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Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 11:30 am Title: 4. All kinds of wrong - Chapter 1

I don't think he can

Author's Response: Well, it's complicated, isn't it?

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 06:56 am Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 4

OMG so they are twins? I am dying to know exactly what is going on and who is the one that hurt Bill.

Author's Response: Seems they are. Certain things, like how both of them say that it was fate that Bill ended up at Tom's wedding, the kiss and how they felt about it, make more sense under this new light. And about who hurt Bill...I think, if you read again the previous chapters carefully, you'd be perfectly able to figure that out, but it will be revealed openly soon enough anyway.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 09:11 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue

LOL oh chee thanks XD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 06:19 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 3

awwww what the hell! XD Epic chapter, glad you posted again :3

Author's Response: YAY!! You said it was epic!! Now, the question is...who was 'he'?? and why is he back?? All this and more in the next chapters of 'early' rnrnLOL

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 11:09 am Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 3

YAY! Missing chapter! *huggles the chapter and cuddles it, feeding it skittles so it doesn't run away anymore, or convince other chapters to play hide and seek*

Author's Response: I can share the missing chapter with you, if you will share those skittles *craves them* you know the trip i have to endure to get those? at least half an hour in a car, bus takes longer.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 12:45 am Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue

oh your mean lol

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 09:33 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 2

Ahaha camel kiss! I totes wanna see that

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/09 09:29 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 2

haha camels crack me up, but why was bill calling o.o

Author's Response: You'll know that soon enough.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/09 05:33 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 2

Ooooh, secrets are about to be revealed to Erin too? I guess I can't blame her, but you know, who I think should be together... forever (sorry, Erin) :). I really wonder what exactly happened between them. You are giving tiny pieces, but nothing much. They will be drawn back together, they just can't let it go...

Broken computers really suck, so I hope you'll get yours back asap :)

Author's Response: Thanks, honey, for this review. And hell, yes, I like giving just tiny pieces of the puzzle. It wouldn't be fun otherwise. I'm not sure yet whether Bill and Tom will be together in the end or not, though.

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 09:46 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 2

I don't really have any dislike towards Erin but I'm on Bill's side for unknown reasons...Update, soon please!

Author's Response: We're all on Bill's side, even Tom, though he doesn't know it yet. Things are just...complicated. Next update will be next wednesday, if nothing goes wrong.

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 07:57 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 2

excuse me! i want to kill you.
you kept me waiting for soooo long.
i thought you'd given up on this one.
x

Author's Response: Nope, it's my computer, and college and having to slice a brain in thin bits that has me too busy and too tool-less.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 08:49 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue

Oh you just had to say that! Your making me twice as excited lol

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 07:15 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 1

damn it T_T i dont want tom to go back to erin! He loves bill i can see it >.>

Author's Response: Uh...Well, it's more complicated than that, and sometimes love is not enough. Still, Tom also loves Erin...in a way.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 06:37 pm Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 1

Oh... Buzzle pieces are finding their places here. Rape, violence.... quite a past. I feel sorry for them. They are step-brothers here or did I understood something wrong? I'm so tired that I don't even know what I'm reading anymore :D

But dark themes here and I just wish that eventually they'd know that it can work. It really can. After all, how charming ladies they might have, they will be the ones to each other.. right?

Thanks for revelation! We need that sometimes :)

Author's Response: O.O Where in hell did you understand they were stepbrothers? I'm telling you, they're not. And...sincerely, I still haven't figured out if I'll let them be together and divorce Tom, or I'll make them be lovers and Tom still married, or even make them accept it wouldn't work. Meh. There will be more stuff you'll learn in this part.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 10:41 am Title: 3. Revelations - Chapter 1

Awwww this chapter was really good hunny!

Author's Response: Was it? Oh, well, if you liked it then it was good enough.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 05:07 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 3

Ouch.... Bad memories? I think I was right about their past. Well, it was a dream and things usually are messed up in dreams, but sounds like a rough past they've had. But why Tom needed to see Bill right now? What is it? Questions, questions... And hopefully some answers again soon :)

Author's Response: Answers there will be, indeed. Problem is that answers usually lead to more, and more complicated questions.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 10:53 am Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 3

Would you really give me Georg?

I didn't think the chapter was as bad as you were leading on, though I did find it short. Can't wait for the next one...

Author's Response: I would totes give you Georg if you asked for it. We're having a threesome marriage anyway, so...

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 09:25 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 3

oooh,
somebody's angry!
i wonder who the person was in tom's dream.
*thinking hard*

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 09:25 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 3

oooh,
somebody's angry!
i wonder who the person was in tom's dream.
*thinking hard*

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 09:22 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue

im reading im reading

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