Date: 10/17/09 06:25 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
thats a good thing. keeps readers interested
Author's Response: Hopefully, though the story doesn't revolve around it completely.
Date: 10/17/09 05:58 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
true that
Author's Response: It's because I'm trying not to give away so early who's Bill and why he knows Tom. Because he does.
Date: 10/17/09 03:19 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 1
This is really interesting! I'm intrigued. :)
Quick question, though: Why does Tom have supermodel hair on the banner? lol.
Author's Response: Nice! Means I'm doing fine!rnrnQuick answer: that's Georg's hair, lightened by me, and pasted on Tom's face by Synnie, and it's because he's got normal, straight blond hair in this fic. No dreads.
Date: 10/17/09 03:00 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 1
DAMN. confuzed a little
want more
Author's Response: Meh, more will confuse you further, but...thtat's me xD
Date: 10/17/09 11:33 am Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 1
I get special pre-posting exclusives, so do I still have to give feedback here if I do it earlier? XD
Author's Response: Uh...you're not forced to do so. If you want to because I LOVE reviews and praise (because my ego is high-maintainance and needs to be stroked frequently) then do so, but you technically review before I post it xD.
Date: 10/15/09 06:31 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
No, het is okay! Don't worry about it. I have my issues with it, but I read it when I have to. I know I will like it also in a future :)
Author's Response: The main problem I have with het (apart from the fact that I believe Bill and Tom belong together) is MarySue-ing of girl characters. I want to make Erin real, not a MarySue, nor make her like myself (which is why she's a redhead, if she were blonde it would be harder not to make her like me, and I don't want two brunettes in the same story, both hitting on Tom, makes it confusing xD), which is a very common mistake too, especially writing fanfiction.
Date: 10/15/09 05:45 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
haha ok
Author's Response: No prob.
Date: 10/15/09 05:34 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
like her sex drive is missing?
Author's Response: Uh...when I figure it out I'll tell you, promise :D
Date: 10/15/09 05:33 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
You don't need criticism here, you silly girl, because I can't find anything to critizise here :).
An interesting start even if I had to bite my lip a little because of het, but it didn't matter actually at all. I liked it. Story flew smoothly and I have a feeling that this will turn out to be a good fic. Tom was so cute here, but still.. hmm.. mature, you know. Issues which are not from the world of young man, but from the world of an adult. I like it. Your style here is nice and I'll keeping eye on a next chapter :)
Author's Response: Tom is in his mid twenties, going on late twenties (probably between 25 and 28, I have yet to decide it). rnrnThe het is going to be there for quite a while, because even though the main pairing actually is Bill and Tom, Tom is getting married to that girl, so...I hope it's not bad. I wanted to avoid sex between them, but more and more, I'm realizing that I won't be able to put it out for long. rnrnThanks for reviewing, it made my day, really! And I hope you keep on liking it when it goes on :P
Date: 10/15/09 03:51 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
YAY! me either, she kind of seems like a prude to me. sorta nice.
Author's Response: She's not a prude, she's...just not feeling too high on sex right now? I'm still trying to make her tell me why, or figure it out on my own.
Date: 10/15/09 02:49 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
are you kidding me? I LOVE this already, you know how i feel about your writing. its a.w.e.s.o.m.e. i like how this story sets out and how his fiance isn't so into sex every single waking minute. I think you should keep this story and continue!
Author's Response: O.O Thanks!! I'll do what you tell me and keep updating. I personally don't like Erin that much, but she's meant to be...nice? Yeah, I think so.
Date: 10/15/09 02:34 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
I love it so far!
I've got a funny feeling Toms going to become mean *thinks* hmm..
Ahh I wanna see how Bill is in this!
Please update soon xxx
Author's Response: You'll see! Hopefully it will be unexpected...unless I'm much more transparent than I think I am. Thanks for reviewing, dear. Updates will come regularly every week, if nothing goes wrong.
Date: 10/14/09 08:17 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
Hi honey!!! (hehe, not the cat... but you know, I love cats so... xD).
Ok, ok, that was good... pretty good... I have big expectations at this fic because it's yours but don't feel very pushed :P
Big kisses to you!!!! I miss u!!!!!!!!
PD: Sorry if I have any mistake... I need my classes!!! :P
Author's Response: Lol at the big expectations. Well, man, I think I told you about this story. I hope I live up to your expectations, but meh, if I don't, don't kill me. rnrnI miss you bunches! Big kisses to you too. I'll make sure to tell you when I update.
Date: 10/14/09 06:16 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
youl have to continue :
Author's Response: I will. Promise.
Date: 10/14/09 04:28 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
You already know I like it so far. And your welcome for the banner *huggles*
Author's Response: I'm going to forcefeed you this story! And thanks again! It's totes osm :D