Date: 10/16/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, twins. *sigh* I loved the way you wrote their bond here--they way they've become everything to each other out of necessity. Bill noticing the little things about Tom and trying to get him to do what is best for him, and then Tom refusing for the reasons he does is so poignant.
Date: 10/16/09 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Guh, that was wonderful.
Date: 10/16/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't quite know whether to be sad or happy... But this is really good, regardless.
Date: 10/16/09 09:22 am Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely. You do a great job of conveying Tom's depression, where it's not all dramatic lows, but just this constant thrum of being...off. Very well done.
Date: 10/16/09 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1
It was very beautiful. You managed to write a perfect 6AM fic.
Date: 10/16/09 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This hurt my heart.
I love you and everything you write.
Date: 10/16/09 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
You manage to turn fiction into reality for as long as I keep reading and I know sometimes short and sweet is what makes a particular story, but I did wish this could've gone on forever. Maybe it was because you wrote it at 6 in the morning and that atmosphere bled through but this fic puts me in a place a lot like the one Baby's in, and I don't mean Tom's pocket (though I wish).
He'd always be what Tom wants, but he wouldn't be what Tom really needs.
Yeah. :) I loved this.
Date: 10/16/09 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
this is such a 6am story. just the feel of it. the right amount of angst and fluff. and great to see something from you :)
Date: 10/16/09 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1
♥ Ohhhh this is so raw and honest, I love it.
Thank you, you are the best. *hugs*
I feel all snuggly now ^__^
Date: 10/16/09 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
this was beautiful.