Date: 06/03/15 09:04 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Ohhh wow that was intense!! So very well written :)
Date: 10/16/10 02:01 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Wow!! Nice! )
Author's Response: Thank you! :-D
Date: 08/02/10 03:31 am Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Ahh! That was really good. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/21/10 06:37 am Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Loved it! But why was Bill shooting up drugs for?
Author's Response: You have to keep reading to figure it out, silly! Thank you for reviewing it, and I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 07/07/10 12:37 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
all i can say is yum! i love how you started this all out :)
Author's Response: Thanks! The twins are yummy, aren't they?
Date: 06/28/10 09:05 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
damn that was hot, evvie. you're great at writing sex scenes XDD i might need some writing lessons from you. *w* great oneshot.. ONTO THE NEXT! -scurries off-
--jilly
Author's Response: I'm here if you need me. And thank you sooo much! :D
Date: 12/29/09 02:22 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
I loveeee it!!! :D hot story and I
Author's Response: lol Thank you :D
Date: 12/29/09 08:02 am Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
I loved it!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 12/27/09 08:21 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
i like it :D hehe *reads other stories*
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the others, too! :)
Date: 11/16/09 09:41 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
I love how Tom's talking. Very gangsta.
Author's Response: Me too :) Thank you!
Date: 10/25/09 07:09 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
I'm so glad this is just fiction!
I recently read an interview where Bill was asked how he copes without sex or love.
I like your writing!
Nice work!
Author's Response: I'm glad it is too. Thank you!!!!
Date: 10/21/09 11:51 am Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
I love the idea of A-Z fics that's an awesome idea.
Now for this one. The writing is awesome. The lanuage use is also way above par for this site. You forgot lube so so so so so so important for anal sex, seriously super important it would be burning pain without lube, spit does not cut it.
But my biggest problem is that the sex is accurate but cold. I'm not sure what it's missing but it's mechanical, accurate but not emotional. I think that might be it, that it's missing emotions, but maybe not, I know it's missing somthing.
I think what might help to insert small details. Things like an involuntary tightening of hands here, and a gasp of pain or pleasure there. I know that's not 100% what is missing but I just can't put my finger on what it is.
Author's Response: It's supposed to come off as lacking, Tom's pissed he's not there for pleasure. I really appreciate your feedback, thank you for taking the time, big thank you!!!!!!
Date: 10/19/09 04:18 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Ahh! I get it. ABCs. Cooooool.
Author's Response: LOL, I hope it's cool! And thank you! :D
Date: 10/18/09 05:51 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Hmm wow that is one way to get some one to stop lol
Author's Response: LOL Thank you for reviewing!!! It is one way... ;) but if it worked there wouldn't be a need to have 25 more stories :D
Date: 10/18/09 05:12 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
geil! ure an awesome writer ;D
write moooore! :D
Author's Response: Thank you bunches!! And I totes plan on it!! Bill and Tom are too yummy to not write about ;)
Date: 10/18/09 04:45 pm Title: The beginning of a very odd relationship...
Bill's addicted to drugs and sex w/ tom replaces the sensation? Will it last?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!! And, no, sex with Tom doesn't replace the sensations it only lessons them. I can't answer the last question, though, it'd give too much away... ;)