Date: 03/12/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 I Wouldnt Be Laughing
Please resize your story image, it's a bit too large. Thank you!
Author's Response: that matters because....
Date: 03/12/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 I Wouldnt Be Laughing
Awesome story!^_^
*rates 10* =D
Date: 02/22/08 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 11POSERS ROCK MY WORLD...NOT!!!
BILL YOU'RE SUCH A BITCH!
Of course that's what I thought about Amber too so I can't really say that...
update soon please!
Date: 02/18/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 11POSERS ROCK MY WORLD...NOT!!!
I loved it!! ^^
Please write more as soon as you can!! =]
Author's Response: i promise
Date: 02/08/08 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 10 It dosent make any fuckin sense
I loooove this. I think it's great, everything.
Just a little tip, try to use more... I dont know what they are called in english, bute try to use more of these ,,,,,,,, xD Would make it easier to read :)
Besides that, I love it! :D
Author's Response: lolrnthere called comas
Date: 02/02/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 10 It dosent make any fuckin sense
I love it! great chapter. please update again soon :D
Date: 02/02/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter 10 It dosent make any fuckin sense
Love it.
Write more as soon as you can!!
Date: 01/30/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 10 It dosent make any fuckin sense
i like it!!
Date: 01/30/08 11:59 am Title: Chapter 9 lets start over
oh thats weird..
I dont see it. :(
Try to re-upload it ?
Date: 01/25/08 08:42 am Title: Chapter 9 lets start over
Hehe,write some more please. =]
Author's Response: ok well the tenth chaps up rnsomthings wrong with the windowrnand it wont show it but its right after chap 9
Date: 01/23/08 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 9 lets start over
yay! Amber is still a big bitch but not so much now... that's good. or maybe she's just pretending so Ircha will let her guard down... or maybe I should just wait for the next chapter. please update soon! :D
Author's Response: 10th chaps up even thow it dosent show it its up there
Date: 01/22/08 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 9 lets start over
cool please continue!
Date: 01/22/08 09:16 am Title: Chapter 8 olive juce
funny...continue!
Date: 01/21/08 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 7break a couple of necks to keep your love
awwwwww Tomi's in love! That's cute. And Bill's jealous and Ircha's not being her usual stand-up-to-the-world self. I love it please update soon. :D
Date: 01/20/08 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 7break a couple of necks to keep your love
wow poor ircha, amber is such a bitch
Date: 01/18/08 09:11 am Title: Chapter 7break a couple of necks to keep your love
oK kEEP iT uP i lIKE iT!!
Date: 01/15/08 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 6 You touch me like you care
i say the same thing as icecream girl says, they should share her, and ou! i just got an idea!! even if they don't share her, at least somewhere in the story have them do a threesome!! i don't know like when they're drunk or something please!!
Author's Response: i just might do that rnhm. grea idea hun thanx
Date: 01/13/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 6 You touch me like you care
Can you say awkward? poor Bill. I think they should share her personally. She's too much for Tom all alone. He'll get eaten.
Author's Response: somthing like that will probably happen but i cant make any promises cuz im a free writter i dont plan things out when it comes to story writing most of the time
Date: 01/13/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 You touch me like you care
this was an amazing chapter but i really cant wait to see what happens next:)
Date: 01/12/08 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 You touch me like you care
wow continue!