Date: 10/26/09 07:29 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 4
I am dying to find out who is Bill? Where does he know Tom from? What happened between them? So many questions, I can't wait to get the answers.
Author's Response: Some of them will be answered in the next part of the story, but the real thing will be revealed in the third part.
Date: 10/26/09 07:22 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 4
dude i feel bad for bill.....and there is something about toms girlfriend that irks me to no end! but i say tom was raped...>.> idk cant wait till your next post =D
Author's Response: Yeah, well, I like Erin, but meh, nobody has to like her. And man, that was pretty close to the whole deal, the rape. It's much more complicated, but...just wait and see.
Date: 10/25/09 03:53 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 3
Just to answer your question... YEAH, YOU'RE A BITCH!!!!
Why do you do this to me?? I'm an ill person (don't remember if I had to use "sick" or "ill" for flu xD) and I can't be so anxious because of an story!!!
I'll wait for the next chapter... if I survive the flu xD.
Big kisses to you, sweetie!!! Take care!! I miss you a lot!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh come on, just because you have a tiny weeny little swine flu I can't write some half decent cliffie? rnrnAnd yeah, I'm a bitch...your bitch *rawr* *slaps your ass* (I'm joking xD)
Date: 10/25/09 12:35 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
hehe i know what you mean im the same way with me and my fan fics. I just hate clifs xD
Author's Response: Yeah, we all do. Sorry *is actually not sorry at all*
Date: 10/25/09 02:12 am Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
hehehe yeah but i dont wanna wait till wednesday xD
Author's Response: Oh, well, you must understand that even though I have it all planned, I'm still writing the story, so if I posted any faster, I'd soon run out of chapters to post and then I'd either have to write real quick and forget about writing something half decent, or wait for a long while until I have more decent chapters to post.
Date: 10/24/09 05:27 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 3
More twisted plotline? Hmm, I like it :). Definitely a cliffy there, but cliffies are important sometimes. Is that woman out of her mind and messing around while she has TOM? Damn, fool lady! :-D. Nah, just kidding... I have my guesses, so we'll see if I'm right or wrong.
Erin isn't actually that annoying OFC than most are, so I can read her... at least as far as I know that eventually Bill is the one who Tom wants. Twincester till the end, what can I say :D
I guess you are givins us clues about the strong effects on Tom's and Bill's shared past? After these episodes it's clear that there is something really wrong. Bad things has happened.
Interesting...
Author's Response: Bad things, as well as twisted. And yes, things will get more fucked up in next chapter, which is the last of the first part. rnrnYou'll also know why she's avoiding Tom...you'll probably even forgive her. It's nothing big, I just didn't feel like writing het, and it was an easy way out XD, but since I'm getting them married, I can't just go and make her do something real bad to him. rnrnAlso, I don't want people to hate her, she's not a bad girl, she loves Tom, and Tom loves her, in his own way. I actually like her a lot, she's someone I'd hang out with. rnrnBut yes, there is definitely a twisted, fucked up relationship going on between Bill and Tom, and it goes deeper than it seems. rnrnThanks for the lovely review!!
Date: 10/24/09 03:00 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
same here
Author's Response: :D
Date: 10/24/09 02:26 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
ofcourse cause your the writer
Author's Response: Meh, it could be that I had no idea what's going to happen next and I'm just going with the story...Not the case.
Date: 10/24/09 01:52 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
HUMPH!
ok, still good stuff though
Author's Response: Hopefully! rnrnWith any luck, when we're further up in the story, and you look back to these chapters, it will make sense. For the moment, it seems random to anyone but me xD.
Date: 10/24/09 01:49 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 3
oi! thats so effed up! You so have to post again soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, this is only the beginning :P I post this on wednesdays and saturdays, so in four days you'll have more :D
Date: 10/24/09 01:41 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
but wednesday is sooo far away
Author's Response: Oh, come on, it's not! I believe next chapter will be rather confusing, though.
Date: 10/24/09 01:05 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 3
yes! you are a super big bitch!!!! is she having an affair? ima slap her if she is, but wouldn't tom have bill if she was?
updaaaate
Author's Response: Of course I'm a bitch. And well, I'm not telling you, but the whole Bill/Tom thing will be later, we're only in the first part of the fic. And meh, I'll update on wednesday, no worries about that.
Date: 10/24/09 10:07 am Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 3
Now I'm really curious O.o Is she pregnant??? Update soon ! :D
Author's Response: Uh...nope, not pregnant. I'll update on wednesday, as always! and YAY, if you're curious, then I'm doing something right!
Date: 10/22/09 07:54 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 2
Hi honey!!! Just two or three things...
First: I HATE YOU!!!! IT'S OFFICIAL!!!!
Second: Why do I hate you? Because I want to read moooore!!!!
Third: AND NO, I CANT WAIT UNTIL SATURDAY!!!!
mmmm more or less, I think that's all... If I think in something else, I'll let you know :P
Take care my dear!!! Love u!!!
Cheza
Author's Response: Hey, hun. rnFirst, you dont hate me, you love me, it's official. rnSecond, you love me because I'll give you MORE :DrnThird...a day and a half? yeah, you can wait. rnrnThat's all for now. Kisses :D
Date: 10/22/09 05:48 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 2
O-oh, no answers like you said.... But I thinbk this was beautiful. This really was. Clearly something happened between them and who is HE Tom mentioned? You shouldn't be worried, because tension was strong here. I'm curious, but patient what will come next. So much is already clear that they really had some issues before.
Why Tom felt like almost being afraid of Bill? Why it was so big deal for Bill that Tom remembered?
I'll keep waiting and honestly no need to worry about :)
Author's Response: Man, this is exactly why I love your reviews. You get to the point of my writing, you understand what I was trying to say and you even caught that bit of fear Tom feels towards Bill. He's actually not afraid of Bill...not completely. I think I'm soon going to change warnings and some other stuff, because the plot got changed a bit in my mind, but it's more twisted than in the beginning, so it's all good :D
Date: 10/21/09 08:35 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 2
AH! WTF oi thats just mean of you!
Author's Response: Aye, mean I am. Hope you liked it, though
Date: 10/21/09 11:18 am Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 2
I think it's safe to say Bill is Bill XD
Author's Response: Uhm...I think so...
Date: 10/19/09 09:17 am Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
Hah! It's okay, because I like to torture myself :D. I want answers, but do I NEED thm? Nah :). And you're welcome!
Author's Response: xD Yeah, about torturing yourself...I guessed that much already :P You'll get answers, just not now.
Date: 10/18/09 10:03 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 1
Oh! Now I'm curious! I'm a bit impatient, but I guess you'll tell us later how they know each pther and it's so important. Looks like Tom is already having an inner conflict here. Bill is going to mess things up big time?
Nice work and I'm waiting impatiently for some answers :)
Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry then, because next chapters will have hints, but not answers. You'll probably end up far more confused than before XD It's not until the third part of the story the open revelation of what happened (hence the name of the part, revelations :P) rnrnThanks so much, your reviews always make me smile.
Date: 10/17/09 07:52 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
yeah. that wouldn't be good
Author's Response: Not at all.