Date: 01/06/25 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 10/20/14 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
They are so cute together. Love them. The best part of this fic was them chiding and playing with eachother, being lovey-dovey and super fluffy. Bcuz the sex... I kept shouting "Add spit!!!!"... Haha. That could use some work, but it's still a cute fic. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Aw wow this is sooo old I'm surprised people are still reading it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 04/05/11 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yup. It was sexy!
Author's Response: God this is oooold xD But thank you so much :D Glad some people are still enjoying this! <3
Date: 12/09/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was the sweetest thing. I can so imagine how much stuff they would be covered with if they were to do it in a field. I can't imagine Bill allowing himself to get that dirty! :D I absolutely love reading some of your early stuff. I'm off to conquer the L's.
Author's Response: Ah man this is ooooold! And my second piece of smut, so apologies xD Thank you as always Ms M!
Date: 06/12/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved ittt
Author's Response: Oh this is such an old fic, it made me so happy to see peple are still liking it :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/04/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked how you made them act in this, with Tom being so loving and Bill wanting to be praised... typical Bill *shakeshead* XDD
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this ^___^
Date: 03/04/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwh i loved that hun! it was a brilliant story and very well written :)xX
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much hunny ^___^ I'm glad you enjoyed it :Drnrn
Date: 12/29/09 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I love your writing, I seriously do!
but the content was a little too... much for me xD I guess I still have to get used to this kind of stories xD
Author's Response: Haha it's ok, you don't have to read it! I never used to like reading stuff like this but then I was drawn into the darkside by one author and that was it for me xD Honestly, don't read if you don't want to!
Date: 10/22/09 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so sweet and hot. Great one-shot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 10/20/09 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm. You mix fluff with sexy times so so nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! :)
Date: 10/18/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
eeeeeeuuwwwwww im scared for life but ur writing was very good though
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 10/18/09 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey. I was reading over the reviews for this fic, ebcause i read it but didnt review, and i saw one that really stuck out at me.
The one where someone told you to use lube all the time.
SRSLY not necessary. Lube is important for virgins and people who arent used to it. Believe me, you did fine in this fic with NOT using it. I have several gay friends who love telling me about their lube and lube-less stories. Trust me, its possible to go without, but depending on the roughness, and how long the bottom has gone without penetration, it could hurt like you mentioned in your fic.
Regardless, its completely up to you to use it or not, its always your choice as the author. I just wanted to give you some insight. ^^
BTW, i liked the fic. Sorry i didnt review before >.>
Author's Response: Thanks for your advice, again xD I'm glad I did in fact manage to get it right. Like I've said, I'm new to writing smut so I'm still not entirely sure of the logistics of it all. Any advice is leagues useful to me! Thanks for reading and thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 10/17/09 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was cute. And hot.
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 10/17/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Hot and cute and wonderfully written. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/17/09 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
smutty smutty Em....
XD
y cnt u post this on THO.ning anyway??
i made this account just for ur fics!!
=P
Author's Response: Oh my God you did Niki? Ah you're awesome! I love you. I can't post this stuff on Ning because it doesn't allow twincest and it can't be over PG-13. Even though I kinda broke that rule with ABYS and BST (almost xD). Thanks so much for reading Niki darling Xx
Date: 10/17/09 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Really good, you've got some talent. Loved your first smut too :)
I would really love to read some first-time fic, and I think you could write a really good one :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it. I actually have a first-time smut going at the moment, I haven't looked at it for a while but I'll try get it finished soon, I just need to sort out the ideas. Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/17/09 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1
This was cute, sexy, and fun. I enjoyed the dynamics between the twins, when they were fucking, about to fuck, and just hanging out.
one suggestion though: lube.
stretching (and then actual penetration) would have been a LOT more painful than you had it in your fic if they hadn't actually used anything...
but other than that, it was pretty good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)rnrnThanks for your advice, I'm still learning the actual way smut works so your advice is wonderful! I'll keep that in mind.
Date: 10/17/09 02:13 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so awesome!
This story was sweet and sexy and fluffy; the perfect trifecta.
^_^
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)
Date: 10/17/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
You did it again, love. :)
Kudos for the use of "his baby/little brother" & "his own brother" - I'm a fan of being reminded that they're related. ;) The little bits of humor in it were also a great way of showing how natural their relationship is.Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :) rnrnI like that too, it's always nice to keep that in mind. Thanks for reading <33