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Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:59 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.

*gives you a standing ovation* Bravo!

Author's Response: *smiles* thank you so much <333

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 9: The Worse Part Is There Is No-one Else To Blame

Almost over?! Now I'm kind of sad. . .

Author's Response: yep, but don't be sad, they're finding happiness.

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

Yes! Bushido is gone! Everything is okay!

Author's Response: yep yep ^_^

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 6: Counting Pain.

0.0
Oh. My. God.
I knew Bushido was the devil!

Author's Response: Lololol. <3333

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 5: Murky Waters.

Lol but don't you see? Bushido IS the devil! He lied to you.

Author's Response: Well....Bushido's not exactly a bad man. He's just...really fucked up. xD

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: Diving Deep

Dang! This is intense!

Author's Response: thank you ^_^

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Crash & Burn.

Poor Bill. :'(

Author's Response: He'll be fine. I promise ^_^

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Changes.

Wow.
That's the only word I have for this.
WOW.

Author's Response: Awww, this makes me blush ^_^

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 03:05 pm Title: Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small and needy. Warm me up. And breathe me.

THIS STORY IS DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVES.

you wrote this story with such intenity that either it brought me to tears (it did in the end...I cried like a big ass baby xD) or gave me goosebumps. ugh I loved, loved, loved, loved, L-O-V-fucking-E'd this. Thank you for writing it, it was the best

Author's Response: Awww honey, all of your reviews for this story have urged me to keep posting it ^_^ I'm so glad that this story could mean so much for you and make you feel so many things. Thank you for sticking with me through the end, you really made it worth posting ^_^

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 11:00 am Title: Chapter 9: The Worse Part Is There Is No-one Else To Blame

Oh... :(. You truly are making this painful to read, but because it's so, it's that humanity I talked about and that's why I love this. You captured the moment again,little things which are meaningful and creating the atmosphere. I think it's interesting and challenging choise to do, because the actual happenings you leave almost out completely and concentrate on little things, emotions, almost metaphorical things. Pacing back and forth, Clock ticking from one to sixty... Things like that. You already know that I love it, so I don't say it again :)

I really don't know what to say here. They are going through so much, but it's verey realistic, like slap straight to my face to realise how difficult it still can be. I'm sorry that they have to go through this. I'm waiting to see, how this'll end.

And there are no monsters, no one to blame. Beautiful, Shelly, beautiful... :)

Author's Response: Awwwm I'm sorry love. This is a hard story to read, (although i don't know if it's harder than reading Love Again), but I'm glad that you're sticking with it, continuing the read as things get better (and in a sense, harder). I'm glad, really really happy, that you like the way that I write, like not just the style, but the words I choose, because when I wrote the entire fic, in the beginning, I was insanely meticulous, which made it difficult for my beta and I at times, because hated changing things, hated molding them so that my original thought came out clearly.

Again, I'm really happy that you read it, and find it beautiful (as well as painful). you reviews have made it worth posting this. (oh and just so you know, the next -last- chapter is up ^_^)

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Changes.

Hey, I am a social worker, I can't hate broken people! :D. I was probably the only one loving Tom's character in Prescription Insanity the whole time, too. I like characters with flaws and because I so much like Tom in general, his characters with human touch, flaws, imperfections and a glimpse of both sides of human nature appeal to me strongly. I like characters who make mistakes and eventually just tries to struggle to survive, because that's what this all is about: trying our hardest to survive with minimum damages. It's not a fairytale and there are no pure and throughoutly good people, but imperfect people and that's why I like them, because I see myself always in them. To forgive is the only way to get forgiveness.

Anyways, the fic... You can find it in here: http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=14057

Now I have to go and read your latest update...

Author's Response: Awwww, you're a social worker? I wanted to do that from when I was like 11 to 12, but then I fell in love with music, history and forensic psychology, so my interest branched off immensely LOL. But I completely and totally understand your like for flawed characters, because it's one we share. my least favorite stories (on here and elsewhere) are when characters are too flawed or too perfect. I think, most people fuck up a whole lot, even if it's just minuscule fuckups, so in order to have a story that works, you need to apply real life qualities to your characters. *nodnod* but anyways, I loved your story reviewed it saying just as much. And I hope you like the new chapter. I'll be eagerly awaiting your review to see what you think ^_^

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 9: The Worse Part Is There Is No-one Else To Blame

i hope it ends more happily things things are going right now. great great chapter!!

Author's Response: it's does love, don't worry it does. And the next chapter is up for you to read ^_^

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 9: The Worse Part Is There Is No-one Else To Blame

ah gawd...I love this...so fucking heart-breaking and heart-warming at the sametime :)

PS.. *in my whiny voice* I DON'T WANT IT TO EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEND!!!!!! D:...................

okay I'm done xD

Author's Response: awwww, i'm glad that even after all of the heartbreak, you can still find yourself loving it. And awww *hugs* i don't want it to end, but it has to if I'mg oing to get to work on other things xD

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: The Worse Part Is There Is No-one Else To Blame

I feel so bad for these two, but hopefully, by the time this is done, they are at a much better place than HERE.

Author's Response: lolol, don't worry, everything gets better xD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

interesting developments in this chapter. i like it. i'm even getting used to the style. =) keep up the good work!

Author's Response: *grins* glad you liked it & that you're getting used to the style. it's kind of rough around the edges, but I adore it a lot.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

=] wow... thatwas kinda happy and sweet but also bitter, ilovedit.

Author's Response: *nodnod* that's the feeling I was going for love. i'm glad you loved it ^_^

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

YAY HE'S GONE, HALLELUJAH!

But aww, Tom in jail! Bill waited, Tom's new hair, Bill's new hair, PUPPIES! Napping, snuggling, LETTERS OF LOVE AND FORGIVENESS AND NEED....so much and yet not enough.

Oh boys, how far you had to go to get to this point again. But the good DOES come with the bad.

Author's Response: LOLOLOL. He wasn't a BAD person Rose. xDDD

And yea, Bill waited. it's probably the only time you'll EVER have me writing as Bill waiting for Tom LOL. but I'm glad you liked it, and that you see that even if they've gotten to this point, they still need to go further ^_^

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

Ooooo thanks for updating.

Author's Response: np love ^_^

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

sorry I forgot to leave a proper review XD

ha! I had a feeling something would happen to Bushido. Sucks Tom had to serve time for what he did but glad he and Bill are sticking together :) I'm really enjoying this story!

Author's Response: Lolol, tis okay. I'm glad your feeling panned out, and yea, it's sucky about Tom, but shit happens and then you've got to pay the price for your actions. xD

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reality Check

I WILL STICK FOREVER LIKE GLUE AND IF THE GLUE WEARS OUT I WILL CLING ON STILL WITH MY ARMS AND LEGS xD

O_O okay..... that sounded kinda stalker-ish...I promise that wasn't the intention...I just really REALLY like this story :D

Author's Response: LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO. definitely stalkerish, but you got me to smile like woah xD

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