Date: 11/12/09 09:14 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
*sticks tongue out*
Author's Response: GO read! I'm in desperate need of some feedback.
Date: 11/12/09 08:42 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
iS T00!
Author's Response: Oh, you...go read next chapter and stop whinning.
Date: 11/12/09 07:40 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 3
WHAT! Oh you have to be the queen of cliff hangers! I can't wait till your next post poor tomi T_T
Author's Response: Why, yes. I'm the queen of cliffies. I love them and they love me.
Date: 11/05/09 07:12 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
nuh uh!
she's a meanie
Author's Response: Oh, come on. She's not!
Date: 11/05/09 07:08 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 2
i dont like erin that much.
but tom and bill should get together
Author's Response: Oh, come on. Erin's wonderful! what did she do to you, huh?
Date: 11/05/09 10:23 am Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
xD i tak it back your not mean your amazing!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks!!
Date: 11/04/09 10:32 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
oh your just mean!!! lol!!!! =D c can't wait till next post hehehe
Author's Response: Am not! Why does everybody call me mean and cruel? *sobs* XD Next post will be this Saturday.
Date: 11/04/09 09:26 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 2
Ok so we are getting a bit more info here. So they know each other from an orphanage. I can't wait to find out what happened that Tom felt the need to push Bill away, and what changed his mind now after he got married.
“If you keep looking at me like that, I’m going to kiss you,” Bill stated.- Interesting... seems like something went on between since Tom just chuckled and hugged him.
I can't wait to find out more.
Author's Response: What changed his mind was actually the fact that he realized Bill was there, and he was MEANT to be there. rnrnI'd also like to point out that the last time they saw each other was in the orphanage. That doesn't mean they met there. I'm not saying they did or didn't, just pointing out (and confusing you further in the meanwhile :P)rnrnThanks for the lovely lovely review!
Date: 11/04/09 06:55 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 2
Oooh!! Whatwhatwhat? Orphanagem huh? This is getting interesting.. I have a theory ion my head, but I think I'll save it and waut your story to continue. Fate, of course... And you are right; they belong together. They'll always been dragged together again.. Sweet thought :)
Author's Response: Start spilling your theory!
Date: 11/04/09 06:15 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 2
>.< damn it Tom just had to get married!!!! >.
Author's Response: Of course he had to! Makes things more twisted :D
Date: 10/29/09 10:39 am Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 1
I've never attended a wedding, so I really couldn't tell you if it was bad or not. I found it short, but I can see why (hard to write and stuff), so yeah. Can't wait for the nexr one
Author's Response: Soon, twinnie, soon.
Date: 10/28/09 08:42 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
yay
Author's Response: :]
Date: 10/28/09 08:36 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
just making a guess
Author's Response: Well, part of your guess was right. You always do that XD
Date: 10/28/09 08:28 pm Title: 2. The Wedding - Chapter 1
your wedding scene was good.
although im still a little confuzled.
is bill stalking tom?
Author's Response: Thanks! And...first, who said 'he' was Bill? And second...you'll have to wait till next chapter to know.
Date: 10/27/09 11:29 am Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 4
What if I want to be a rebel and not do my homework? And I miss getting to read this before everyone else.
Author's Response: Bad girl. I want you to do homework. And you'll get to read this before anyone else when you manage to get net before I have to post.
Date: 10/26/09 10:01 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 4
Okay, doing my homework :)
So far this has been interesting. Even if I like Erin, it's sometimes hard to concentrate on her and Tom's relationship. The reveale you made here, was a bit of surprise, so good job! Although Tom wasn't thinking that much then :D. Maybe you could have even stayed in that situation even a bit longer? (and no, I'm still not supporting het :D).
The relationship between Tom and Bill is a mystery to me. Could it be a simple ex-love affair? It sounds a little bit too simple solution. And then there is a guy, who plays big part in their past relationship. Who is he? Hard to tell... But it's definitely not a normal ex-relationship.
And oh yes, they are going to speak again, because even if Tom is afraid of Bill, he is also obsessed by him. He can't stay away, THEY can't stay away from each other.
Waiting for the next chapter again :)
Author's Response: I didn't stay long in that because it wasn't that important, it was just my way of escaping writing het-sex, because I wasn't feeling ready to do that yet (not comfortable with it, definitely). The main point in the chapter was having them be happy together for what is coming next. rnrnAlso, no, it's not as simple as an ex-lover. It was a really painful thing, and the scars go really deep. I think you're the only one that's picked up on the dude that's there, lurking, but you'll know who he is and what he did in the future. rnrnAs for Bill and Tom meeting again...they will, but not because they want.
Date: 10/26/09 09:05 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
hey at least i got them right
Author's Response: At least!
Date: 10/26/09 08:37 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 4
i think that bill is tom's twin and he fucked him over.
possibly they will talk again later in time
Author's Response: You got two out of three right. Which ones? I'm not saying.
Date: 10/26/09 07:42 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Prologue
uh oh now you got me worried! hehe
Author's Response: That's the point, my friend! XD
Date: 10/26/09 07:38 pm Title: 1. Past is back - Chapter 4
Good... Ok, now it's more than official. I hate you. But I also love you. ARGGGG IM BIPOLAR!!! ;P
I love MY chapter (yeah, MINE MINE AND MINE AGAIN muahahahaha xD) but it almost made me cry... You know the only thing I want is to see them together... but it seems you'll make me suffer a lot before that... 'cause you'll do... YOU HAVE TO!!!!! ;)
Love you girl!! I'm looking forward to seeing you!! I'll call you tomorrow when I get the tickets ;)
Author's Response: I know you do. It's a good thing it makes you feel so many things. Man, it's going to be so much fun to see your next reviews...rnrnLove yah!