Date: 10/15/09 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
sequel!!!!
Author's Response: Haha really? Gosh I didn't think of making a sequel o.O Maybe I shall... rnThanks so much for reading! Xx
Date: 10/15/09 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww so cute and smutty *dirty grin XD*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/15/09 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
really good, I'm looking out if you're thinking about writing anytging new ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm definitely going to be writing some more, I have written loads before, just not posted it on here and never smut. I'm writing another short one right now to post here :) Thank you!
Date: 10/15/09 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, so sweet! I love that it's not just smut, but there's romance and love in there too. I also love the buildup. I love that even though it's essentially about sex, their desire comes from this sweet love, and not just lust. :) This story is adorable.
Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm so pleased you like it! I love writing the twin's banter. I've never written smut before so I'm so happy it's a success! Thank you! Xx
Date: 10/15/09 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay, that was really good! It was very funny, and poor Bill, being denied release twice. That sucks XD
Author's Response: Haha I agree, I would help him out. Glad Tom was there to do it for him! Thank you so much for your review :) Xx
Date: 10/15/09 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
omg. I love this fic.
Please write more of these!!!
Author's Response: Oh my God! Thank you so so much! rnI'm writing something little at the moment. So keep an eye out :) rnThank you! Xx
Date: 10/15/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so very cute, sexy and funny! Nicely done :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 10/15/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1
i would love to see Tom and Bill in suits, that would make my day.
this was a nice combo of love and sex, i loved the ending! so romantic
great story
Author's Response: Ahh thank you so much! Thank you :)
Date: 10/15/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1
...and I second Ohz's opinion - more smut stories from you!
Author's Response: Haha thanks! Haha after such wonderful responses I'll definitely be writing more smut! Thank you so much <3
Date: 10/15/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
You are awesome, my dear. Smut + a bit o' love = you owning me.
On a side note, I think you're a lovely writer in general, smut or no smut.:)
Author's Response: Oh my God! Thank you so much! Gosh I've had such wonderful reviews, it's quite incredible! Right back atcha; you're awesome, thank you. <33
Date: 10/15/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Talk about hot! And this is your first smut. You did a fantastic job with detail and visualization. I was able to picture the story so well, I was there the entire time. Everything was so real, so dramatic. With being nearly caught and all - Twice for that matter. "I'll get all sandy." Hahaha, that made me laugh. There were some typing and grammar errors, but they were not even big enough to make me stop reading or forget the story. Totally want to see some more dirty works from you. Cheers to good writing, good authors, and you.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! You have no idea how happy you've made me. I'm so happy with so many awesome responses, it's just blown me away, I wasn't expecting it all. I really can't thank you enough for saying such wonderful things! I'm sorry about the typos and grammar mistakes, unfortunately grammer isn't my forte (and obviously spelling too xD) I only wrote it on one day so editing was cut to a minimum, I'll check back more next time. I'll be posting more soon :D Thank you SO much! Xx
Date: 10/15/09 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw cute! and smutty!!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3