Date: 11/26/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: Self-Conclusion
I really wish you'd update this story its so amazing! i love it!!!
Date: 09/02/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 11: Outside
you should totally update this
Date: 03/15/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 11: Outside
Drowning would be the worst thing ever. One of my biggest fears. Diana is awesome, her and Bill can patch up their wounds together.
Date: 03/14/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 11: Outside
Its sad that her twin died ...sniffle... I hope your cold goes away soon........Hope the next chapter comes out soon your fan Missy
Date: 03/10/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 11: Outside
you are a great writer, I can't wait for your next chapter..
The twin thing really touched me, something similar happend here a few days ago, tree girls were playing by the ocean when it was raining, a gigantic wave came and took two of the girls, the girl who was on the shore had to see her friend and twin sister get dragged out towards the open ocean where they both drowned :s I just thought of that when I read your story, I guess it touched me because I have a twin sister and two younger twin brothers and I can't imagine that happpening to anyone! AND the fact that you probably captured the moment perfectly, where you wrote that she was missing half of her soul and she was suppose to die with her!... Sorry for the long rewiev, just felt like charing and complementing you at the same time :p
Date: 03/10/10 08:59 am Title: Chapter 11: Outside
Omg I love this!!!!!
Date: 03/09/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 11: Outside
Yes! That was awesome! Keep going!
Date: 03/09/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 11: Outside
"No... I always told you he was out somewhere, and technically he is out somewhere. I just don't know where." Tom does have a point.
I liked the chapter. :)
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And I've had a cold for the past 3 months. Still not over it.
Date: 03/09/10 09:42 am Title: Chapter 11: Outside
Epic chapter, love it. =)
Date: 03/01/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
It's amazing, and it was too short!! (pouts) Feel better soon and then move it! XD
Date: 03/01/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
It's amazing, and it was too short!! (pouts) Feel better soon and then move it! XD
Date: 03/01/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
WHAT DOES THAT MEANN?!! D:
Date: 02/28/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
who is annie?, does she have something to do with diana sudden mood changes? IŽll be waiting for your next update. and I hope you get better soon :)
Date: 02/28/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
What's with the book?
Can't wait! Write more! Update fast!
Date: 02/27/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
aww! so cute!
Date: 02/27/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 10:Break the Silence
Aww get better soon!!! I'm soooo glad you updated, i love it!!! More more more!!! :D
Date: 02/26/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 9: Safe Ride
It's great! I can already see Bill beginning to heal. Keep going!
Author's Response: Yep, it's beginning, but not completely healed. =]
Date: 02/26/10 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 2: Black Orchids
I'm LOVING this so far!! Haha I only wish I had come up with the idea!! XD
Date: 02/02/10 02:01 am Title: Chapter 9: Safe Ride
yay great story!!!! hurry up and post again plz!!
Date: 02/01/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 9: Safe Ride
loved it again!
update!
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