Date: 03/17/16 05:55 am Title: On The Dance Floor
I think the way it ended was very much agreeable.
I'm not sure my satisfaction is that sated but I can say I liked the story very much. :)
Date: 09/19/11 06:47 am Title: On The Dance Floor
this was a good story!
u should really add the next chapter!
Date: 05/17/11 08:24 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
Owwwwwww UST. I totally wanted more there.
Date: 10/17/10 10:10 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
Ohhh.. I love this fic :D
I wished you had written a sequel XD
Author's Response: I had planned on a sequel and still do, perhaps just a chapter 2 to this one, but I just haven't had the time or motivation for it.
Date: 03/04/10 01:41 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
that was really good
Date: 02/12/10 05:32 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
Interesting. I don't think any DJ would mix techno and rap though. Lol. Also, it's normal for a nightclub to provide DJ's with drink tickets and even complementary bottles.
As to Tom and Bill- I was kind of hoping they would at least kiss that night. It felt like you had built up to it and then were too scared to write it. :( The idea of Tom following his brother's ass hoping to get some and then realizing it was his brother is hot. I think you missed out on a great opportunity here- whether to write some smut earlier into the story or later, both would have seen a very naughty Bill and a perhaps apprehensive Tom. That's just how I would have played it. Sorry, I'm going off on a tangent.
Author's Response: Oh nonono. This is supposed to have a part 2. Haven't brought myself to do it XD. But the truth is, that's how Tom is feeling. So ready to be with his brother, have him completely, but at the same time it is still his 'innocent' baby brother. So he major cock blocked himself. But the 2nd part will hopefully be this week if I get around to doing it, and there will definitely be sweet love making.
Date: 12/26/09 05:04 am Title: On The Dance Floor
Aww, this was a nice one shot. :]
I like that they didn't go crazy over each other, and still enjoyed being together.
Good job. :]
Date: 10/20/09 03:13 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
sequel pleeeeaaaaase!!!! :d
Date: 10/19/09 10:37 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
This was great, right up until the ending where you left me hanging, you gonna write a sequle?
Date: 10/19/09 06:52 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
cute
Date: 10/19/09 06:27 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
Cute ending, loved it =]
Date: 10/19/09 04:42 pm Title: On The Dance Floor
Oh!! They need to snap! Please let them snap! 8D
Date: 10/19/09 02:28 am Title: On The Dance Floor
you should continue!!!:D