Date: 10/04/11 06:32 am Title: Saved
this was a really good story!
Date: 06/24/10 07:00 pm Title: Saved
good story
but it would be nice them finally being saved i dont know lol
Date: 11/23/09 12:47 am Title: Saved
Well I'm glad it sorta worked out in the end (although they don't get rescued) but why did Bill think Tom was dead?
Date: 11/23/09 12:43 am Title: Laughter
How could they not have been found? Oh god that would be terrible. Why didn't Tom come to him when it was clear he didn't want to be alone. I hope this isn't too little too late.
Date: 11/19/09 03:42 pm Title: Laughter
That was awesome, and you write so well. This story was very unique!
Date: 11/19/09 02:20 pm Title: Saved
I'm so sad this is over! Honestly, the whole idea behind this is different and unique. I loved this chapter and how you combined smut and sweetness. I hope you decide to do a sequel!
Date: 10/14/09 06:42 am Title: Laughter
I really like this story. I was so into it that I forgot that it is not finished so when I saw the cliffhanger I was like "Aahhh" lol I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope it's Tom swimming towards Bill, plus it'll be cool to see what Tom was up to the whole time too.
Date: 10/13/09 07:30 pm Title: Laughter
This is such a unique plot! I love how you wrote this...I was able to really picture everything from the setting to Bill's emotions so well. And this cliff-hanger is evil! Can't wait to see what the next part brings!