitting on my computer, already finished, waiting to be beta'd, every time I go back to revise I'm like WOW I can't believe people actually read this disjointed, broken mess. (i like using the writing style as a mirror image of the twin's relationship)
Date: 10/25/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
*dances* this shiittt is so awesome. yuppiez it is. *sigh* i like this (i know i keep saying so but it is true) and its only on chapter 3, meaning it could only get better. yay. this chapter was sexy but it killed me. i have a bad feeling about the drugs....totally sounds like trouble. i want more of this hun.
Author's Response: hahaha. AWWW. you're review made me smile. I hope it gets better. having wrote the entire story all in one shot, i can't really tell what's the beginning or end and if it gets better or worse LOL. But I'm glad you found it to be sexy...and yea, the drugs play a major part throughout the entire fic, to be quite honest. Er, next chapter shall be posted today. I've been in a rush to post Lunacy and Princess Cafe PLUS write for NaNoWriMo, and I haven't had time to sit down and edit the next chapter.
Date: 10/25/09 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
That was weirdly hot! more!
Author's Response: hahha. thank you. next chapter shall be posted today <3
Date: 10/25/09 04:46 am Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
Oh my ... I am breathless.
Oh Bill, what have they done to you? Tom was supposed to protect you! But...you both need your connection back first and if this does it, then it's so easy to want to burn in hell for this one chance.
AND YOU GAVE ME TORG AND I FUCKING LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: YAY for breathelessness when the story's name is Breathe xD JKJKJK. & I didn't realize you were online! am still here yanno
And Bill will be FINEEEEEE. maybe. xD and he didn't lost his virginity yet...just watch.
AND YEA THERE IS MORE TORG AND BIORG AND EVERYTHING ELSE TO COME DAMMIT
Date: 10/25/09 04:43 am Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep
O___O this writing style is so perfect for the intensity i know you're going for. and INTERESTING TURN AROUND, TOM. awesome chapter :)
Author's Response: YAY for it being perfect and actually working out. Am always afraid of screwing it up, and not letting the scene play out perfectly. and I'm GLAD that you like the turn-around. there'll be explanations, angst, and other stuff to come lol.